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Thanks, though for instance in this question - https://gmatclub.com/forum/next-month-s ... l#p1867854 - option C is eliminated on the basis of punctuation, as far as I understand:

Next month, state wildlife officials are scheduled to take over the job of increasing the wolf population in the federally designated recovery area, the number of which will however ultimately be dictated by the number of prey in the area.

A. area, the number of which will however
B. area; the size of the population, however, will
C. area, however the number of wolves will
D. area; the number of which will, however,
E. area, when the size of the population will, however,


Hello,

Trying to help here...

I think what mikemcgarry said was punctuation itself does not make an option correct or incorrect, but the meaning does. When punctuation changes the meaning, so, because of the change in meaning, a choice can be correct or not.

In the example above, using comma makes the next clause refers to/explain the previous word (in this case, area). Letter A: 'the number of which' refers to 'area'....That's why is incorrect, because 'the number' is referring to area, something clearly awkward.

On the other side, using semi-colon separates two independent clauses (Letter C) giving the correct meaning: two independent information about the same theme.

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the word *it* in both A and B is ambiguous right ?
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In early Mesopotamian civilization, castor oil served not only as a laxative, but also a skin-softening lotion and it was a construction lubricant for sliding giant stone blocks over wooden rollers.

A. not only as a laxative, but also a skin-softening lotion and it was a construction
- ''it'' has two possible antecedents: ''civilization'', ''castor oil''.
B. as not only a laxative, but also a skin-softening lotion, and it was a construction
- ''it'' has two possible antecedents: ''civilization'', ''castor oil''.
C. not only as a laxative but also as a skin-softening lotion and as a construction - has no error. Hence, (C) is the right answer choice.

D. as not only a laxative but as a skin-softening lotion and in construction, as a
- does not have the complete ''not only...but also..'' structure.
E. not only as a laxative, but a skin-softening lotion and in construction, a
- does not have the complete ''not only...but also..'' structure.
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Question no. 220

In early Mesopotamian civilization, castor oil served not only as a laxative, but also a skin-softening lotion and it was a construction lubricant for sliding giant stone blocks over wooden rollers.

A. not only as a laxative, but also a skin-softening lotion and it was a construction
B. as not only a laxative, but also a skin-softening lotion, and it was a construction
C. not only as a laxative but also as a skin-softening lotion and as a construction
D. as not only a laxative but as a skin-softening lotion and in construction, as a
E. not only as a laxative, but a skin-softening lotion and in construction, a


Not only ...but also idiom is used in the sentence. Not only and but also must be followed by the same construction sentence. A, D, and E are eliminated. Option B has another problem of parallelism. "The castor oil was used as not only a laxative but also a skin-softening lotion" is good but " and it was a construction sliding giant" is not parallel in describing three uses of castor oil. The option should have said a construction sliding.
Option C has the parallelism. Not only as a .... but also as a .. and as a. The answer is C.
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Hello experts,
A prompt question, I thought that the "not only x but also y" idiom connects two elements but in this case we have not only x but also y and z" so could someone verify whether "not only .. but also.." can take as many elements as we want or is it something that I have misunderstood ?
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Re: In early Mesopotamian civilization, castor oil served not only as a la [#permalink]
If B was -
'as not only a laxative, but also a skin-softening lotion and it was a construction"
would B be considered correct then?
In this case now, but also is not being compared to a clause.
Also, what are the ways in which B could have been a correct answer here?
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Re: In early Mesopotamian civilization, castor oil served not only as a la [#permalink]
This questions tests the concepts of Idioms

Not Only X but also Y
So C fits the above idiom construction, hence is the correct answer
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Re: In early Mesopotamian civilization, castor oil served not only as a la [#permalink]
hello experts,
need an expert opinion on this,
I have seen many responses for this as why C is better than B, because "but also" has a clause and its not parallel with "not only". I don't think thats the right reason. there is an "and" and it is perfectly parallel with castor oil. so there is no clause in "but also"
I just dont like the later part-- and it was a construction lubricant for sliding giant stone blocks over wooden rollers.

for sliding souds awkward here, is it ok to use for? i think 'to slide' would have been better.
I missed it completly. B is a nice trap.
How to attempt this question and why exactly B is wrong?
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hello experts,
need an expert opinion on this,
I have seen many responses for this as why C is better than B, because "but also" has a clause and its not parallel with "not only". I don't think thats the right reason. there is an "and" and it is perfectly parallel with castor oil. so there is no clause in "but also"
I just dont like the later part-- and it was a construction lubricant for sliding giant stone blocks over wooden rollers.

for sliding souds awkward here, is it ok to use for? i think 'to slide' would have been better.
I missed it completly. B is a nice trap.
How to attempt this question and why exactly B is wrong?

(B) falls to (C) on the grounds of mainly "redundancy". Though Mikemcgarry in this post has explained very nicely why (B) is preferred over (C). You can also check this explanation by GmatNinja. There's no other way then to look for redundancy when come across such a question on the real test.
I personally fare not so well with this error type. Redundancy is something that almost always gets me, and if the sentence is doing a fair enough job of conveying the meaning and is grammatically correct, I find it tough to eliminate. So, there's no one "method" to catch redundancy. Only thing you can do is- Check which one of the two grammatically correct choices conveys the intended meaning more concisely. That's the perhaps only way my friend.
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sir please tell me why 'c' is correct?
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