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IMO B
tired and wanting are parallel and logical.
tired is a past participle and wanting is a present participle and they are perfectly parallel in terms of meaning.
Here is a OG question which uses and elaborates the idea!
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You are right thisis the perfect example of how a change in the tense is used to make proper sense.
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Could somebody tell me why is D not acceptable
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Could somebody tell me why is D not acceptable


Please look at the part of the sentence after comma.

The football team, tired after four hours of practice and wanted to reach home quickly, will take a short cut. The events are in past tense and hence you can't have a future tense here.
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davidfrank: Please read D again; You have wrongly transcribed it. it is not – “and wanted to reach home quickly” as you have stated. The correct version in D is - and wanting to reach home quickly” – ‘tired after’ is a past participle, with no sense of tense. “Wanting to reach home” a present participle, again without any sense of tense. Wanting to reach home and wanted to reach home are totally different. Don’t you think d has some hold to consider?
But still to say so definitely that the tired team will be wanting to go home quickly and will take a short cut,( as if the author decides for the team) looks a bit fancying than real. This is my feeling.
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davidfrank: Please read D again; You have wrongly transcribed it. it is not – “and wanted to reach home quickly” as you have stated. The correct version in D is - and wanting to reach home quickly” – ‘tired after’ is a past participle, with no sense of tense. “Wanting to reach home” a present participle, again without any sense of tense. Wanting to reach home and wanted to reach home are totally different. Don’t you think d has some hold to consider?
But still to say so definitely that the tired team will be wanting to go home quickly and will take a short cut,( as if the author decides for the team) looks a bit fancying than real. This is my feeling.


@Daagh-I really made a mess of the modifiers...apologise....but the outcome "tired after four hours of practice and wanting to reach home quickly, will take a short cut." Please excuse for the typo error but I did point out the error that you can't use future tense for the past event.
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david, I fully agree with you; It looks like saying, I ate tomorrow.
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the outcome "tired after four hours of practice and wanting to reach home quickly, will take a short cut." Please excuse for the typo error but I did point out the error that you can't use future tense for the past event.


It depends on the context actually. For example following would be correct:

Hurt after loosing the last elections but raring to try again, the candidate with seek a re-election.
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The football team, tired after four hours of practice and wanted to reach home quickly, took a short cut.

A. tired after four hours of practice and wanted to reach home quickly, took a short cut.
B. tired after four hours of practice and wanting to reach home quickly, took a short cut.
C. tired after four hours of practice and because they wanted to reach home quickly, took a short cut.
D. tired after four hours of practice and wanting to reach home quickly, will take a short cut.
E. tiring after four hours of practice and wanting to reach home quickly, took a short cut.


I love this question so much.

Verb-ed VS Verb-ing modifier

*Verb-ed: "tired" is correct. But "wanted" is wrong. The football team was tired, but it was not wanted :). ==> Verb-ing modifier: "wanting" is correct. Only B and D remain.

D is wrong because it change the intended meaning by using future tense "will take a short cut"

B is correct.
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3. Adjectives. Past Participles, and Present Participles fused as adjectives - Sentence correction guide Manhattan GMAT page 202

A mastodon carcass, thawed only once AND still fresh, is on display.

Both thawed and fresh describe carcass. Thawed is a past participle, whereas fresh is an adjective.
However, they are parallel to each other, since they both are functioning here as adjectives to modify a noun.

Only a few feet wide BUT spanning a continent, the railroad changed history.
Both wide and spanning describe the railroad. Wide is an adjective, whereas spanning is a present participle.
However, in this context, they are parallel to each other.
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