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In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh

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In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for cleaning and repair due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing on the walls.

A. due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing
B. due to moisture that tourists had exhaled, thereby raising its humidity to such levels that salt from the stone would crystallize
C. because tourists were exhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels such that salt from the stone would crystallize
D. because of moisture that was exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high as to make the salt from the stone crystallize
E. because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing

As per the OG explanation, 'them' in C and D seems to refer to 'tourists', but in E 'them' clearly refers to chambers.
Can someone please explain the concept of the pronoun reference in this case?

What I understood is that:
in the case of E tourists is the noun in the modifier 'exhaled by tourists'. So, 'tourists' loose the significance as it is out of scope for the remaining main sentence/clause. But is is the right creteria to reject the pronoun reference to noun 'tourists'.

PS: I know why the OA mentioned is correct, but need clarification on the above concept of pronoun reference.




I picked the wrong answer because of confusion of the pronoun "Them" . How I fixed the confusion is by rewriting the complete sentence by removing anything which can be removed from the sentence:

In late 1997, the chambers were closed to visitors because moisture had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing .

If we read the above sentence then we can understand that them can refer to chambers only . However, how I removed some parts from sentence is by removing either extra information or modifiers .
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Hi,

In option E - "because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing"

Isn't them an ambiguous pronoun? i.e. them has 2 possible antecedents - tourists & chambers. How do we know that them is referring to chambers?

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In option E - "because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing"

Isn't them an ambiguous pronoun? i.e. them has 2 possible antecedents - tourists & chambers. How do we know that them is referring to chambers?

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Use of THEM is not at all ambiguous if you think both Grammatically and Logically.

Answer this question--

Can humidity increase inside a tourist because that tourist is exhaling?? I guess your logical answer would be NO
Can humidity increase inside a building because a tourist is exhaling ?? I guess your logical answer would be YES

Hope the explanation would be helpful.
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In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for cleaning and repair due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing on the walls.

(A) due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing
(B) due to moisture that tourists had exhaled,thereby raising its humidity to such levels that salt from the stone would crystallize
(C) because tourists were exhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels such that salt from the stone would crystallize
(D) because of moisture that was exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high as to make the salt from the stone crystallize
(E) because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing

For option E - can anyone explain -- how can HAD RAISED be correct here when there are no two past events occurring? My understanding was past perfect can be used when two events are in the past and the earlier event takes the past perfect form.

Can anyone please explain this?
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Here is sentence structure with correct option:

In late 1997, the chambers (Independent clause - 1 starts)
inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza (modifier)
were closed
to visitors for cleaning and repair because (Independent clause - 1 ends and new IC 2 starts with because)
moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing (IC2 ends)
Exhaled is a verb-ed modifier here and that is a noun modifier referring to levels

As you can now see we clearly have later action - were closed - in simple past and had raised in past perfect to describe former of two events.

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I need some help to understand this...

I've come across many questions in GMAT sentence correction that have errors of the word "them" having the wrong reference. However, I do feel this is very subject.

For example, in OG question 30 as below, OG's explanation for answer C and D is that there is an unclear reference of "them". However, it claims that the reference in answer E is clear.

(1) is there is a way to judge if "them" is correctly referenced?
(2) should I eliminate an answer simply by the unclear reference of "them"?

In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for cleaning and repair due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing on the walls.

A. due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing
B. due to moisture that tourists had exhaled, thereby raising its humidity to such levels that salt from the stone would crystallize
C. because tourists were exhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels such that salt from the stone would crystallize
D. because of moisture that was exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high as to make the salt from the stone crystallize
E. because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing


Thank you.

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