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6. More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
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08 Sep 2011, 10:42
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6. More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

D can't be the OA with what it is. D is a run-on.

E makes perfect sense. Two independent clauses separated by a semicolon.

Ans: "E"
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The GMAT would not make the correct answer hinge on a superficial difference such as "entertainment centers" vs. "centers of entertainment." Semicolon vs. comma is a clear rule; therefore, the answer must be E. (Did you like my semicolon?)
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10 Sep 2011, 04:22
+1 for E. It looks like "D" is a clear case of a run on sentence. Jitbec, could you double check that the OA is correct? And as DmitryFarber stated, I have a hard time believing that GMAT would have "entertainment centers" vs. "centers of entertainment" as the only difference between two choices.

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My answer too is "E", but I am thinking why "they" cannot refer to anything else than "holidaymakers"?

Why they cannot refer anything else than "holidaymakers"? --such as what? ‘Islands’ is the only other plural noun there. Do you expect islands to seek sand, sun, palm trees?
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12 Sep 2011, 22:51
No, akbism, there's no such rule. For instance, we might say either of these:

My kids don't like olives, perhaps because they are so salty.
My kids don't like olives; in fact, they avoid all salty foods.

As in so many sentences, we have to use meaning. True, we want to reduce ambiguity when possible, and it is never wrong to repeat a noun, but the antecedent of "they" is pretty clear in this sentence.
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15 Sep 2011, 01:33
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No, akbism, there's no such rule. For instance, we might say either of these:

My kids don't like olives, perhaps because they are so salty.
My kids don't like olives; in fact, they avoid all salty foods.

As in so many sentences, we have to use meaning. True, we want to reduce ambiguity when possible, and it is never wrong to repeat a noun, but the antecedent of "they" is pretty clear in this sentence.

Hey then u must answer this qstn.

Contrary to popular belief, video games aren‘t just for killing an idle Thursday evening, in fact, a variety of recent studies have begun to demonstrate their teaching potential.

A. video games aren‘t just for killing an idle Thursday evening, in fact, a variety
of recent studies have begun to demonstrate

B. video games aren‘t just to kill an idle Thursday evening, but a variety of
recent studies, in fact, have begun to demonstrate

C. video games aren‘t just for killing an idle Thursday evening; in fact, a variety
of recent studies has begun to demonstrate

D. video games aren‘t just for killing an idle Thursday evening; in fact, a
variety of recent studies have begun to demonstrate

E. video games aren‘t just for killing an idle Thursday evening, and a variety of
recent studies have begun in demonstration of

A and D differ only by semicolon. Which one A or D ??
What one should know for such qstns.
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More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

Kindly break down each option and explain the problems associated with each.....also if somebody could point out the correct usage of a semicolon(;) and a colon(:) in a sentence, then it would be very helpful.....

You can join two independent clauses with a semicolon. These two clauses can stand on their own as complete sentences.
You join one independent clause with a dependent clause using FANBOYS and comma.

Ans E it is.
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15 Nov 2012, 01:19
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avaneeshvyas wrote:
More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

Kindly break down each option and explain the problems associated with each.....also if somebody could point out the correct usage of a semicolon(;) and a colon(:) in a sentence, then it would be very helpful.....

You can join two independent clauses with a semicolon. These two clauses can stand on their own as complete sentences.
You join one independent clause with a dependent clause using FANBOYS and comma.

Ans E it is.

Does the word seeking in option A stops the second part of the sentence from being a independent clause?

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Vips0000 wrote:
avaneeshvyas wrote:
More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

Kindly break down each option and explain the problems associated with each.....also if somebody could point out the correct usage of a semicolon(;) and a colon(:) in a sentence, then it would be very helpful.....

You can join two independent clauses with a semicolon. These two clauses can stand on their own as complete sentences.
You join one independent clause with a dependent clause using FANBOYS and comma.

Ans E it is.

Does the word seeking in option A stops the second part of the sentence from being a independent clause?

