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Especially in the early years, new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways, like renting temporary office space or using answering services, that make their company seem large and more firmly established that they may actually be.

A) that make their company seem large
B) to make their companies seem large
C) thus making their companies seem larger
D) so that the companies seem larger
E) of making their company seem large


In the non-underlined part 'they' is plural and refers to companies. A and E are out.

Intention of entrepreneurs is to make their companies seem 'large'. 'Larger' is not required. C and D are out

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Especially in the early years, new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways, like renting temporary office space or using answering services, that make their company seem large and more firmly established that they may actually be.

A) that make their company seem large
B) to make their companies seem large
C) thus making their companies seem larger
D) so that the companies seem larger
E) of making their company seem large


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The question is not correctly copied from OG17. Please correct the question.

Original sentence: "more firmly established that they may actually be" - It is "than", not "that"
Option B: It is "larger", not "large"
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Especially in the early years, new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways, like renting temporary office space or using answering services, that make their company seem large and more firmly established than they may actually be.

(A) that make their company seem large
(B) to make their companies seem larger
(C) thus making their companies seem larger
(D) so that the companies seem larger
(E) of making their company seem large



Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:
Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended core meaning of this sentence is that new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways to make their companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be.

Concepts tested here: Meaning + Verb Forms + Pronouns + Parallelism

• Any elements linked by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel.
• The introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “making” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.

A: This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "their company"; the use of the singular noun "company" incorrectly implies that new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways to make a single, collective company seem larger and more firmly established than it may actually be; the intended meaning is that new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways to make their respective, individual companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be. Further, the sentence formed by Option A incorrectly refers to the singular noun "company" with the plural pronoun "them". Additionally, Option A fails to maintain parallelism between the base adjective "large" and the comparative adjective "more firmly established"; please remember, any elements linked by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel.

B: Correct. This answer choice uses the phrase "to make their companies seem larger", conveying the intended meaning - that new entrepreneurs may need to find specific resourceful ways to make their respective, individual companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be. Further, the sentence formed by Option B correctly refers to the plural noun "companies" with the plural pronoun "them". Additionally, Option B maintains parallelism between the comparative adjectives "larger" and "more firmly secure".

C: This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "thus making"; the construction of this phrase incorrectly implies that new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways, and as a result make their companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be; the intended meaning is that new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways to make their companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be; please remember, the introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “making” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.

D: This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "so that the companies seem larger"; the construction of this phrase incorrectly implies that new entrepreneurs may need to find unspecified resourceful ways, for the purpose of making their companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be; the intended meaning is that new entrepreneurs may need to find those specific resourceful ways that make their companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be.

E: This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "their company"; the use of the singular noun "company" incorrectly implies that new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways to make a single, collective company seem larger and more firmly established than it may actually be; the intended meaning is that new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways to make their respective, individual companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be. Further, the sentence formed by Option E incorrectly refers to the singular noun "company" with the plural pronoun "them". Additionally, Option E fails to maintain parallelism between the base adjective "large" and the comparative adjective "more firmly established"; please remember, any elements linked by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel.

Hence, B is the best answer choice.

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Hi AbdurRakib, is this also an OG 17 question?

Would have thought that such as (rather than like) would have been a better choice (not that it matters, since it is in the non-underlined portion).
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A) that make their company seem large-New entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways that make their company seem large is incorrect
B) to make their companies seem large-New entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways -to make their companies seem large (to make;for a purpose) correct
C) thus making their companies seem larger- (resourceful ways is not leading to any result,incorrect)
D) so that the companies seem larger- If you use larger,you would need "than" in the sentence which is not an option as there is no comparison and also it is not parallel to more firmly established.
E) of making their company seem large-incorrect
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Cut the jargons and simplify as follows:

need to find resourceful ways - THAT
need to find resourceful ways - TO
need to find resourceful ways - THUS
need to find resourceful ways - SO
need to find resourceful ways - OF
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Meaning-wise and idiomatically B is correct on the basis of the above though the most ideal sentence would use "larger" since it is followed by "more firmly" which is a comparative form,
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Especially in the early years, new entrepreneurs may need to find
resourceful ways, like renting temporary office space or using answering
services, that make their company seem large and more firmly established
than they may actually be.

A) that make their company seem large
B) to make their companies seem larger
C) thus making their companies seem larger
D) so that the companies seem larger
E) of making their company seem large

I have a very specific query with regards to Option B. "To make THEIR companies seem larger and more firmly established than THEY may actually be"

In the above statement, don't THEIR and THEY both need to refer to the same noun? Either entrepreneurs or Companies.

It seems, however, that THEIR is referring to entrepreneurs while THEY is referring to companies.
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Especially in the early years, new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways, like renting temporary office space or using answering services, that make their company seem large and more firmly established than they may actually be.

A) that make their company seem large
B) to make their companies seem larger
C) thus making their companies seem larger
D) so that the companies seem larger
E) of making their company seem large


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Especially in the early years, new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways, like renting temporary office space or using answering services,to make their companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be.

New Entrepreneurs==>Their companies==>They

Larger and more firmly established than............. = Correct Comparison.

to find ........ to make = Maintains parallelism

Hence Answer must be (B)
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Please if someone can throw light on the usage of 'they' and 'their' in option B (the correct answer) Can they and their refer to different entities?

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Please if someone can throw light on the usage of 'they' and 'their' in option B (the correct answer) Can they and their refer to different entities?

