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Hi Folks!
Let us continue our series of articles. Today we will crack open another myth.





SOURCE OF THIS MYTH


This myth seems to have its origins in the rule that the subject of a sentence cannot lie inside a prepositional phrase. Test takers mistakenly extend this rule to pronoun usage.

LET’S DEBUNK THIS MYTH


We know that a subject cannot lie inside a prepositional phrase. However, a pronoun can refer to any noun in the sentence as long as the reference is unique and logical. Let us now look at some examples.

Simple example 1: King George is the ruler of the largest empire, its size as large as a continent.

What are the possible antecedents for the pronoun “its” in the above sentence?

“empire, continent”.

Now consider the following sentences and see which of them make sense in the context of the given sentence.
a. King George is the ruler of the largest empire, the empire’s size as large as a continent. (Makes perfect sense.)
b. King George is the ruler of the largest empire, the continent’s size as large as a continent. (This sentence doesn’t sound logical. Why does a continent come into the picture all of a sudden?)

As you can see only “empire” is the logical antecedent of the pronoun “its” in the above sentence.

Therefore the pronoun “its” unambiguously refers to “empire”



Now notice carefully that “empire” is in a prepositional phrase. (The ruler of the largest empire).

This example illustrates that a pronoun can refer to a noun inside a prepositional phrase.

However, this need not always be the case. Consider the following example.

Simple example 2: The tail of a monkey has more muscles in it than that of any other animal.

In this sentence, “tail”, “monkey” and “animal” are the possible antecedents to the pronoun “it”.

However, the pronoun “it” refers to “tail” and not “monkey” or “animal” (“it” cannot refer to “monkey” because “The tail of a monkey has more muscles in monkey” doesn’t make sense. We can rule out “animal” on a similar reasoning.)



Observe that in this case, the pronoun “it” refers to the head of the noun phrase (tail of a monkey) and not the noun inside the prepositional phrase.

Now let us look at an Official sentence.

Official Sentence: The intricate structure of the compound insect eye, with its hundreds of miniature eyes called ommatidia, helps explain why scientists have assumed that it evolved independently of the vertebrate eye. (OG13 #07)

This is an official sentence.

The possible antecedents of the pronoun “it” are “intricate structure, compound insect eye, and vertebrate eye”

Now consider the following sentences.
a. The intricate structure of the compound insect eye helps explain why scientists have assumed that the intricate structure evolved independently of the vertebrate eye. (Something doesn’t sound right here. It’s like saying “The mileage of cars increased over the years independent of the bicycle”. We are basically saying that the property of one thing has developed independent of a different thing altogether. It makes more sense to say “a thing developed independent of another thing”, not its property.)
b. The intricate structure of the compound insect eye helps explain why scientists have assumed that the compound insect eye evolved independently of the vertebrate eye. (This makes perfect sense).
c. The intricate structure of the compound insect eye helps explain why scientists have assumed that the vertebrate eye evolved independently of the vertebrate eye. (This is not even logical).

So there is only one logical antecedent (compound insect eye) for the pronoun “it” in this sentence.



Therefore the sentence is correct.

Once again, note that the pronoun refers to the noun (compound insect eye) inside a prepositional phrase.

SUMMARY


To summarize, wherever a pronoun is used, we replace the pronoun with the possible antecedents and check if the sentences make sense.
If no antecedents make sense, we say there is no logical antecedent to the pronoun.
If more than one antecedent makes sense, we say that there is pronoun ambiguity in the sentence.



TAKEAWAY







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Hello all!

Let us debunk the final myth in this series of fact revealing articles! :)





SOURCE OF THIS MYTH


This could have emerged from a misinterpretation of the word “antecedent” (which literally means something that comes before).

LET’S DEBUNK THIS MYTH


Once again, we need to keep in mind that the only underlying principle behind pronoun usage is that “There should be a unique noun to which the pronoun can refer and the reference should be logical.”

The position of the noun doesn’t matter. (Even though we call it an antecedent).

Simple Example 1: Although it is a big firm, ABC Corporation rarely recruits from top colleges.

Observe that there is only one possible antecedent “ABC Corporation” for the pronoun “it”.



Therefore the pronoun “it” unambiguously refers to “ABC Corporation”, even though the pronoun “it” appears before the noun “ABC Corporation”.

Simple Example 2: Despite the excitement in his life, Sherlock Holmes retired to the Sussex Downs to take up beekeeping.

