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John’s old high school friend, who was once lively, energetic, and dynamic, is now idle, lazy,and is apathetic.


A. now idle, lazy, and is apathetic

B. now idle, lazy, and is now apathetic

C. now idle, lazy, and apathetic

D. idle now, along with being lazy and apathetic

E. idle, lazy, and apathetic now

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New post 26 Jul 2018, 03:41
+1 for C.

A. now idle, lazy, and is apathetic

B. now idle, lazy, and is now apathetic

C. now idle, lazy, and apathetic --> Correct, Maintains parallel construct

D. idle now, along with being lazy and apathetic

E. idle, lazy, and apathetic now

Hence, C.
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C imo. A is not parllel, B is not correct because of inorrect diction. D is uneccesarily wordy and E has parllelism error.

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Bunuel wrote:
John’s old high school friend, who was once lively, energetic, and dynamic, is now idle, lazy,and is apathetic.


A. now idle, lazy, and is apathetic

B. now idle, lazy, and is now apathetic

C. now idle, lazy, and apathetic

D. idle now, along with being lazy and apathetic

E. idle, lazy, and apathetic now



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Correct Choice: (C)

Explanation: Lists must be expressed in parallel form. In this case, either repeat the helping verb “is” before every term in the list, or place it only before the first term.

Choice (A) thus adds an “is” where none is needed.

Choices (B) and (E) add an unnecessary “now.”

Choice (D) completely muddies the expression by adding “along with being...”.

Only choice (C) correctly lists John’s old friend’s current attributes in the most economical and parallel way.
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Bunuel wrote:
John’s old high school friend, who was once lively, energetic, and dynamic, is now idle, lazy,and is apathetic.


A. now idle, lazy, and is apathetic

B. now idle, lazy, and is now apathetic

C. now idle, lazy, and apathetic

D. idle now, along with being lazy and apathetic

E. idle, lazy, and apathetic now


My choice is C as it uses parallel structure. It removes "is", which is not necessary for this sentence.

BTW sudarshan22,
A comma after my "is" in above sentence is correct or not.
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My choice is C as it uses parallel structure. It removes "is", which is not necessary for this sentence.

BTW sudarshan22,
A comma after my "is" in above sentence is correct or not.
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Haha, of course it is correct :lol:
"Which" clearly refers to your "is" :thumbup:
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There is some problem in underlining. Is the word'now' underlined or not? if it is not underlined, then Choice A must not have it.
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John’s old high school friend, who was once lively, energetic, and dynamic, is now idle, lazy,and is apathetic.

A. now idle, lazy, and is apathetic
B. now idle, lazy, and is now apathetic
C. now idle, lazy, and apathetic
D. idle now, along with being lazy and apathetic
E. idle, lazy, and apathetic now

Parallelism is tested in this question.

Only C makes sense
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Bunuel, "now" should be underlined. Please edit the post.
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