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Re: Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the [#permalink]
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Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the laws of physics, would appear the same to someone on the deck of a ship moving smoothly and uniformly through the water as a person standing on land.

(A) water as a

(B) water as to a

(C) water; just as it would to

(D) water, as it would to the

(E) water; just as to the


Hi experts,

I know that option D is incorrect because 'it' is used for plural 'phenomena'.

But if this were the case -

Quote:
(B) water as to a
(D) water, as they would to the


- Then would options D and B have been equally correct? Basically what I am trying to understand is - DO WE NEED TO OMIT 'as they would' - elipsis - in such structures? And how do we decide when and what to omit; and when and what not to?

Please help.
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Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the laws of physics, would appear the same to someone on the deck of a ship moving smoothly and uniformly through the water as a person standing on land.

(A) water as a

(B) water as to a

(C) water; just as it would to

(D) water, as it would to the

(E) water; just as to the

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Hi honorable experts,
MartyTargetTestPrep, GMATNinja, GMATGuruNY, AjiteshArun, VeritasPrepHailey, BrightOutlookJenn,
I've two queries in this question.
Q1:
Is there any ellipsis word like 'appear' after the word 'would' both in choice C and D?

Q2:
People says that 'it' refers back to 'phenomena' in choice C and D logically. But as 'it' is singular and 'phenomena' is plural they don't match. My question is: how do people know that 'phenomena' is plural? So far I know that GMAC keeps a hint to understand either the pronoun is singular or plural. Unfortunately, I did not get any hints for this question :( .
Can you share your thought, please?
Thanks in advanced..
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Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the laws of physics, would appear the same to someone on the deck of a ship moving smoothly and uniformly through the water as a person standing on land.

(A) water as a X

We need to maintain the parallelism here : “…to someone…to a person standing”

(B) water as to a CORRECT

(C) water; just as it would to X

It’s unclear what the ‘it’ is referring to. Is ‘it’ the natural phenomena? Ship?

(D) water, as it would to the X

This breaks the parallelism. The ‘it’ is also unclear. A subtle detail, but the use of the article ‘the’ to signify a person whose reference is understood is also wrong.

(E) water; just as to the X

‘just as’ is wrong.
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Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the laws of physics, would appear the same to someone on the deck of a ship moving smoothly and uniformly through the water as a person standing on land.

(A) water as a

(B) water as to a

(C) water; just as it would to

(D) water, as it would to the

(E) water; just as to the

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Hi honorable experts,
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I've two queries in this question.
Q1:
Is there any ellipsis word like 'appear' after the word 'would' both in choice C and D?

Q2:
People says that 'it' refers back to 'phenomena' in choice C and D logically. But as 'it' is singular and 'phenomena' is plural they don't match. My question is: how do people know that 'phenomena' is plural? So far I know that GMAC keeps a hint to understand either the pronoun is singular or plural. Unfortunately, I did not get any hints for this question :( .
Can you share your thought, please?
Thanks in advanced..

I'm eagerly expecting feedback from my honorable experts! Appreciating your help, experts.
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Re: Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the [#permalink]
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Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the laws of physics, would appear the same to someone on the deck of a ship moving smoothly and uniformly through the water as a person standing on land.

(A) water as a

(B) water as to a

(C) water; just as it would to

(D) water, as it would to the

(E) water; just as to the

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Hi honorable experts,
MartyTargetTestPrep, GMATNinja, GMATGuruNY, AjiteshArun, VeritasPrepHailey, BrightOutlookJenn,
I've two queries in this question.
Q1:
Is there any ellipsis word like 'appear' after the word 'would' both in choice C and D?

Q2:
People says that 'it' refers back to 'phenomena' in choice C and D logically. But as 'it' is singular and 'phenomena' is plural they don't match. My question is: how do people know that 'phenomena' is plural? So far I know that GMAC keeps a hint to understand either the pronoun is singular or plural. Unfortunately, I did not get any hints for this question :( .
Can you share your thought, please?
Thanks in advanced..

I'm eagerly expecting feedback from my honorable experts! Appreciating your help, experts.


Hey TheUltimateWinner, I realise you're looking for an expert reply but see if this helps! :)

Q1 - Yes I believe there is, but they are wrong for other reasons.

Q2 - I believe the singular word is phenomenon. But when I was attempting this question, I did not focus on singular vs plural as it can sometimes be hard to devise singular vs plural for certain words. I knew this one but there is a good chance that I won't know the next one, unless GMAT somehow slips a hint sneakily. I was able to find better errors that revolved around meaning.
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Re: Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the [#permalink]
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Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the laws of physics, would appear the same to someone on the deck of a ship moving smoothly and uniformly through the water as a person standing on land.

A. water as a

B. water as to a

C. water; just as it would to

D. water, as it would to the

E. water; just as to the

ANS :

CHOICE A:

Incorrect:
The sentence has the parallelism and the idiom errors

CHOICE B:

Correct:
The two objects compared here “to someone” and “to a person” are now parallel to each other. This also rectifies the idiom error.

CHOICE C

Incorrect:
1) Semi-colon joins an Independent Clause with a Dependent Clause.
2) Singular pronoun “it” has been used to refer to plural noun “phenomena”.

CHOICE D

Incorrect:
This choice repeats the pronoun error spotted in Choice C.

CHOICE E

Incorrect:
Semicolon should be used to join two independent clause. Here, what follows semicolon is a fragment as it does not have a subject-verb pair.

hope this helps . :)



what should the alternate pronoun be in place of 'it'?
is it 'those or they'? also can you rephrase the correct sentence in D?
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Can you throw some light on option A?

This option statement effectively is "Natural Phenomena would appear the same to someone standing on the deck of a ship as a person standing on land."
Over here Natural Phenomena is compared with a person standing on a deck.
We need to compare the appearance of Natural Phenomena to someone standing on the deck of a ship to the appearance of Natural Phenomena to someone standing on land. This is conveyed clearly in option B.

Have I understood the reasoning correctly?
Please share your two cents.
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Re: Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the [#permalink]
I got the question right. Just curious about the usage of 'it' in c and d. Is 'it' referring to phenomena wrong here?
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