Observe that there is only one singular masculine noun in this sentence.



Therefore the pronoun “his” refers to the noun “Sherlock Holmes” and the sentence is grammatically correct, even though the pronoun “his” comes before the antecedent “Sherlock Holmes”.

This is because the only underlying principle (as we have seen already) in pronoun usage is “A pronoun should have only one Logical Antecedent.” The position of the antecedent is irrelevant.

Official Sentence 1: His studies of ice-polished rocks in his Alpine homeland, far outside the range of present-day glaciers, led Louis Agassiz in 1837 to propose the concept of an age in which great ice sheets existed in what are now temperate areas. (OG13 #72)

This is an official sentence where the pronoun precedes the antecedent. The pronoun “his” properly and unambiguously refers to the noun “Louis Agassiz”.



This sentence once again reiterates that the placement of antecedent doesn’t matter and that the underlying principle of pronoun usage is “A pronoun should have only one Logical Antecedent.

Official Sentence 2: As its sales of computer products have surpassed those of measuring instruments, the company has become increasingly willing to compete for the mass market sales it would in the past have conceded to rivals. (OG12 #07)

This is a correct official sentence.



The pronoun “its” unambiguously refers to the noun “company”. Observe that there are no other singular nouns in the sentence.


FACT TO BE NOTED










TAKEAWAYS



We have now reached the end of this long series of myth debunking articles. Let us now recap the gist of this whole series.







I hope this article helps you guys in understanding the meaning of a sentence quickly and without any ambiguity.

Cheers!! :)
Krishna

P.S: We’ll soon come up with an article which presents a framework to evaluate the usage of pronouns in a sentence.

EXERCISE


In each of the following sentences, try to identify if the pronoun usage is correct and the possible logical antecedent(s) for each pronoun.

    i. Once they had seen the report from the medical examiner, the investigators had no doubt that the body recovered from the river was that of the man who had attempted to escape from the state prison.
    ii. The gyrfalcon has survived a close brush with extinction; its numbers are now five times greater than when the use of DDT was sharply restricted in the 1970s
    iii. The White Tiger of the Snow Capped Everest Mountain prefers to stay inside caves because it has inadequate fur to protect itself from the freezing climate of the Himalayan region.
    iv. The White Tiger is nicknamed “the Lightning” because it moves very quickly.
    v. The increase in the vulnerability of an average user to malicious attacks didn’t escape the notice of Computer Security Experts who say that it might be due to the onset of the much feared intelligent virus “AvaNova”, the IQ of which exceeds 170.

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Wonderful article. Thanks!

I have a doubt on one of the options:

c. A solar flare emitted by the Sun can destroy a communication satellite because scientists estimated that its temperature is high enough to accelerate further damage.

Shouldn't the tense in dependent clause be " scientists have estimated", since, IC contains "can" which is in simple future tense. I just can't stop myself from doing analysis on each and every sentence nowadays. :)

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Every student must put more effort while studying it because if a student doesn’t have a good grasp on the concept of fractions, they will face difficulty in understanding Algebra.

The reference of "it" is correct->concept of fractions, but "they" incorrectly refers to singular student.
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'it' refers to the noun 'concept of fractions'; the usage of 'they' is incorrect as there is no plural noun in the above IC
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Added the final myth - 4th and the concluding part of this pronoun series. Be sure to look at all the 4 myths together to get absolute clarity.
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Combined all the articles in this series and added a single pdf! :)

Thanks! :)
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i. Once they had seen the report from the medical examiner, the investigators had no doubt that the body recovered from the river was that of the man who had attempted to escape from the state prison.
‘they’ refers to the investigators. No other plural noun is there in the above IC

ii. The gyrfalcon has survived a close brush with extinction; its numbers are now five times greater than when the use of DDT was sharply restricted in the 1970s
The usage of 'its' is wrong as "gyrfalcon' is singular. The correct sentence can be
The gyrfalcon has survived a close brush with extinction; its number is now five times greater than when the use of DDT was sharply restricted in the 1970s

iii. The White Tiger of the Snow Capped Everest Mountain prefers to stay inside caves because it has inadequate fur to protect itself from the freezing climate of the Himalayan region.
‘it’ refers to white tiger; ‘itself’ refers to the white tiger

iv. The White Tiger is nicknamed “the Lightning” because it moves very quickly.
‘it’ refers to the White Tiger

v. The increase in the vulnerability of an average user to malicious attacks didn’t escape the notice of Computer Security Experts who say that it might be due to the onset of the much feared intelligent virus “AvaNova”, the IQ of which exceeds 170.
‘ Who’ refers to the Computer Security experts; ‘it’ refers to malicious attacks ;‘Which’ can have more than one logical antecedent.

