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29 Dec 2013, 13:07
Hello Oasis,

I would like to get my essays reviewed. I have pm'd the document. Thank you so much for your help.
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03 Jan 2014, 11:46
I'm interested in this service. Thank you very much.
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03 Jan 2014, 12:00
Hi OasisGC,

I had sent you my essays for review about six days ago but haven't heard back from you. Did you get my PM? and a chance to look at the essays? Kindly let me know.
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05 Jan 2014, 11:00
Oasis,

Are you still offering this service? Cause I had sent my essays a while ago but got no reply. Kindly let me know
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21 Jan 2014, 04:50
I got my essays reviewed by OasisGC today. The review was very detailed. OasisGC had reviewed every sentence of my 500-word essay and provided individual feedback on each on of those - with examples and comments on how to frame them in a better way (for every single sentence).
Best Service on GC.. Thanks for your time OasisGC
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27 Jan 2014, 07:10
hello OasisGC,

Thanks,
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11 Apr 2014, 00:47
Hi,

First of all thanks for this thread!

I have PMed you my profile and would like to know my chances in the mentioned B-school based on my profile evaluation.

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11 Apr 2014, 10:39
Background
• Rich experience in Design, Innovation and Competitive Product Development.
• Due to keen interest in Design in general and Transportation Design in particular, pursued Engineering education to earn Masters in Design (Product Design &Engg.) from I.I.Sc. Bangalore (Indian Institute of Science) and also pursued professional career in Vehicle Design with two Top Automotive Companies in the World and India respectively.
• Experience evolved working through corporate design gates/processes & interaction with various stakeholders and vendors; close participation through cross functional teams in business processes like product definition, product planning, market positioning & innovation activities.
• In-depth understanding of design tools & methodologies; System/Process Design & IPR landscaping.
• Undertook initiatives in multidisciplinary/multicultural environments & in navigating uncertainty/handling ambiguity, championing customer focus & multidimensional problem solving with full confidence.
• Worked as a design lead and design jury member on various professional assignments.
• Wish to integrate formal knowledge in design with a penchant for enterprise creation to start an organization devoted to creating next generation mobility solutions. An MBA education in this regard would go a long way in helping me realize this objective.

• BE (Mechanical Engineering) 2003: 70%
• Masters in Design (IISc, Bangalore) 2008: 6.9/8.0 (10 students accepted into the prestigious design program every year from a pool of 10,000+ applicants)
• GMAT: 730

Professional Experience
• Years: 6 years (as on August 2014) in the Design Studio and R&D Centre and prior 2 years (2004-2006) at General Motors.
• Profile: Responsible for Exterior Design of Next-Generation Passenger Vehicles. Several projects are in production and have been displayed in International Auto Shows.

Achievements
• Responsible for exterior design of next gen vehicles (3); responsible for design of concept vehicles (2) showcasing the future vision of the company.
• Lead the future vision activities of the department through the design function.
• Exposed to vision/pre-concept research/positioning/branding/conceptual development/production design/systems development/integration and marketing aspects of full scale product (vehicle) development.
• I have completed one full ‘level 6’ (new platform) production vehicle program with exterior and interior design.
• Lead team in simulated enterprise creation & management workshops with spectacular results.
• I also mentor junior members of the team.

Extra-Curricular
• One of the top 50 innovators selected in India Innovation Growth Program in 2014 (Partners: Department of Science and Technology Govt of India; Lockheed Martin Corporation USA; Stanford Business School; University of Austin Texas)
• I am also an active member of the design team working on CSR activities of my organization in rural school development and modernization.
• Design Jury for one of the most prestigious design competitions in India for the year 2013.

Certification:
Several relevant to Product Development and Business Development through Design, several in core competencies and allied fields.
For example:
Interpretation by Design (BMW Germany); Customer Centric Workshop by RoadsAhead Consulting India; Trend & Design by Style-Vision Asia (France); Design Thinking Action Lab (Stanfordx); Innovation & Commercialization (MITx); several core design domain courses from MITx including the X-Series Certification in Air Vehicle Design; Courses from Harvardx; etc..

Target Program:
Harvard or any one of the top 5 B Schools in the world

Planned Entry
R1 October 2014

Post MBA Goal
Vision is to start a mobility solutions company.

I wish to understand my chances to be accepted in an HBS type of program (Ivy League) and look forward to your most realistic assessment of my profile.
Sincere thanks in advance for your time and effort! And many thanks for offering such a platform for aspirants like us!
Warm Regards
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15 Apr 2014, 15:53
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Hi,

First of all thanks for this thread!

I have PMed you my profile and would like to know my chances in the mentioned B-school based on my profile evaluation.

Thanks
harryIITD

Thanks for your post, I have reverted you with PM

Please feel free to let me know if i could be of any help

Thanks
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18 Apr 2014, 11:28
I receive a lot of PMs asking me if we still offer this service or not.

I would like to let you guys know I still evaluate profiles and essays, so feel free to send the same.

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25 Jun 2014, 13:34

Little background.

8 year USMC Veteran, small state school undergrad (3.644 gpa) and 760 GMAT
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29 Jun 2014, 08:21

I will review your essays and send the same to you in next 2-3 days.

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29 Jun 2014, 08:28
Thanks so much!

I have gotten so many different opinions. I'm interested to hear what you have to say.

I started working on a completely different strategy which was suggested to me by an hbs alum of going over how my past unique experiences have paved my long term mission of becoming a social entrepreneur.

The current essay, which you have, is focused on how my unique experiences have allowed me to work with different leaders and the qualities that made them successful.

Anyways, this is a tough process!

Thanks for the help

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01 Jul 2014, 19:27
Hi

Thanks for this service. I have sent you a PM with my profile. Looking more for a profile review rather than essays. Let me know pls if you havent received it for some reason.

Thanks again!
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07 Jul 2014, 19:30
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Am an Indian Female currently in US on a H4 Visa. Undergraduation in Chemical Engineering with total 4years of work exp (1 yr in IT & 3 yrs in Banking ).Undergraduation GPA-3.7 and GMAT -590(Q-45 V27). Planning to retake the exam in September 2014. Suggest me bschools for MS Finance/MBA/MS in Mgmt for Spring/Summer 2015 intake. Target score of 680+ in the 2nd attempt
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21 Jul 2014, 11:49
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Am an Indian Female currently in US on a H4 Visa. Undergraduation in Chemical Engineering with total 4years of work exp (1 yr in IT & 3 yrs in Banking ).Undergraduation GPA-3.7 and GMAT -590(Q-45 V27). Planning to retake the exam in September 2014. Suggest me bschools for MS Finance/MBA/MS in Mgmt for Spring/Summer 2015 intake. Target score of 680+ in the 2nd attempt

Thanks for writing, I would suggest that you decide which region you wanna settle in and then start looking for schools in that region as it is the safest bet in the MBA world. Feel free to let me know once you have GMAT and chosen region to settle and then it becomes easier for me to recommend relevant schools for any program.

Good luck.

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I'm interested in this service!
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02 Nov 2014, 23:22
Hi,

I am a new joiner on GC. I would like my profile to be evaluated.

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I am a new joiner on GC. I would like my profile to be evaluated.

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Just a quick note that OasisGC is restarting his benevolent service after a short break. Thank you all for your kind feedback and patience.

Thanks bb. Happy to help.

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