rajatr wrote:
Much like the nobility of old, historians maintain that today's royalty is concerned primarily with the accoutrements of wealth and power.
A. Much like the nobility of old, historians maintain that today's royalty
B. Today's royalty, much like the nobility of old, it is maintained by historians,
C. Much like the nobility of old, historians maintain today's royalty
D.Historians maintain that today's royalty, much like the nobility of old,
E.Historians maintain, today's royalty, much like the nobility of old,
A. Much like the nobility of old, historians maintain that today's royalty ---- Faulty comparison
B. Today's royalty, much like the nobility of old, it is maintained by historians, --- 'it' pronoun is redundant
C. Much like the nobility of old, historians maintain today's royalty ----- Faulty comparison again
D.Historians maintain that today's royalty, much like the nobility of old, --- Right comparison
E.Historians maintain, today's royalty, much like the nobility of old --- That is needed here
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Abhinav
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