robert97 wrote:
Hi All!
Can you please review my profile?
Thank you very much!
Background and nationality: Hungarian, male, 27 years old by the time I apply.
Undergrad Information: Law degree from a Hungarian university, GPA: 4,61/5 with a summa cum laude distinction, top 15% of the class. I have received national excellence scholarships (these scholarships are given to students who have particularly high GPAs and performed certain extracurricular activities) for three semesters and national merit scholarships for all other semesters from the Hungarian Ministry of Justice and have received a Dean’s Award as well.
GMAT: aiming for 760-770
Work experience and leadership: by the time I apply I’ll have more than three years of experience working as a transactional lawyer on real estate and m&a deals at leading international law firms in Budapest, including 200-400 million EUR cross-border deals, not much leadership experience as I’m still considered a quite junior associate in the legal environment, however I have regularly coordinated different sub-tasks of a larger matter, where I had to lead and coordinate the work of my colleagues who are even more junior than me.
Community and others: now this is definetely one of my weakest points, I do not have much community experience apart from being part of a college for advanced studies during my years at university, I also have won and placed well on a couple of national competitions and participated in an international competition as well and had several internships during uni as extracurricular activities.
Post MBA goals:
Short term: switch my carrier to investment banking, as I’m definetly more interested in the finance/business side of deals than the legal side
Long term: build on my experience gained as a transactional lawyer and an investment banker and establish an m&a/transactional advisory firm in Hungary
International experience: I have studied a semester abroad as an Erasmus student, but no significant international work experience
Congratulations on your academic achievements so far. As an international applying to Wharton, you will face tougher odds than a domestic U.S. citizen, though coming from Hungary makes you part of a less well-represented Eastern European demographic (versus, say, Indian/Pakistani/Chinese/Bangladeshi, etc.).
Your profile will have fewer “known quantities” than other profiles, especially if the “big deals” that you are working on aren’t with a well known bulge-bracket international bank (e.g., Morgan Stanley, Goldman Sachs, etc.). Schools like to see these employer names on resumes because 1) it outsources some of the sifting 2) students with these names on their resumes do better in recruiting, which is ultimately what every AdCom wants since employability and salary averages weigh heavily on school ranking.
All of this means that you should study hard for the GMAT, because it may be the only apples-to-apples comparison that your candidacy allows for. There won’t be that many mega M&A Hungarian transaction lawyers, but almost every Wharton applicant will have a GMAT score, which allows for comparison across geography and discipline. If you can get the 760-770 you are angling for, you will be doing yourself a great service. (Though know that 770 GMAT scores still get rejected from Wharton every cycle).
You provided more color on your aspirations and background than many candidate eval requests (Thank you!), but we don’t know *why* you want to go into IB from the legal side. We also don’t know why you need the MBA to do it. Many people go from legal M&A roles to sell-side customer facing ones without an MBA. There is an adage in finance, “The Harvard JD is the best MBA.” You’ve been to a lot of school already. More than many other MBA hopefuls. You are going to need to demonstrate why you need an MBA to achieve your goals and how an MBA will make you better and more successful in the job you want. I can’t answer this question without talking to you, but I’d imagine that things like formal finance/accounting/operations coursework will be helpful to you and you may not have classroom experiences in these areas. Some people talk about the opportunity to hone leadership as a honed discipline (e.g., leadership treks, club management roles, etc.), but that’s not something I’d emphasize if you know that you are already weaker on the EC leadership piece.
A note on the EC leadership stuff: we get a lot of international clients who think they don’t have anything EC when in reality they have good, usable material and they just don’t realize it. For example, being part of a band, even informally, even with your church choir, for instance, can make for great essays. You don’t have to found a non-profit and raise a bottomless endowment to seem like a nice, fun person outside of the classroom. Many successful applicants write great essays about their hobbyist passion for piano or chess or karaoke or car repair. Sometimes these provide even more fertile, unique material than the boilerplate civic engagement. Think about how you spend your time outside of work - almost anything can be turned into a great essay with the right guidance and paradigm. If you literally do nothing outside of work, then start a few hobbies! All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy! You’ll be better for it if you have a life outside of work, beyond your business school application!
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