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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places.

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22 Jul 2016, 02:21
Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit

Generally, people visit museums when visiting new places. I also visit them in new places. Museums
stimulate our curiosity to the place. Without museums, we might be bored in the place. There are three
reasons I will mention why people visit museums in new places.
Primary, we can know the history of the new place in museums easily. Museums have many artificial and
historical works the place produced. They collect the works in a building, and categorize them by each age.
We can know the change of the history of the region only by walking them. While, museums explain the
works in detail. Travelers can read the explanations easily. They can get a chance to know the information by
going to the museums
Secondary, we want to save our time by visiting museums. It is convenient to visit museums. When we
travel, we can not use so much time. Time is limited in a place for travelers. We want to visit as many places
as possible. Originally, things collected in a museum were spread in a wide region. It is hard for travelers to
visit all of the places in their limited time.
Lastly, we can look at many famous works only in museums. It is impossible to look at famous paints besides
museums. For example, we think the works of Picasso are collected in museums. Actually, some people
collect his paintings, but they do not show them publicly. For this reason, when a collector sells a Picasso’s
work, many museums try to buy it. If another collector buys it, nobody knows when the painting will be sold
next. Museums give us a chance to look at the works.
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Joined: 17 Aug 2016
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17 Aug 2016, 07:05
your essay is ok..but I'd try to use more synonyms and I'd rather say first/firstly....secondly....finally in stead of primary..secondary..lastly
Re: Many people visit museums when they travel to new places.   [#permalink] 17 Aug 2016, 07:05
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