I think I'd rather pose question than answer this -

Would you consider this a complete sentence - "seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment. "
Or more technically, can you find subject and verb both? in - "seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment. "

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15 Nov 2012, 04:21
I don't think that any of the answer is correct
reason : none of the choice contains a verb, don't know if "Seek" is considered as verb to make the answer correct.
I think the clause after semi colon must have a verb and subject to make it independent clause

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15 Nov 2012, 07:54
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Can someone, please tell the difference between option D & option E

the comma and semicolon at the start.
when u replace underlined portion with choice D, its a run on sentence because of comma, on the other hand choice E being an independent clause works fine with semicolon.
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More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment : Sentence post semicolon should be complete clause. This choice is run on sentence.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment : Sentence post semicolon should be complete clause. This choice is run on sentence.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment : Changes meaning. Rather than entertainment requires comparison but in this option it is included as a choice.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers: This is independent clause and should be connected by a semicolon and not a comma.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment. BINGO!!

Kindly break down each option and explain the problems associated with each.....also if somebody could point out the correct usage of a semicolon(;) and a colon(:) in a sentence, then it would be very helpful.....

Usage of Semicolon: it connects two independent clause.
Usage of Colon: To provide additional detail of preceding clause. The details before the colon must be complete.

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I don't think that any of the answer is correct
reason : none of the choice contains a verb, don't know if "Seek" is considered as verb to make the answer correct.
I think the clause after semi colon must have a verb and subject to make it independent clause

To know whether a particular word is a verb (especially in case of past participle verb-ed) check if the subject is performing the action. If yes then it is a verb else a modifier.

You can check this link for an excellent article by egmat. It has good examples and practice problems.

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More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

Kindly break down each option and explain the problems associated with each.....also if somebody could point out the correct usage of a semicolon(;) and a colon(:) in a sentence, then it would be very helpful.....

I agree with OA as E and elimination of choices other than C. What was the reasoning behind elimination of C?

The original statement implies that holidaymakers like remote places rather than entertainment places.
C changes the meaning implying that holidaymakers like remote places where no entertainment is there.

We want an option that keeps the intended meaning of the original statement intact. Thus, C is incorrect.

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16 Nov 2012, 13:15
I think the comma in C at the start is wrong. There should not be any comma before "with". I may be wrong. But, I used meaning and that comma to eliminate answer C. Am I correct about comma?

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Can someone clarify why there isn't a pronoun error with the usage of 'they' couldn't represent 'islands' or 'holidaymakers'?

Not really..I guess both of them are parallel..

Here it is:
More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

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More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

Kindly break down each option and explain the problems associated with each.....also if somebody could point out the correct usage of a semicolon(;) and a colon(:) in a sentence, then it would be very helpful...

1: meaning analysis: more holidaymakers prefer remote islands for the islands perfect beach.
they do so because thy prefer sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

2: error analysis:
the use of -ing modifier is not wrong here. only usage of ; is problematic.
here for correcting the error , must replace the ;

3: POE
A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment. 'using "and" instead of "rather than" changes the meaning, in addition "rather than entertainment" is not the same as "and not entertainment"

C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment. is incorrect here
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers. comma splice problem here. a "," cannot joins two independent clause
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment. ";" can correctly joined two related independent clause with this condition that the second clause should explain one aspect of the previous sentence.

in the case of ; we will have a complete sentence after ; (an independent clause) . this sentence will explain one aspect of the the previous sentence.
in the case of : we will have a list that explain one aspect of the previous sentence you can replace : with "namely" and it should make sense. the second part here is dependent to the first part.
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. More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

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All the options start with semi colon ";" , hence the next part of sentence should be Independent clause.

Option D) changes the meaning hence Option E)
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. More and more holidaymakers are choosing to fly to remote islands in search of the perfect beach; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

A. ; seeking sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.
B. ; seeking sad, sun, palm trees and not entertainment.
C. , with sand, sun, palm trees and no entertainment.
D. , they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than entertainment centers.
E. ; they seek sand, sun and palm trees, rather than centers of entertainment.

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