Hi,
Would you please read my SOP mentioned below and give your valuable feedback? Would be huge help! Thanks
SOP – Points
Course – MBA/MS-Healthcare Management
A one page, double spaced, typed essay outlining the applicant’s academic interests and goals.
1. My association with Healthcare began when I was born to a doctor. I grew up watching him heal patients and give sweets to their children. My father organizes medical camps and provides low cost treatments to the poor. This has inspired me to pursue a career in Healthcare, and work especially for the underprivileged. Once I gain relevant work experience, we would team up with more doctors and start our own Public Health NGO.
2. While pursuing my Engineering is Food Technology, I got wide exposure to various aspects of Food Science, Nutrition, Quality Analysis, and Biochemistry. I understood how food affects our bodies and how important it is to manage our dietary intakes. I want to couple my background in Food Science with Healthcare Management and work on diseases like malnutrition, obesity, diabetes, and heart problems.
3. Once, I suffered from depression and took to spiritual awareness to heal myself. I pursued a course called Post Graduate Diploma in Value Education and Spirituality, under the leadership of Brahma Kumaris. I learned that our emotional health is nourished by values, meditation and spiritual practices. A masters program in healthcare management would give me a platform where I can explore this subject and use it to heal masses suffering from psychosomatic diseases and depression, anxiety, anger, frustration, blood pressure problems etc.
4. When I worked with digital media companies as Creative Writer and Copywriter for 2.5 years, I wrote articles, blogs, managed social media forums and content on a mobile site. I strongly believe that the Healthcare industry must tap the mobile media. A poor man should be able to dial a number and enquire about what his symptoms could probably mean, which hospital could offer him a low-cost treatment etc. Common man can be educated about health by using the mobile media effectively.
I want to study management subjects like Marketing management, Organizational behavior, Financial management, Accounting, and Strategic management which are covered in your curriculum. Deeper knowledge into these subjects would help me initiate mobile health projects in future.