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# How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide

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26 Jun 2017, 08:28
Can anyone help about how the following AWA will be rated in GMAT ?

“Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they become more efficient. In colour film processing, for example, the cost of a 3-by-5-inch print fell from 50 cents for five-day service in 1970 to 20 cents for one-day service in 1984. The same principle applies to the processing of food. And since Olympic Foods will soon celebrate its 25th birthday, we can expect that our long experience will enable us to minimize costs and thus maximize profits.”

The paragraph starts with the assumption that cost of processing always goes down over time due to operational improvement. The author put forth some example to support his assumption. And based on the assumption, the author concludes that since Olympic food is reaching 25th year, they will also be able to minimize cost.

In my view, the basic assumption made by the author is flawed, because of following reasons –
1) Author has not fully evaluated the various factors impacting cost of processing - Cost of processing depends on many factor such as machine cost, labor cost, cost of consumables used for processing, usage of technology, operational efficiency etc. Improvement in operational efficiency alone doesn’t guarantee lower processing cost. Also, in order to compare two cost data at different timeline, we must also consider information on inflation and other macro-economic factors.
2) The examples used by author to support his assumption are insufficient to do so. The reduction in cost of colour film processing and food processing can be attributable to many factors stated before and doesn’t conclude that processing cost is reduced because of improvement in operational efficiency.
3) Improvement in processing cost doesn’t happen automatically over time. Lots of efforts toward improvement of all the factors mentioned above results into this improvement. If those efforts are not put, the improvement will not happen.
4) A particular trend in film processing industry may not be applicable for any other industry like food industry.

Because of the above stated reasons, concluding that Olympic food will also be able to minimize cost, only because they have spent 25 years in the industry is unjustifiable. In order to have any such view, author must evaluate whether Olympic food has improved their performance over time or not. Also, processing cost is only one element of the cost. There could be possibility that even with decrease in processing cost, the cost of product increases due to increase in higher raw material cost, high inflation, higher supply chain cost etc. Therefore, the data on these parameters also need to presented and evaluated.

As a summary, the argument is very much flawed in absence of well-thought assumption, relevant examples, right analogy and conclusion.
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02 Jul 2017, 20:58
Wow!! I understood concept of AWA very clearly ..
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14 Jul 2017, 00:45
Wow this is such a nice template. Makes it very easy for one to attempt the AWA section.
Thanks!
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18 Jul 2017, 01:22
Really helpful. Thank you.
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19 Jul 2017, 06:24
Thanks. Using the first AWA template on top, I scored 6 in AWA.

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23 Jul 2017, 15:55
This is such a great post on AWA. Can't believe it found it out now after spending around 6 months on this forum.
Amazing.
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05 Aug 2017, 05:18
This still works. I never wrote a full AWA essay or even created an outline before taking the real test. I typed out the template once everyday for 7 days straight right before the test. I also typed (copied) out sample essays previously written by others using different keyboards to get used to typing on different keyboards.

I got a 6.0 on the actual test. YMMV
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09 Aug 2017, 10:32
This strategy is awesome, I got a 6.0 too!
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24 Aug 2017, 11:04
THIS STILL WORKS.

Got a 6.0 on my AWA. God bless the creator of this template!

chineseburned wrote:
Guide to Perfect 6.0 AWA GMAT Score

Related AWA Resources:

I took the GMAT twice and scored 6.0 each time. I did put a lot of time in it the first time....too much actually. Being a non-native speaker and having not written a damn essay (of any kind) in many many years, I was very scared of the AWA. So, I went through every guide that I could find and wrote nearly 25-30 essays. Even had a friend grade them for me.....Pathetic, huh?

Anyway, for my second time, I just looked over my templates I created and wrote one of each the day before test just to refresh my memory on faster typing without making too many typos......

So, here it is....Enjoy, and please do not blame me if the 6.0 percentile goes down to 80 soon

AWA GUIDE

by Chineseburned

1. General Structure

Intro - Restate argument, point out flaws or state intention to discuss them below
1st Para - First,...
2nd Para - Second/In addition,...
3rd Para - Third/Finally,...
Conclusion - The argument is flawed/weak/unconvincing because of the above -mentioned...Ultimately, the argument can be strengthened if/by...

