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However parallel - a report to summarize - is to - have begun to demand, it is not the right idiom . -a report summarizing -is the correct expression Hence D is wrong.
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I answered A, thinking that 'report to summarize' sounded worse than 'report summarizing'.

But can someone explain why D's wrong?

I think begin + infinitive is idiomatically correct.
'a report to summarize,' sounds awkward in my ear, but I don't know why exactly.
does saying 'a report to' change its meaning slightly?
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verbs such as " demand" takes only the command subjunctive i.e that + bare form of the verb , with such verbs we cannot use infinitive form " to " so tht's the reason why D is out ..
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verbs such as " demand" takes only the command subjunctive i.e that + bare form of the verb , with such verbs we cannot use infinitive form " to " so tht's the reason why D is out ..


You mean B is out for the reason you said.
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Financial institutions have begun demanding that analysts design a report summarizing profit and loss data for the last five years.
(A) demanding that analysts design a report summarizing
(B) demanding analysts to design a report summarizing
(C) demanding designed reports of analysts summarizing
(D) to demand that analysts design a report to summarize
(E) to demand that analysts should design a report to summarize


I chose D over A initially.

I think the reason why A is correct is:

You don't say 'have begun to demand that...'
You say:
1. 'have begun to demand [something]...' --> e.g. '...they have begun to demand the same for themselves'
2. 'have begun to demand for [something]' --> e.g. '...have begun to demand for lower taxes'
3. 'have begun to demand from [others]'

Also, 'have begun' is used when talking about something you are doing. You have started it and you are still doing it. Example:

I have begun doing my homework.

So, in this case, 'have begun demanding that...' is a better choice.

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Financial institutions have begun demanding that analysts design a report summarizing profit and loss data for the last five years.

(A) demanding that analysts design a report summarizing
(B) demanding analysts to design a report summarizing
(C) demanding designed reports of analysts summarizing
(D) to demand that analysts design a report to summarize
(E) to demand that analysts should design a report to summarize

Do you know..? What is the correct answer?

Hint: verbs such as " demand" takes only the command subjunctive i.e that + bare form of the verb , with such verbs we cannot use infinitive form " to "


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feruz77 wrote:
Financial institutions have begun demanding that analysts design a report
summarizing
profit and loss data for the last five years.
(A) demanding that analysts design a report summarizing
(B) demanding analysts to design a report summarizing
(C) demanding designed reports of analysts summarizing
(D) to demand that analysts design a report to summarize
(E) to demand that analysts should design a report to summarize


1) began demanding - correct idiom, began to deman - incorrect idiom - D, E are out. Also, report to summanrize is wrong, as it means that the purpose of report was to summarize things.
2) C is out
3) demanding is subjunctive - so THAT is must. So B is out. Also the institiutions didnot demand directly to analysts. B is out.
ANSWER = A.
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We can't throw out D for changing the meaning unless we can show how the meaning in D is actually wrong or unintended. The two are pretty close together. I'd say the question needs a bit of rewriting.
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Hey,

This isn't the correct usage of subjunctive. bb will confirm. Here demanding is a noun modifier and have begun is verb.

Can experts chip in and guide.
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darshak1 wrote:
Hey,

This isn't the correct usage of subjunctive. bb will confirm. Here demanding is a noun modifier and have begun is verb.

Can experts chip in and guide.
daagh egmat

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This was my thought process as well. Can anyone confirm?
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feruz77 wrote:
Financial institutions have begun demanding that analysts design a report summarizing profit and loss data for the last five years.

(A) demanding that analysts design a report summarizing
(B) demanding analysts to design a report summarizing
(C) demanding designed reports of analysts summarizing
(D) to demand that analysts design a report to summarize
(E) to demand that analysts should design a report to summarize


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(Subjunctive Mood) Whenever you find verbs such as “demand,” “order,” “request,” etc., in the given sentence, you should test it for the correct grammatical form of the subjunctive mood. The use or present tense verb “design” in the sentence is correct from this point of view. The given sentence has no other error, and (A) itself can be chosen as the answer unless we find an even more elegant version among the other choices.

(B), (D) and (E) have the expressions “demand to design,” “demand design” and “demand should design,” which are inappropriate for a sentence in the subjunctive mood.

(C) has the error of using an inappropriate preposition: the grammatical phrase is “reports of analysts” and not “reports from analysts” or “reports by analysts.”

So, we can confirm (A) itself as the answer.
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This doesn't seem to be a good question (A vs. D), and the explanation doesn't help, as D does not use "demand design".

... demand that analysts design...
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(A) demanding that analysts design a report summarizing
This sounds prefect to the ear and summarizing and demanding all are in perfect sync

(B) demanding analysts to design a report summarizing
only probelm that could be spotted is the missing of that

(C) demanding designed reports of analysts summarizing
This gives us a meaning as though the reports of the analyst is required

(D) to demand that analysts design a report to summarize
summarize isn't the right use of words

(E) to demand that analysts should design a report to summarize
Similar reasoninig as D
Hence iMO A
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Between A&D

begin doing is the right idiom.
begin to do is used for specific action.

I do not consider "report summarising" vs "report to summarise" the determining factor here, although you should note there is a slight change in meaning.
A - focus is demand to design a report
B - there is a larger focus on summarising PnL

But we don't know what is the intended meaning so I didn't eliminate on this basis.
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