MartyTargetTestPrep wrote:
Skywalker18 wrote:
Can you help me with options A and E?
Sentence created via the use of (A):
One of the duties of the Securies and Exchange Commission is to guarantee that individual or small investors have the same information about the financial health of a company as do the large, institutional investors.This sentence conveys either of the following illogical meanings:
One of the duties of the Securities and Exchange Commission is to guarantee xyz as large institutional investors guarantee xyx.
One of the duties of the Securities and Exchange Commission is to guarantee that individual or small investors have the same information about the health of a company, as the large, institutional investors have the same information about the health of a company.
So, the above version does not effectively convey that the one of the duties of the commission is to guarantee that small investors have the information that large investors have.
Sentence created via the use of (E):
One of the duties of the Securies and Exchange Commission is to guarantee that individual or small investors have the same information about the financial health of a company as the large, institutional investors.This version is better than the version created via the use of (A), as, since it does not include "do," one could take the wording as indicating that the word "have" is understood to follow "large, institutional investors, even though "have" is not stated.
Still, the above version is a bit weak. Either of the following versions would better express what the sentence is meant to express:
One of the duties of the Securies and Exchange Commission is to guarantee that individual or small investors have the same information about the financial health of a company as is had by the large, institutional investors.One of the duties of the Securies and Exchange Commission is to guarantee that individual or small investors have the same information about the financial health of a company as the large, institutional investors have.Marty Sir,
Let me, please, ask a couple of follow-up questions:
1. Why can’t “do”, in the phrase “as
do the large, institutional investors” in choice A, can’t stand in for the verb “have”, which comes earlier in the phrase “small investors
have” ?
This way A would read “as have the large, institutional investors”, which is equal to the correct sentence you suggested later in your post.
2. In the construction “the same X as Y”, shouldn’t X and Y be logically parallel? Because E reads as “the same information as investors”, it seems to illogically imply that information and investors are similar things, doesn’t it?
You said that the meaning of A is ambiguous and thus E is preferable. However, E likewise seems to lend itself to equivocal interpretation.
Many thanks for your reply in advance.
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