ravigupta2912 wrote:
AndrewN wrote:
ravigupta2912 wrote:
“To lead” cannot be parallel to “to edify”. “To lead” is the purpose why the novelist “edifices”. If we think of these as parallel, the causality is diminished. “To lead” here is a kind of noun modifying the entire previous clause.
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AndrewN to throw some light.
Posted from my mobile deviceHello,
ravigupta2912. The second infinitive is just an alternative continuation of the main clause,
Dostoyevsky sought. That is, he sought to A and to B. When we remove the conjunction
and in this construct, it is common to see a comma in its place, whether the element in question is an infinitive, a
that clause—i.e.
When he said this, he meant that A..., that B.—or something else.
I hope that helps. Thank you for thinking to ask me.
- Andrew
Hi
AndrewN, if the subject (Dostoyevsky), sought (verb) to do 2 things (edify & lead), shouldn't those 2 things be parallel elements and hence require a conjunction? I'm very confused now. Would request if you could show more examples on this. Also in what other situations would a "comma" and "and"be interchangeable?
Regards,
Ravi
Hello, Ravi. As chance would have it, I came across the following line from a Reading passage in another test that I teach:
Diminished excellence is a condition of the world and therefore never an occasion for sorrow, whereas flawed competence comes out of character and therefore is frequently the reason for the bowed head, the furrowed brow.In place of the comma at the end could be an
and or an
or. But the author has chosen, perhaps stylistically, to list the two options for the object of the preposition (
for) in the manner above. Likewise, in the sentence about Dostoyevsky, we have an object that we need to fill in, only this time, the object follows a verb (
sought). Although I am hard-pressed to find an official GMAT™ SC example on the spot, I know I have seen a few similar questions on this forum, and I remember that the questions were categorized as 700-level. (Most people have trouble with a lesser known grammatical convention such as this one.)
I apologize for confusing you earlier. At the same time, I would say that this is such a marginally tested topic that it is not worth fussing about. Just be open to the idea that you may not have encountered certain grammatical conventions before, that human language follows a not-so-tidy pathway sometimes (leading to exceptions).
- Andrew
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