honchos wrote:
It is no surprise that Riyadh, the Saudi capital where people revere birds of prey and ride camels regularly, is home to the largest hospital for falcons, a place where falcons from all over the world are treated in operating rooms, an ophthalmology department, and a pox area, and to the largest veterinary clinic for desert mammals, a place where camels and other desert species are expertly cared for.
the trick here is to understand the meaning of the question.
Riyadh is the Saudi Capital.
in Riyadh, people revere birds of prey and ride camels regularly.
Riyadh is home to the largest hospital for falcons.
In these hospitals, falcons from all over the world are treated.
How/where they are treated? in operating rooms, in an ophthalmology department, and in a pox area.
Riyadh is also home to the largest veterinary clinic for desert mammals.
In clinics for mammals, camels and other desert species are expertly cared for.
We have 2 lists:
1. Riyadh is home to the largest hospital for falcons and to the largest veterinary clinic for desert mammals - elements are parallel to each other.
an ophthalmology department, and a pox area, and to the largest veterinary - the elements of the list are properly connected.
The sentence seems to be correct as is.
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an ophthalmology department, a pox area, and
the largest veterinary clinic for desert mammals, where camels and other desert species are expertly cared for.
elements of the first list are not parallel.
2nd list is not correctly presented as well.
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an ophthalmology department, to a pox area, and to the largest veterinary clinic for desert mammals, a place where camels and other desert species are expertly cared for.
2nd list is not presented correctly.
o
to an ophthalmology department, and
to a pox area
and the largest veterinary clinic for desert mammals, a place where camels and other desert species are expertly cared for.
elements of the first list are not parallel.
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an ophthalmology department and a pox area, and
the largest veterinary clinic for desert mammals, a place where camels and other desert species are expertly cared for.
elements of the first list are not parallel.
2nd list is not correctly presented as well.
this question requires to have a good eye for details