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their companies refers to the company owners, they refers to the companies. So yes.

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Please if someone can throw light on the usage of 'they' and 'their' in option B (the correct answer) Can they and their refer to different entities?

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their companies refers to the company owners, they refers to the companies. So yes.

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If that is the case then how come 'they' and 'their' refer to two different things in the same sentence?
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The subject proceeding their is entrepreneurs, the subject proceeding they is companies. As long as there's a clear antecedent for each pronoun, it's okay.

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A few learnings from the problem

1) Non-underlined part - This is the first example of its kind in which the correct answer uses 'like' to introduce examples.

2) Even if there is a clear case of introducing option c) thus, d)so that - to give meaning to sentence i.e. Why new entrepreneurs are doing this ? The Idiomatic usage takes over and makes the causal usage irrelevant

3) In a single sentence, their refers to entrepreneurs and they refers to companies. Not that pronoun ambiguity is an absolute rule, GMAC allows these kind of deviations

4) Infinitive +to construction - New....may need to find ways (leaving Non essentials) to make....

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Sure.

The problem that you may have is because of a common trap that GMAT employs: "the middleman." In this case it is "like renting temporary office space or using answering services." Now this is verbose, really annoying,and undermines the underlined relations with context. In fact, you can rewrite the sentence without this part to prevent your judgement from getting clouded, and the trunk of the sentence becomes:

New entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways that make their company seem large and more firmly established than they may actually be.

Now it is easy to identify more relationships as you've reduced the distance between them and cleaned out the garbage.

First, in option A, "their" referents are "new entrepreneurs". New entrepreneurs are certainly concerned with everyone who has a company, rather than a total of a company, therefore, company should be changed to companies.

Furthermore, "They" must refer to "companies". Pronoun and noun concord mandates and confirms the above change to plural. Singular "company" cannot be right!

The only rule for pronoun ambiguity that you need to worry about on the GMAT is the logical kind.

For more information on understanding this, check out this well written link:

https://e-gmat.com/blog/gmat-verbal/english-grammar-concepts/pronouns/address-pronoun-ambiguity

The rule is: Pronoun should have only ONE logical antecedent.

As in this sentence, with the correct option there is no logical ambiguity. I hope this is evident after removing the middleman. "They may actually be" , in the logical context of the sentence can refer only to "companies". Try replacing the pronoun with the noun that you think is the antecedent and you may get grossly incorrect sentence.

Corrected answer reads:
New entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways to make their companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be.

New entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways to make the new entrepreneurs' companies seem larger and more firmly established than the new entrepreneurs may actually be.

Nonsensical meaning: you can see why this not a contender at all.

New entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways to make the new entrepreneurs' companies seem larger and more firmly established than the companies may actually be.

Strongly correlates with intended meaning: This is the only possible correct sentence!

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https://e-gmat.com/blogs/pronoun-usage-myths-and-facts/

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I already read all explanation including Pronz's, and after reading the explanations, I was convinced with the right choice. However, I have following doubts.

1. I saw the snakes lying behind the buildings. They were playing there. They were built before 10 years. --wrong

Above sentence is absolutely wrong. However, it clearly states the meaning: first "they" refers to snakes, and second "they" refers to building

A pronoun can have only one antecedent. Is it allowed for a pronoun in different forms(one possessive and one subjective form ) to refer different antecedents?

Especially in the early years, new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways, like renting temporary office space or using answering services, to make their companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be.

In the above sentence, "their" refers to entrepreneurs, and they refer to the companies. Please explain.


2. Like is used to compare, not to present examples. "Renting temporary office space" or "using answering services" are the examples of the "resourceful ways". Why is the usage of like correct here?

She is going to buy the clothes like shirt, t-shirt.--wrong

she is going to buy the clothes such as shirt,t-shirt-- right (examples of clothes)

Like Sam, I play in the garden --right (comparison)
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I already read all explanation including Pronz's, and after reading the explanations, I was convinced with the right choice. However, I have following doubts.

1. I saw the snakes lying behind the buildings. They were playing there. They were built before 10 years. --wrong

Above sentence is absolutely wrong. However, it clearly states the meaning: first "they" refers to snakes, and second "they" refers to building

A pronoun can have only one antecedent. Is it allowed for a pronoun in different forms(one possessive and one subjective form ) to refer different antecedents?

Especially in the early years, new entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways, like renting temporary office space or using answering services, to make their companies seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be.

In the above sentence, "their" refers to entrepreneurs, and they refer to the companies. Please explain.


2. Like is used to compare, not to present examples. "Renting temporary office space" or "using answering services" are the examples of the "resourceful ways". Why is the usage of like correct here?

She is going to buy the clothes like shirt, t-shirt.--wrong

she is going to buy the clothes such as shirt,t-shirt-- right (examples of clothes)

Like Sam, I play in the garden --right (comparison)


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The subject proceeding their is entrepreneurs, the subject proceeding they is companies. As long as there's a clear antecedent for each pronoun, it's okay.

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Sorry, but I've not seen this happening on any official question. It would be great if you can put up a official question where this rule is followed. I still feel that this is something new!

sayantanc2k Any views on pronoun ambiguity? Your views on the same is highly appreciated.


1. There is a rule mentioned in some good GMAT guides that all "they" / "them" / "their" in a sentence must refer to the same plural antecedent. However it appears that GMAT has recently become lenient on this issue.

2. GMAT also seems to have become lenient on the use of "like" to introduce examples.
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