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Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  24 Nov 2018, 08:37
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Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising.

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  25 Nov 2018, 08:52
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Choices A and B incorrectly juxtapose heart patients'exercise and athletes who are exercising,not patients' exercise and athletes' exercise, a more logical pairing.

Choice C, which clarifies the comparison, is best.

Choice D and E, like choice A and B, imply a comparison between athletes who are exercising and the exercise of the heart patients.
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  24 Nov 2018, 09:25
C, as in all other answer choices comparison is not correct.
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  24 Nov 2018, 20:28
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Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising.

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

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IMO C, meaning related SC question. Option C is corelative conjuction correctly used Both X & Y..

Option A, b & D have meaning error , E has co relative conjuction error as the comparison done is in correct .. and
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  31 Dec 2018, 22:05
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Project SC Butler: Day 18: Sentence Correction (SC2)


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Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising.

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

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A - exercise and exercising are not parallel - incorrect

B - exercise and exercising are not parallel - incorrect

C - all entities are parallel and the sentence conveys intended meaning

D- exercise and exercising are not parallel - incorrect

E -exercise and exercising are not parallel - incorrect
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  01 Jan 2019, 23:04
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It's true. It is just about the parallel check of "exercise" phrases.
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  14 Jan 2019, 23:24
sudarshan22 wrote:
Official Explanation :

Choices A and B incorrectly juxtapose heart patients'exercise and athletes who are exercising,not patients' exercise and athletes' exercise, a more logical pairing.

Choice C, which clarifies the comparison, is best.

Choice D and E, like choice A and B, imply a comparison between athletes who are exercising and the exercise of the heart patients.


Wohooo I opted C for the same reasons, I thought ans must be not this much simple hence checked everything twice still was getting C for the same reason :-D
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  12 Apr 2019, 05:18
sudarshan22 wrote:

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Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising.

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.

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(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines. - Wrong: 1) Parallelism
2) Passive Voice

(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines. - Wrong: 1) Parallelism
2) Passive Voice

(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes. - Correct

(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising. - Wrong: 1) Parallelism

(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines. - Wrong: 1) Parallelism
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  27 Jul 2020, 13:25
This problem tests on parallelism.

"heart patients' exercise" and "athletes exercising" are not parallel. The former refers to exercises and the latter refers to humans "athletes". A, B, D, E all have similar problems.

C has the correct parallelism: exercise of both heart patients and athletes. Here, "heart patients" and "athletes" are parallel.
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  26 Jun 2021, 10:00
1) I suspect how C is the right option. It conveys a different meaning.

1) A is now done by B (In the passage)
2) B is now done by A (In the option C)

are both different meanings. How is the option C correct then?
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  05 Apr 2022, 14:20
Can anyone please help,
Shouldn't it be "exercises" and not "exercise" in the correct choice.
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  09 Apr 2023, 05:44
Can anyone tell why exercising and exercise are not parallel because both are acting as noun.
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Re: Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising [#permalink] New post  12 Apr 2023, 06:02
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Can anyone tell why exercising and exercise are not parallel because both are acting as noun.


Hello Dip050701,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, "exercising" could only serve as a gerund ("verb+ing" acting as a noun) in this context, if the preceding noun "athletes" was in its possessive form.

We hope this helps.
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