Manifestations of the British Empire's colonial policy in the latter half of the second millennium led to the settlement of the eastern colonies of North America, the island of Hong Kong, the bulk of the Indian subcontinent, the Cape of Good Hope in southern Africa, and the occupation of Egypt in northern Africa.
Sentence can be written as:
Manifestations led to the
Main list item 1: settlement of the
Sub-list: eastern colonies of North America, the island of Hong Kong, the bulk of the Indian subcontinent and the Cape of Good Hope in southern Africa,
Main list item 2: And occupation of Egypt in northern Africa
A. Manifestations of the British Empire's colonial policy in the latter half of the second millennium led to the settlement of the eastern colonies of North America, the island of Hong Kong, the bulk of the Indian subcontinent, the Cape of Good Hope in southern Africa, and - and is required before 'the cape of......' to separate the lists. 'Latter half.....millennium' seems to modify Policy instead of manifestations.
B. Manifestations of the British Empire's colonial policy in the latter half of the second millennium led to the settlement of the eastern colonies of North America, the island of Hong Kong, the bulk of the Indian subcontinent, the Cape of Good Hope in southern Africa, and also - Same as A. 'Also' is redundant.
C. In the latter half of the second millennium, the British Empire's colonial policy was manifested in the settlement of the eastern colonies of North America, the island of Hong Kong, the bulk of the Indian subcontinent, and the Cape of Good Hope in southern Africa, and in - Correct. Manifested in A and in B. Lists are distinguished and Parallelism is maintained. modifier is placed correctly.
D. In the latter half of the second millennium, manifestations of the British Empire's colonial policy led to the settlement of the eastern colonies of North America, the island of Hong Kong, the bulk of the Indian subcontinent, the Cape of Good Hope in southern Africa, and - Same as A however modifier error is corrected.
E. In the latter half of the second millennium, manifestations of the British Empire's colonial policy led to the settlement of the eastern colonies of North America, the island of Hong Kong, the bulk of the Indian subcontinent, the Cape of Good Hope in southern Africa, and also - Same as A however modifier error is corrected. Also is redundant.
More deep analysis is appreciated........
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