Hi there! Let me unpack some of these, section by section:
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Hi Maria,
Please evaluate my profile and provide me some pointers to improve to apply this year!
Indian, Female, 31
Undergrad : Engineering in Computer science (Non IIT)
Gmat : 720 (Thinking of a retake ,aiming at 750)
Work ex : 6Y 8 M in an IT role
Ok, so at age 31 (and almost 7 yrs experience now, which would put you roughly at 8 yrs experience at matriculation) you are a bit on the older side for some of the tippy-top programs -- at least, the full time programs in the U.S. You may want to cast a wider net in terms of school selection, or look into programs in Europe or Canada that tend to be more open to more "seasoned" candidates.
If you think you can pull off a 750, then yes! Go for it! Given the level of competition from the Indian IT pool, you will not regret having a higher score.
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Work ex gap : 1y 7M
Hmm...This could be a pretty big red flag. Hopefully this gap occurred 1) a while ago [vs., say, now] and 2) had a good / explainable reason
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Domain : IT services in Retail/FMCG
Currently working for a Consulting firm as a Senior consultant that provides services to a Multilevel marketing business.
Does working with the Multilevel marketing firm come across as negative on my resume?
While Multi-Level Marketing as an industry is sometimes seen as being a bit dodgy, 1) YOU are not working for them directly and 2) You are probably driving good results / leading cool projects that involve skills that could be easily transferable elsewhere.
To the extent that they are your
consulting firm's client, you have more distance. Also, you're probably not allowed to name them anyway (due to NDA considerations) and een if you did, if it's an Indian company, U.S. Adcoms probably won't know what it is anyway. Could you just say something like: "Lead IT projects for company's 3rd-largest client, a company in the [general industry the MLM is in] space"?
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Post MBA goals : working with for profit Social enterprises in a higher management role or possibly create my own business.
YIKES!!! Where does the "Social Enterprise" angle come in? I don't see anything in what you told me that says that you have any experience / credibility in this space. In the Free Trial area of
ApplicantLab, you have free access to part of my Career Vision module, which explains what makes for a good career vision (and what doesn't) and why schools care.
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Key CV elements : two promotions in 6 y 8 M.
This seems a bit slower than usual? I think the usual expectation is one promotion every 2 years or so. If this has been an accelerated promotion path, then your RECOMMENDER for sure needs to point that out!
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Have single handedly delivered and led very critical projects for a client In europe.
Have been lauded for building a good rapport and delivery with the onshore team when the team impression about us was at the lowest.
Have been part of a team that delivered a critical project that helped save the a lot of money for the clients(not sure about the actual numbers)
Have managed teams with 2-4 members.
Have two international experience ,One being for 2 weeks and the other for 5 months.
Have been recognized by the management for being an outstanding performer in the critical projects.
These are all very good things, especially the international experience and the formal management experience. If you happen to have been handed the company's larger / most important clients, be sure to try to work that in too.
When other people from your firm go to get MBAs, where do they usually go? Do you have any
Resume Twins you can look to for guidance?
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ExtraCurriculars:
Have won many district and state level quiz competitions at the primary and high school level.
Please, I beg you, don't mention anything from primary / high school in your business school application. As a graduate school application for future managerial, C-Suite talent, something as far back as primary / high school have no place there (unless it was truly something extraordinary, e.g. being on the Olympic team or winning an international competition). Leave this stuff out.
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Was awarded by the dean for the final year project.
Eh, if you have room on the resume, you can leave this detail in (I assume this is from college?) -- but it's not going to really move the needle
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An avid traveler and an amateur photographer.
Keen learner of new languages , currently self learning Italian.
These things are great -- I especially like the Italian angle. For something like "Traveler" , I have specific advice in the Resume module of the Lab (I can't remember if it's accessible as part of the free trial or not) to advise to make this a bit more interesting on the resume, than just "Interests: Travel, photography", since honestly I'd estimate 85% of the applicant pool loves to travel! So try to put a slightly unique spin on it, such as: "Travel, especially in the Loire Valley" so it doesn't sound like almost everyone else.
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I don't have a specific list(Still researching) but would like to make it to a top program.
Given your age and your love of travel and languages, I'd recommend looking into European programs. They tend to be more open to older candidates (for example, 26% of the class at Bocconi -- in Italy, yay! --
is between the ages of 31-33, and 17% have over 7 years of experience), and an
ApplicantLab client with a profile similar to yours (although: with 1+ year of international experience and leading teams of over 20 people) just was accepted to HEC. Plus, since they are less expensive, you will have less of a student loan debt burden, should you wish to pursue social enterprise after graduation.
In terms of U.S. schools, I'd be interested what your Resume Twin research pulls up. If your firm has a history of sending people to U.S. MBA programs, see if you can reach out to those folks who made it in and see what they think of your profile.
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Please also suggest if we can use personal stories while crafting the application that led to the decision to pursue an MBA?
OH! Not only "CAN" you use personal stories, I BEG THAT YOU DO SO! A big part of my lessons in the Lab is on teaching people HOW to write about their unique stories in the most effective way. A heart-felt personal story can really help make you more memorable, and can really help prove true commitment and passion in a way that the more clinical resume never could!!!! If the "personal stories" in question are relevant (and don't go into the realm of "Too Much Information" -- that is, use professional judgement here), then YES they not only are allowed but I'd VERY MUCH encourage you to include them!
Thanks!,
Maria
Unfortunately my work ex gap is very recent n i have only begun working this month! Does it even make sense ,given my work ex and work ex gap, to apply at all?