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Every student must put more effort while studying it because if a student doesn’t have a good grasp on the concept of fractions, they will face difficulty in understanding Algebra.
'it' refers to the noun 'concept of fractions'; the usage of 'they' is incorrect as there is no plural noun in the above IC


@khush33: Are you sure the pronoun 'it' unambiguously refers to 'concept of fractions'?

Consider the following sentence.

a. Every student must put more effort while studying Algebra because if a student doesn’t have a good grasp on the concept of fractions, they will face difficulty in understanding Algebra.

Don't you think the above sentence makes sense?

Think about it :)


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Wonderful article. Thanks!

I have a doubt on one of the options:

c. A solar flare emitted by the Sun can destroy a communication satellite because scientists estimated that its temperature is high enough to accelerate further damage.

Shouldn't the tense in dependent clause be " scientists have estimated", since, IC contains "can" which is in simple future tense. I just can't stop myself from doing analysis on each and every sentence nowadays. :)

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Hi Yuvraj,

"can" here indicates "capacity". Not future tense. :)

Moreover the choice between "scientists estimated" and "scientists have estimated" depends on the meaning you want to convey. :)

Hope this helps!

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Hi

I have pronoun confusion in following sentence :

Young female ballet dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits caused by the desire to be as thin as possible.

(A) Young female ballet dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits caused by the desire to be as thin as possible.
(B) Good eating habits sometimes fail to be maintained by young female ballet dancers and gymnasts caused by desiring to be as thin as possible.
(C) Because they desire to be as thin as possible, good eating habits are sometimes not maintained by young female ballet dancers and gymnasts.
(D) Because they desire to be as thin as possible, young female ballet dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits.
(E) Young female dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits because they desire to be as thin as possible.


Correct answer is D. however I choose E. I had confusion between D & E because in both sentences 'they' refer to "dancers & gymnasts" however arguments against E is that 'they' is used ambiguously and can be referred to habit. Is that true ?
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Hi Krishna.....thanx a lot!!....I gt it..:)...
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Hi Krishna.....thanx a lot!!....I gt it..:)...


Now, do you want to revisit your answers to the other exercise questions before I provide the OA? :)


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I have pronoun confusion in following sentence :

Young female ballet dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits caused by the desire to be as thin as possible.

(A) Young female ballet dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits caused by the desire to be as thin as possible.
(B) Good eating habits sometimes fail to be maintained by young female ballet dancers and gymnasts caused by desiring to be as thin as possible.
(C) Because they desire to be as thin as possible, good eating habits are sometimes not maintained by young female ballet dancers and gymnasts.
(D) Because they desire to be as thin as possible, young female ballet dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits.
(E) Young female dancers and gymnasts sometimes fail to maintain good eating habits because they desire to be as thin as possible.


Correct answer is D. however I choose E. I had confusion between D & E because in both sentences 'they' refer to "dancers & gymnasts" however arguments against E is that 'they' is used ambiguously and can be referred to habit. Is that true ?


There is no difference between Options D&E except for the word "ballet", which I am assuming is a typo in Option E.

If you forgot to write "ballet" in option E, then I would say both Options are correct.

I really don't think "they" can refer to "eating habits".

Ask yourself, Can eating habits desire to be thin?

Hope this helps! :)

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Thanks Krishna.. Its much clear to me now why 'they' cannot refer to 'habits'. This confusion arised from following thread young-female-ballet-dancers-and-gymnasts-sometimes-fail-to-82988.html where this question is discussed and OA is E.
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Hi Krishna, i have a doubt regarding an example stated:

The peaks of a mountain range, acting like rocks in a streambed, produce ripples in the air flowing over them; the resulting flow pattern, with crests and troughs that remain stationary although the air that forms them is moving rapidly, is known as "standing waves."

In the above example you said that "them" has only one logical antecedent but am confused about "ripples". Isn't this a plausible option. :( :(

Please help. Am confused. :?

The one possible explanation i think of is :

Ripples are not produced by air. It is performed by peaks of mountain. Here them refers to an action air is doing which is forming of crests and troughs. Hence only one logical antecedent.

But am not 100% sure of this. I just want to confirm with the EXPERT here. :wink:
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