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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 evaluation

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Kindly evaluate my IELTS Writing Task 1, i will highly appreciate any comments and feed backs.

<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<The above graph shows the amount of time 16 - 24 years old in England spent on sports and excercise based on gender. It is clear from the chart that young women are less active as compared to men.

It signifies clearly that almost 42 % of females spent no time on sport or doing exercises, as compared to only 21 % of males. If we talk about less than 1 hour, there workout and sport routine per week ranges from 15 to 20 %.

Surprisingly the ration of workout for males and females is same as 20 % males and females workout between 1 and 3 hours a week. When we increase the time period for sport and exercise, the percentage drops to around 13% for males and 10% for females.

Lastly talking about 5 to 7 hours or more, the percentage drops drastically for females to less than 5%, although 10 to 15 % males still exercise for the above mentioned time frame. This low proportions of women involving in physical activities raises serious concerns about the female health.

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