warrior1991 wrote:
GMATNinja A lot of contention is going on between B and E. Though I marked B on the basis of tense parallelism (have been), why is E wrong?
Is this the tense parallelism factor that leads to E winning over B.
I also see some great explanation by
mikemcgarry ,who says both B and E are correct. But at the end of the day we have to choose one option and we must have an explanation to reject the other.
I am not getting a reason to reject E. I rejected it on the basis of my instinct.
Please enlighten.
Yeah, (B) and (E) are pretty confusing. I could swear that I'd written a long explanation of this at some point, but I think that was only in my head.
So here's that explanation that was apparently trapped in my head,
QOTD-style:
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Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the movies—less than those killed by bee stings.
(A) movies—less than those
I don't think anybody is tempted by this one. "Those" is a plural pronoun that logically needs to refer back to "people." So then we have "less than the people killed by bee stings" -- and that doesn't work, because "less" is a non-countable modifier, and "people" are definitely countable.
So (A) is out.
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(B) movies—fewer than have been
This seems fine. It sets up the comparison nicely: "seven people... have been killed by the great white shark", and that's "fewer than have been killed by bee stings." I'm not sure how we could ask for anything more from this one. Sure, you might be tempted to change this to "fewer PEOPLE than have been killed by bee stings", but it's perfectly clear without the word "people", right?
And in case you're wondering: honestly, I wouldn't waste any brain cells worrying about dashes. The world's best editors and grammar/style/usage experts don't fully agree on the correct use of dashes, and the GMAT really doesn't go crazy testing you on those nuances. More on dashes and other punctuation in
this video.
Anyway, we can keep (B).
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(C) movies, which is less than those
This is also an easy elimination: the phrase beginning with "which" can't logically modify "movies" or even "the man-eater of the movies", and "less than those" is wrong for exactly the same reasons as in answer choice (A). See above for more on that issue.
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(D) movies, a number lower than the people
We beat this answer choice to death in
this post, but the short version is that (D) is literally suggesting that the number is physically lower than the people. That doesn't make sense, unless there's a gigantic balloon printed with the number SEVEN on it in huge letters, and the people are skydiving above it. Or something.
So (D) is very much out.
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(E) movies, fewer than the ones
And here's the painfully tempting answer choice. I'm not sure if you'll find this satisfying, but I'll give it a shot.
Think about what the word "ones" means: you would only use it to refer to specific cases, right? Silly example: "I eat hundreds of burritos every year, but I particularly enjoy
the ones that are stuffed with avocado and carne asada." "The ones" is NOT a generic pronoun: it refers to a specific subset of burritos. You could translate "the ones" as "the specific burritos" in this case.
Mmm... burritos.
So in (E), "the ones" presumably refers to "the SPECIFIC people." And it's hard to make sense of the resulting sentence: "... fewer than
the specific people killed by bee stings." The sentence is clearly trying to compare the NUMBER of people killed by sharks to the NUMBER of people compared by bee stings. And (E) simply does not do that -- it seems to be making a not-very-logical comparison between the
number of people killed by sharks and the
specific people killed by bee stings.
So (B) is our winner.