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gmat23579 - In short, you will get a score between 4 and 5 for such an AWA, if not less. To be honest, you still need to practice a few more essays. You drawbacks include grammar and length, areas that the e-reviewer will quickly catch and deduct score. Even though AWAs are nor rated solely on the length of the passage, you should have a passage of decent length, typically 500 words. Also, you need to fix the grammar errors. For instance, I have highlighted a few errors in your first paragraph. More importantly, you need to have a solid structure: each argumentative point either strengths or weaknesses must be separated in each paragraph rather than have a long paragraph.

The argument that simply discontinuing ElctroWave’s (incorrect spelling) deluxe lightbulb will reverse a decline in sales of the economy lightbulb and help to (parallelism error) maximise (incorrect spelling) profits is flawed. The argument fails to address other possible causes of the drop in sales, (incorrect punctuation leading to run-on sentense) it sets out a loose goal to ‘maximise’ (incorrect spelling) profits without defining what this (non-compartive demonstartive pronoun must be modified ) means, and the product under discussion has only been recently launched.
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DisciplinedPrep - thank you for your comments. Most helpful. So far my intention has been to maintain British English spelling on the AWA.
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