2. Structural Word (should be all over the essays)

1. Supporting examples - for example, to illustrate, for instance, because, specifically
2. Additional support - furthermore, in addition, similarly, just as, also, as a result, moreover
3. Importance - surely, truly, undoubtedly, clearly, in fact, most importantly
4. Contrast - on the contrary, yet, despite, rather, instead, however, although, while
5. Decide against - one cannot deny that, it could be argued that, granted, admittedly
6. Ying-yang - on the one hand/on the other hand
7. Concluding - therefore, in summary, consequently, hence, in conclusion, ultimately, in closing

3. Templates

Intro:
The argument claims that ....(restate)
Stated in this way the argument:
a) manipulates facts and conveys a distorted view of the situation
b) reveals examples of leap of faith, poor reasoning and ill-defined terminology
c) fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated
The conclusion of the argument relies on assumptions for which there is no clear evidence. Hence, the argument is weak/unconvincing and has several flaws.

1st Para:
First, the argument readily assumes that......
This statement is a stretch....
For example,...
Clearly,...
The argument could have been much clearer if it explicitly stated that...

2nd Para:
Second, the argument claims that....
This is again a very weak and unsupported claim as the argument does not demonstrate any correlation between....and...
To illustrate,...
While,...
However,....indeed....
In fact, it is not at all clear...rather....
If the argument had provided evidence that.....then the argument would have been a lot more convincing.

3rd Para:
Finally,...
(pose some questions for the argument).....Without convincing answers to these questions, one is left with the impression that the claim is more of a wishful thinking rather than substantive evidence.

Conclusion:
In conclusion, the argument is flawed for the above-mentioned reasons and is therefore unconvincing. It could be considerably strengthened if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts....
In order to assess the merits of a certain situation/decision, it is essential to have full knowledge of all contributing factors. In this particular case....
Without this information, the argument remains unsubstantiated and open to debate.

4. Going from the templates to full-fledged essays

ESSAY QUESTION:
The following appeared in the editorial section of a national news magazine:[/b]

"The rating system for electronic games is similar to the movie rating system in that it provides consumers with a quick reference so that they can determine if the subject matter and contents are appropriate. This electronic game rating system is not working because it is self regulated and the fines for violating the rating system are nominal. As a result an independent body should oversee the game industry and companies that knowingly violate the rating system should be prohibited from releasing a game for two years."

Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. Point out flaws in the argument's logic and analyze the argument's underlying assumptions. In addition, evaluate how supporting evidence is used and what evidence might counter the argument's conclusion. You may also discuss what additional evidence could be used to strengthen the argument or what changes would make the argument more logically sound.

YOUR RESPONSE:
Quote:
The argument claims that the electronic games rating system, although similar to the movie rating system, is not working because it is self regulated and violation fines are nominal, Hence, the gaming rating system should be overseen by an independent body. Stated in this way the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion relies on assumptions, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is rather weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.

First, the argument readily assumes that because the electronic game rating system is self regulated, it is not working well. This statement is a stretch and not substantiated in any way. There are numerous examples in other areas of business or commerce, where the entities are self regulated and rather successful. For instance, FIA, the Formula1 racing organization is self regulated. Yet, the sport is very popular and successful, drawing millions of spectators around the world each year. Tickets are rather expensive, races are shown on pay-per-view, and nearly all drivers are paid very well. Another example is the paralleled movie rating system that the argument mentions. The author fails to clarify whether it is working well, but it is clear that the movie rating system is pretty well received by people, who often base their decisions to go see a movie with kids or not on the movie rating. It has never been a case when someone would feel cheated by the movie rating and express disappointment afterwards. Since the movie rating system is also self regulated, it follows that this regulatory method is working pretty well and it is not obvious how it can be the reason for the poor electronic game rating system. The argument would have been much clearer if it explicitly gave examples of how the self regulatory system led to bad ratings and customer dissatisfaction.

