alchya wrote:
Hi experts! I would really appreciate a profile evaluation! Thanks for your help!
I am an Albanian/French (20 years old, Male, from Albanian (Father) and Algerian (Mother) immigrants/ Considered as a poor family) student.
Studies: Dual Degree; Bachelor in Management & BSc in International Business Administration
- French BS: Top 10 French Grande Ecole (Top 4 French Bachelor)
Elected as the best student of the school for my first 2 years: GPA 4/4, Special Letter Recognition from my Director of School, sort of Dean's List
- German BS: Top 3 German Bachelor IBA: GPA 4/4, Writing Thesis, Specialisation in Finance
-Exchange semester in a Top 30 US Uni: GPA 4/4: Letter from my Microeconomics professor stating that I am in the top 2% among 1,000 student in this course
Scholarships:
- 5K€ Merit scholarship from my French BS
- 15k€ Merit and Social Scholarship from the French Government
- 2k€ Merit scholarship in High School
Start-ups Founder:
- First one when I was 18 yo: Mobile App in France with 500+ subscribers, 5,000+ followers on Facebook, Partnerships with well known French companies, Organisation of huge events in South of France
Integrated one of the Best French Incubator thanks to this start-up
Almost raised 50k€ from a Business Angel (but not concluded because I had to left the company because of huge disagreement with my associate).
- Second one in the US during my exchange. Didn't work well because of COVID-19 but I took risks and initiatives by founding this start-up just after one month in the US
- Third one: Albanian Marketing Services just created 2 months ago. Huge potential, already some important clients (private schools, hospitals and companies) and 5 employees. Ambition to create huge Call Centers and a major actor of Albanian Telecom in the future.
Work Experience:
- Head of Sales Assistant in a Nationally known French High-Tech Store (2 months).
- CEO's Assistant of a national known French wine retailer company in Albania: had to manage 20 employees, had a huge impact in the company, saved 2 jobs, increased revenue by 5%. (3 months)
Future Internships:
- Big 4 Company in Albania (3 months): Risk or Management Consulting
- Ministry of Finance and Economy of Albania (1months)
- American Bank of Investment (1 months)
Volunteering:
I have done 1 year of volunteering as a French-Albanian translator in France to help Albanian immigrants.
I also have a 1 year volunteering in my B-School. I was an ambassador of the school.
Currently Ambassador of a startup class in my ex-high school
I was also the Vice-President of the School student office and I had to manage 50 people and organise events for more than 500 persons with 10k€+ budget (had to leave my position because I will pursue my third year in Germany).
I will surely join some clubs and associations for my second Bachelor in Germany.
English (C1), French (native), Albanian (C1) and Spanish (B2).
Strong letters of recommendation from the CEO of Albanian Wine company and one from my Finance professor who is also the CEO of a French Consulting Company.
Others:
- Football Team captain (2014-2018): 2 leagues won
- BasketBall Team Captain (2013): 1 Championship won
- Won the French BS Business Game
- Online Certificate Courses: Financial Markets (Yale), Introduction to Corporate Finance (Wharton), Private Equity and Venture Capital (Bocconi)
Will apply R1 if I have at least 690 on GMAT before mid October or R2. Will have difficulties to have more than 49 in Quant.
Schools aim:
HEC, Bocconi, CEMS, LSE, ESSEC
What are my chances? Thank you for your help and advice!!
Hey
alchya,
You have a pretty holistic profile.
Your academic background is excellent. A 4/4 GPA highlights your academic prowess and opens the door to most of the top business schools in the world. Moreover, It’s great to see that you have some international experience as well that you gained from the exchange program. International exposure is a highly sought after trait from business schools as it showcases your broadened perspective and ability to adapt and work well in foreign environments.
Your scholarships authenticate your academic credentials by showing a consistent scholarly record and thereby strengthen your profile.
However, while this is just half the battle won, schools are most certainly on the lookout for students who have a holistically developed prof
As for your extracurricular participation, when applying to a business master’s program the activities from undergraduate and above are generally considered by the admission committee, so please be mindful of that and dig deeper into the most recent activities that could highlight varied traits in your profile.
That said, judging from the details presented, you have a decent mix of volunteering, leadership, and team activities. All of these would strengthen your profile by portraying the possession of varied skills and project management abilities. Moreover, the impact you created in these roles would help to set you apart from the competition.
On the other hand, you also have extensive work experience that includes both entrepreneurial and leadership roles. Your startups are a great way to showcase your entrepreneurial skills and team-building capabilities. It sets you apart by showing by highlighting your risk-taking and well-rounded attributes.
While you have decent work ex so far, it must be noted that as you are targeting an MF program, having relevant work experience would strengthen your profile. Thus, make sure you bring to life the exposure to finance whilst talking about the roles and responsibilities you took, the major learning takeaways from your stints, and how you went above and beyond to bloom in these roles.
Given your school choice, all of them fall into the dream category, meaning these schools have a very stringent acceptance rate of 8-15%. That said, while your quant score works in your favor, you’d require an overall GMAT score of at least 710 to be able to target these schools.
On this note, an important strategy you must follow while applying for business schools is to target a mix of schools from the dream, competitive, and safe category.
Given your strong profile, you can target competitive schools such as ESCP, DUKE, Washington University, Brandies, ESSEC, Mannheim, and Imperial College.
Lastly, as you have a pretty holistically developed profile, you’d need to complement it with a strong application. A strong application holds 30% of weightage in the entire admission process and as you would be competing with other candidates with similar strong profiles, it becomes imperative that you craft an application that successfully highlights not only your caliber but also your potential to add value to the school.
As major chances of your admission depend on the quality of your application, inclusive of documents like your essays, resume, and LORs, I would suggest you book a FREE consultation call with our experienced consultants to strategize and build the perfect course of action for your application.
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