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# Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising

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24 Nov 2018, 08:37
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Project SC Butler: Day 18: Sentence Correction (SC2)

Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising.

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

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24 Nov 2018, 09:25
C, as in all other answer choices comparison is not correct.
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24 Nov 2018, 20:28
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Project SC Butler: Day 18: Sentence Correction (SC2)

Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising.

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

IMO C, meaning related SC question. Option C is corelative conjuction correctly used Both X & Y..

Option A, b & D have meaning error , E has co relative conjuction error as the comparison done is in correct .. and
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25 Nov 2018, 08:52
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Official Explanation :

Choices A and B incorrectly juxtapose heart patients'exercise and athletes who are exercising,not patients' exercise and athletes' exercise, a more logical pairing.

Choice C, which clarifies the comparison, is best.

Choice D and E, like choice A and B, imply a comparison between athletes who are exercising and the exercise of the heart patients.
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31 Dec 2018, 22:05
sudarshan22 wrote:

Project SC Butler: Day 18: Sentence Correction (SC2)

Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising.

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

A - exercise and exercising are not parallel - incorrect

B - exercise and exercising are not parallel - incorrect

C - all entities are parallel and the sentence conveys intended meaning

D- exercise and exercising are not parallel - incorrect

E -exercise and exercising are not parallel - incorrect
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01 Jan 2019, 23:04
It's true. It is just about the parallel check of "exercise" phrases.
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14 Jan 2019, 23:24
sudarshan22 wrote:
Official Explanation :

Choices A and B incorrectly juxtapose heart patients'exercise and athletes who are exercising,not patients' exercise and athletes' exercise, a more logical pairing.

Choice C, which clarifies the comparison, is best.

Choice D and E, like choice A and B, imply a comparison between athletes who are exercising and the exercise of the heart patients.

Wohooo I opted C for the same reasons, I thought ans must be not this much simple hence checked everything twice still was getting C for the same reason
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sudarshan22 wrote:

Project SC Butler: Day 18: Sentence Correction (SC2)

Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising.

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines. - Wrong: 1) Parallelism
2) Passive Voice

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines. - Wrong: 1) Parallelism
2) Passive Voice

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes. - Correct

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising. - Wrong: 1) Parallelism

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines. - Wrong: 1) Parallelism
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