Second, the argument claims that any violation fees for bad electronic game ratings are nominal. It thus suggests that this is yet another reason for the rating system not working. This is again a very weak and unsupported claim as the argument does not demonstrate any correlation between the monetary amount of the fines and the quality of the electronic game rating system. In fact, the argument does not even draw a parallel with the mentioned movie rating system and its violation fines. If any such correlation had been shown for the movie rating system, which supposedly works well, then the author would have sounded a bit more convincing. In addition, if the argument provided evidence that low violation fines lead to electronic game manufacturers to ignore any regulations with respect to the game rating system, the argument could have been strengthened even further.

Finally, the argument concludes that an independent body should oversee the game industry and companies that violate the rating system, should be punished. From this statement again, it is not at all clear how an independent regulatory body can do a better job than a self regulated one. Without supporting evidence and examples from other businesses where independent regulatory bodies have done a great job, one is left with the impression that the claim is more of a wishful thinking rather than substantive evidence. As a result, this conclusion has no legs to stand on.

In summary, the argument is flawed and therefore unconvincing. It could be considerably strengthened if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts. In order to assess the merits of a certain situation, it is essential to have full knowledge of all contributing factors.

5. Final tips

• During the tutorial type in a few sentences in the mock essay window to get used to the keyboard.
• Again during the tutorial, jot down on your notebook the basic structure of your essays or the opening sentences in case you get too nervous and forget them when the clock starts ticking.
• Write as much as you can. Try to write at least 500 words per essay.
• Always have the e-rater in mind as your potential reviewer. Remember that the human rater will make every effort to grade just like the e-rater. In that sense, keep your structure and volume in mind over actual quality/content.
• Be careful of spelling mistakes. Double check words that you normally know you misspell (e.g. exercise). Try to finish 2-3 minutes before time is up so you can slowly re-read your essay for the purposes of spell checking. Do not reorganize/delete sentences/paragraphs with less than 2 min left.
• No matter how great you thought your essays went, try to stay humble and focused - remember this was just a warm-up and the real stuff hasn't started yet!

Good luck!

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04 Sep 2017, 08:19
Thanks for this guide. It was so instrumental to my passing. Thanks again
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This AWA template still works. I was able to score 5.5 in AWA by developing by essay based on this template. Just go through this template a week before exam and make sure u make a sincere attempt to write essays on all your mocks. That should suffice for getting 5.5 or 6 in AWA.

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12 Sep 2017, 05:59
Great insight...definitely goes above and beyond. I used this template and got a 6.0. Needless to say, this template alone will not get you a perfect score on AWA...you still need to make a genuine effort while composing the essay. But this template is great!
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13 Sep 2017, 19:07
Thank you so much for the guide. For someone who is in a similar boat as you are - English is my second language and I don't remember the last time I wrote an essay - I found this guide incredibly assuring.
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20 Sep 2017, 18:36
Absolutely fabulous. Got 5.5. Just wrote down the template without looking at the question. Then analysed the argument and completed the template with 5 minutes remaining. Thanks a ton. You are superstar!!!!!
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27 Sep 2017, 04:26
thanks a ton for this template! I got 5.5 in my AWA
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hello, can i memorize the template and use exactly same words for most of my AWA essay?
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30 Oct 2017, 19:16
chesstitans wrote:
hello, can i memorize the template and use exactly same words for most of my AWA essay?

yes, you can. that's how I scored 6
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mvictor wrote:
chesstitans wrote:
hello, can i memorize the template and use exactly same words for most of my AWA essay?

yes, you can. that's how I scored 6

I also read a post from Magoosh that I cannot plagiarize, but use my own words except such words as "first / second / the conclusion has no legs to stand on / ...."

which part of the template I can use the exactly same words?
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chesstitans wrote:
mvictor wrote:
chesstitans wrote:
hello, can i memorize the template and use exactly same words for most of my AWA essay?

yes, you can. that's how I scored 6

I also read a post from Magoosh that I cannot plagiarize, but use my own words except such words as "first / second / the conclusion has no legs to stand on / ...."

which part of the template I can use the exactly same words?

the problem is that the structure of the essay is going to be the same for any subject. therefore, it is not a problem to use the template that was provided, as long as you fill out the gaps with your own words. Nonetheless, it is encouraged to use different wording, and as you said, come up with your own version of the "template" that you will use on the test day.
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I got a 6.0 applying your template with some personal modifications. Thank you very much!

PD: It is percentile 89 now :D
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