goforgmat wrote:
Though perhaps less visceral and emotionally satisfying than her previous novels, “The Namesake” attests to Jhumpa Lahiri’s ability to write a best seller that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, the satirical and the intimately personal
A)that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, the satirical and the intimately personal.
B) that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, with the satirical and the intimately personal.
C)that has moved back and forth between the comic and tragic, and between the satirical and intimately personal.
D) moving back and forth between the comic and tragic, and the satirical and the intimately personal.
E) moving back and forth between the comic and tragic and the satirical and the intimately personal.
When we have a parallel structure as in the above,
a and b,c and d(say) shoudn't the parallel lists be separated by a semicolon for the sake of clarity?
Semicolons are used to separate items of a list, if the list is nested within an item of another outer list, whose items are separated by commas.
Following is an example from Manhattan SC guide:
Wrong: I listen to Earth, Wind & Fire, Wow, Owls, and Blood, Sweat & Tears.
Right: I listen to Earth, Wind & Fire; Wow, Owls; and Blood, Sweat & Tears.
Another point to observe:
The back and forth movement takes place BETWEEN 3 items:
1. the comic and tragic,
2. the satirical
3. the intimately personal
It is correct to use "between" rather than "among" even when there are more than 2 items, when these items are distinct, and not referred as a group as a whole.
The absence of comma made me think that the satirical and intimately personal are one list items !
Isn't it a rule in gmat that a comma should precede and when there are more than 2 items?