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icaniwill
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   15 Jun 2012, 08:03
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icaniwill wrote:
Hi OasisGC,

I sent my profile via PM to you. Can you please evaluate it?
Thank you


Done now, Please check your PM now.

Hope the same helps you

Thanks


Thank you very much OasisGC. I greatly appreciate you for taking time to provide valuable insight.

I sent you a follow question. Hope it is okay to ask for additional information. I feel bad since this a free service.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   15 Jun 2012, 08:37
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   15 Jun 2012, 14:33
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Hi. I am yet to apply to B-school but I would need advice on how best to package my application. A summary of my profile is below:

UGPA of 2.8-3.0 on a 4 point scale (My actual is 3.48 on a 5.0 scale)
Undergrad Major: Chemical Engineering
GMAT 700-780 (Yet to take the test but I should be able to ace it easily)
TOEFL iBT: 104
WE:1.5 yrs in Project Management at a Construction firm
1 yr as a high school teacher (mandatory national service)
7 months as an Account Executive (Strategic Planning & Implementation) at a Media company
Now 2 months at a Fortune 100 FMCG as a Field Sales Manager
EC: A whole lot of leadership and volunteer activities pre and post graduation, a prestigious undergrad scholarship (Exxon to be precise)
Ethnic status: Under-represented Minority

I intend applying for fall 2014 session and I've started my preparations. I'm looking at Smith, Goizuetta, Ross and Kellog and I'm hoping I get a scholarship. I'm thinking of taking a professional certificate course in Strategic Management (made up of five courses) at Havard Extension for two reasons. The first is to expand my knowledge base in the field and secondly to serve as a boost to my application.

My questions are below:
1. Do you advise I go ahead with the HES course or are there other programs that will give me a better deal?
2. What impact do you think this would have on my B-school application?
3. Do I apply in R1, R2 or R3? I'm considering R2.
4. How do you rate my profile? What other schools do you think I should consider?

Your thoughts are highly welcomed.


Hello,

You have a PM with comprehensive personalized evaluation of your profile :) hope that helps

All the Best
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OasisGC
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   15 Jun 2012, 14:41
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icaniwill wrote:
OasisGC wrote:
icaniwill wrote:
Hi OasisGC,

I sent my profile via PM to you. Can you please evaluate it?
Thank you


Done now, Please check your PM now.

Hope the same helps you

Thanks


Thank you very much OasisGC. I greatly appreciate you for taking time to provide valuable insight.

I sent you a follow question. Hope it is okay to ask for additional information. I feel bad since this a free service.


Hi icaniwill,

Thanks very much for you words, it has been equally great interacting with you for your profile.

Glad to hear that this service helps you in your journey to MBA, I would be more than happy to answer all follow up questions :). You will hear from me in max 24-48 hours.

The more you ask questions, the happier we will be (unconditionally :) ), so hope this makes you feel comfortable to shoot questions till the time you knock of your competition and get into your dream school :)

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   15 Jun 2012, 14:48
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This is why GMAT CLUB rocks ;) :D


Hi asax,

Very rightly said, GC rocks. BB has created a culture of helping members unconditionally and we are following his steps. So as a moderator, I believe the credit goes to BB the most, he plays such a supportive role.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   17 Jun 2012, 02:29
Hi OasisGC, do you think you can help me evaluate my profile? I have started a thread for mine at the following link
south-east-asian-chinese-male-profile-review-134581.html

Will greatly appreciate you taking your time to go through it and giving me some critical evaluation. :)
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Varun84
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   17 Jun 2012, 05:38
I'm interested. PM sent.

Thanks.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   17 Jun 2012, 21:16
I would be interested in getting my essays reviewed and profile evaluated. I have not completed by essays yet but will PM you once I have done so. Thank you in advance. Kudos to you for offering such a service.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   21 Jun 2012, 03:10
Hi OasisGC

I'd like a profile review. Will PM you. Hope to hear from you soon
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   21 Jun 2012, 11:27
I am very much interested in getting an evaluation on my profile!

Thank you!
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   23 Jun 2012, 00:44
Dear Oasis,

This is to thank you for critically reviewing my essays. The reworked essays look very different and convincing now. Your comments and broad themeatic suggestions helps in understanding the requirments of the adcom maintaining the originality of writing style of the applicant.

Thanks again for your unconditional assistanace.

Regards
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   23 Jun 2012, 03:20
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2869 wrote:
Dear Oasis,

This is to thank you for critically reviewing my essays. The reworked essays look very different and convincing now. Your comments and broad themeatic suggestions helps in understanding the requirments of the adcom maintaining the originality of writing style of the applicant.

Thanks again for your unconditional assistanace.

Regards


Hello,

Happy to hear that my review has helped you :) , feel free to come back to me for any help needed

Wish you all the very best and keep us posted about your success.
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kidchaos
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   04 Jul 2012, 22:24
Hi Oasis,

I have PMd you my profile last night. Hope to hear back from you soon. Happy 4th of July.

Thanks for taking time out to do this.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   04 Jul 2012, 23:29
Oasis,
I am interested in getting my essays reviewed but I haven't started since I am getting ready to take the GMAT first. Is that ok? Can I send them to you when I am ready?
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   05 Jul 2012, 03:16
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Oasis,
I am interested in getting my essays reviewed but I haven't started since I am getting ready to take the GMAT first. Is that ok? Can I send them to you when I am ready?


Hello,

Glad to hear from you, you can send the same at your comfort

thanks
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   17 Jul 2012, 01:30
Hi OasisGC,

I sent my details today. I am interested in getting a quick profile review and whether its suitable for the school that I am aiming for. Thanks in advance.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   18 Jul 2012, 08:13
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Hi OasisGC,

I sent my details today. I am interested in getting a quick profile review and whether its suitable for the school that I am aiming for. Thanks in advance.



Hello,

You have a PM with your profile review.

Thanks
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   30 Jul 2012, 22:41
Hi OasisGC,

I drafted the essays for ISB. Could you please take a look and suggest for any futher modifications..:) Thanks in advance.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   31 Jul 2012, 00:19
Great effort GC. Just what many of us were looking for. Have sent you a PM for some clarifications, post which I will have a clarity on way forward. Kudos to u
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post   01 Aug 2012, 10:44
Hi Oasis,

I would be very interested in a couple of essay reviews for HBS. If it is all right with you, I can PM you my essays.

Thanks a lot.

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