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# It is an oversimplified view of cattle raising to say that

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11. It is an oversimplified view of cattle raising to say that all one has to do with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves, corral them and to drive them to market when the time is ripe.
(A) all one has to do with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves, corral them, and to
(B) all one has to do with cattle is to leave them alone to feed themselves, to corral them, and
(C) all one has to do with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves and then corral them and
(D) the only thing that has to be done with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves, corral them, and
(E) the only thing that has to be done with cattle is to leave them alone while they feed themselves, to corral them, and

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30 Mar 2009, 13:36
Underline is better than Bold

11. It is an oversimplified view of cattle raising to say that all one has to do with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves, corral them and to drive them to market when the time is ripe.
(A) all one has to do with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves, corral them, and to
(B) all one has to do with cattle is to leave them alone to feed themselves, to corral them, and
(C) all one has to do with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves and then corral them and
(D) the only thing that has to be done with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves, corral them, and
(E) the only thing that has to be done with cattle is to leave them alone while they feed themselves, to corral them, and
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30 Mar 2009, 13:46
If there is no typo
then D

issue is parallelism(A B E OUT)
also X,Y and Z type of format(C OUT)
it cant be X and Y and Z

right side of underlined portion is
"drive them to market when the time is ripe."

(A) all one has to do with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves, corral them, and to
(B) all one has to do with cattle is to leave them alone to feed themselves, to corral them, and
(C) all one has to do with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves and then corral them and
(D) the only thing that has to be done with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves, corral them, and
(E) the only thing that has to be done with cattle is to leave them alone while they feed themselves, to corral them, and
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30 Mar 2009, 13:49
This is an awesome Question
sc-oversimplified-view-70342.html

if I can quote SC Guru Bob here
"D has a couple of problems. It says "the only thing that has to be done..." Then it lists three verbs. "Only thing" implies one, not three. And verbs are not things. You can use an infinitive or a gerund as a noun, but not the base form of the verb."
My Question "Is C perfect with that extra AND" or "better among the choices"?

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otherwise +1 for you
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30 Mar 2009, 17:56
what about if choice D were..

D) all one has to do with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves, corral them, and drive them to market when the time is ripe.

would it still be correct ( and hence will be the best choice)

Just want to find out whether this is the only problem with D or there are other problems too...

"D has a couple of problems. It says "the only thing that has to be done..." Then it lists three verbs. "Only thing" implies one, not three. And verbs are not things. You can use an infinitive or a gerund as a noun, but not the base form of the verb."

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