BillyZ wrote:
Many states, in search of industries that are clean, fast-growing, and pay good wages to skilled workers, are trying to attract high-technology industries.
(A) clean, fast-growing, and pay
(B) clean, grow fast, and that pay
(C) clean and fast-growing and that pay
(D) clean and grow fast, paying
(E) clean, fast-growing, and paying
(A) clean, fast-growing, and payclean = adjective
fast-growing = adjective
pay = verb
Parallelism error.
Can eliminate
Option (A)(B) clean, grow fast, and that payare clean = verb + modifier
grow fast = verb + modifier
that pay = modifier + verb
Clear parallelism error.
We would need an "and" between "are clean" and "grow fast" to make it work.
Can eliminate
Option (B)(C) clean and fast-growing and that payExactly what we need! An "and" between "clean" & "fast-growing"
We have nested parallelism here.
that "are clean" and "are fast-growing"
that "pay good wages"
Looks good let's keep
Option (C)(D) clean and grow fast, payingI was very shocked to see that only 1% of people marked Option (D).
I think everyone eliminated this option because "clean" and "grow" are not parallel. But in fact, they are perfectly parallel. -
are clean = verb + adjective
grow fast = verb + adjective
Functions "paying" could perform -
i) Verb-ing modifier :
comma + "paying" (a verb-ing modifier) modifies a previous clause but there is no clause here to modify. So this possibility is incorrect. ❌
ii) Noun modifier : A noun modifier modifies the preceding element. Logically, we want "paying" to modify "industries" but clearly that is not possible here. ❌
Can eliminate
Option (D). I'm still surprised only 1% marked this. Clearly either everyone missed this or I am over analyzing.
(E) clean, fast-growing, and payingare clean = verb + adjective
are fast-growing = verb + adjective
are paying = present continuous verb
"are paying" is just one big verb nothing more. Easy to miss!
Another reason I used was that the sentence is stating general requirements for industries not for industries
currently paying good wages
Can eliminate
Option (E).
Option (C) is the answer!
Takeaways -
i) Avoid eliminating words on incorrect parallelism blindly. Look at the whole sentence and then eliminate.
ii) It is important to check in parallel statements if verb + “verb-ing” results in an action.
Thanks for reading!