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# I was reading WSJ and the following sentence caught my eyes.

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I was reading WSJ and the following sentence caught my eyes. [#permalink]

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I was reading WSJ and the following sentence caught my eyes. I just created a sentence correction question out of it. Since I am preparing for the GMAT myself, I might be wrong in providing the correct answer. Please feel free to point out my flaw, if any.

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The case centers on Apple's move to change the way that publisher charged for e-books as it prepared to introduce it's first iPad in early 2010.

1. The case centers on Apple's move to change the way that publisher charged for e-books as it prepared to introduce it's first iPad in early 2010.
2. Apple's move to change the way that publisher charged for e-books as it prepared to introduce its first iPad in early 2010 is the center of the case.
3. The case centers on Apple's move to change the way in which publisher charged for e-books as Apple prepared to introduce its first iPad in early 2010.
4. The case centers on the move by Apple to change the way that publisher charged for e-books as they prepared to introduce their first iPad in early 2010.
5. Apple's move to change the way in which publisher charged for e-books as they prepared to introduce their first iPad in early 2010 is the center of the case.

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Last edited by udvranto on 08 Mar 2012, 14:18, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: A Sentence from WSJ 03/08/2012 [#permalink]

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08 Mar 2012, 13:48
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C is the least wrong answer choice of all.

The case centers on Apple's move to change the way publisher charged for e-books as Apple prepared to introduce it's first iPad in early 2010.

Correct sentence should have "change the way in which" rather than "change the way publisher" and it's should have been its.
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Concentration: Technology, Entrepreneurship
GMAT 1: 550 Q47 V20
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Re: A Sentence from WSJ 03/08/2012 [#permalink]

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08 Mar 2012, 13:53
Thanks someone79! I update the post to reflect the two mistakes.
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Re: A Sentence from WSJ 03/08/2012   [#permalink] 08 Mar 2012, 13:53
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