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Unlike the virginal, whose single set of strings runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are placed at right angles to its front edge.


(A) whose single set of strings runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are

(B) with a single set of strings running parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the several sets of strings of the harpsichord are

(C) which has a single set of strings that runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, in the case of the harpsichord, several sets of strings are

(D) which has a single set of strings that run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord has several sets of strings

(E) in which a single set of strings run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are


Here, there are 2 parts in this sentence correction: one is underlined part and the other is non-underlined part. In GMAT, the non-underlined part is always considered as legit. So, we need to take care of the underlined part.
In non-underlined part, its indicates something singular. So, its 's :) antecedent must be singular.
A) several sets of strings==> plural, so out
B) several sets of strings==> plural, so out
C) several sets of strings==> plural, so out
D) harpsichord ==> singular, keep it
E) several sets of strings==> plural, so out
So, the correct choice is


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Unlike the virginal, whose single set of strings runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord???s several sets of strings are placed at right angles to its front edge.


(A) whose single set of strings runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord???s several sets of strings are

(B) with a single set of strings running parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the several sets of strings of the harpsichord are

(C) which has a single set of strings that runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, in the case of the harpsichord, several sets of strings are

(D) which has a single set of strings that run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord has several sets of strings

(E) in which a single set of strings run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord???s several sets of strings are


Hi My honorable expert,
I'm totally lost finding the meaning of this sentence! In choice D, which one run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, actually?
Is it:
1/ strings?
or,
2/ a single set of strings?
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I'm totally lost finding the meaning of this sentence! In choice D, which one run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, actually?
Is it:
1/ strings?
or,
2/ a single set of strings?
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Good question! Whenever "that" is used as the subject of a modifying clause, the verb associated with "that" will tell us whether the antecedent is singular or plural.

In (D) we have "a single set of strings that run parallel to the front edge of the instrument." Because "run" is a plural verb, this tells us that I'm searching for a plural antecedent - in this case, "strings."

However, imagine that we'd had "a single set of strings that runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument." Now "runs" is a singular verb, and so "that" must modify a singular antecedent. The closest one is "set."

I hope that helps!

Originally posted by GMATNinja on 10 Jan 2019, 15:45.
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Unlike the virginal, whose single set of strings runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are placed at right angles to its front edge.

(A) whose single set of strings runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are
(B) with a single set of strings running parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the several sets of strings of the harpsichord are
(C) which has a single set of strings that runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, in the case of the harpsichord, several sets of strings are
(D) which has a single set of strings that run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord has several sets of strings
(E) in which a single set of strings run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are

Here the official answer is

Hi my honorable expert,
RonPurewal, MartyMurray, GMATNinja, DmitryFarber, egmat, AjiteshArun, EMPOWERgmatRichC

The official answer choice makes me crazy!
I'm starting my reasoning with 2 examples.
Here are the examples:
1) I took pictures of my dog, which are so adorable that they make everyone smile.----->correct. Because "dog" can describe "pictures". Most importantly, "pictures of my dog" is just "one unit"
2) I took pictures of my dog, which is so adorable that it protects security in our house.-----> Correct.
3) I took pictures in 2018, which are so adorable that blah blah blah ------>incorrect. "in 2018" does not describe the "pictures" at all, because "pictures in 2018" is not a UNIT; it describes when "I took pictures".
So, from the example 1 and 2, I can safely say that if something is group of one unit, then the modifier can jump.


Now, here is the main official question:

Unlike the virginal, which has a single set of strings that run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord has several sets of strings placed at right angles to its front edge.

In apparently, it seems that we're going to make comparison between 'virginal' and 'harpsichord'; we're going to make comparison between what they possess, actually.

In this official example, 'Harpsichord' possesses something which is different from 'Virginal' does.
But, in this example, 'strings' is SAME for both instruments. We're just going to make creativity/comparison in 'single set' and in 'several sets'.
So, how can we actually fill up the blank?
Simple answer: single set of strings.
Why "single set of strings" is in the blank? Because, it (single set of strings) is possessed by 'Virginal'. And the "single set of strings' is just ONE unit, here at least.
As 'several sets of strings' is compared with 'a single set of strings', then we should introduce 'a single set of strings' (NOT only 'strings') by 'that', because 'single set of strings' is just ONE unit.
So, if this is the case (if the logic is right), we should use singular verb (runS) for the subject 'a single set of strings' in choice D like the below one.

Unlike the virginal, which has a single set of strings that runS parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord has several sets of strings placed at right angles to its front edge.

I'll be very glad if I've some experts' comments.
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In apparently, it seems that we're going to make comparison between 'virginal' and 'harpsichord'; we're going to make comparison between what they possess, actually.

In this official example, 'Harpsichord' possesses something which is different from 'Virginal' does.
But, in this example, 'strings' is SAME for both instruments. We're just going to make creativity/comparison in 'single set' and in 'several sets'.
This is not creativity. The comparison is strictly between the nouns virginal and harpsichord. To check the comparison being made in this sentence, you should check only the noun introduced by (the object of) unlike (the virginal) and the subject of the clause (the harpsichord).

Unlike the virginal, which has a single set of strings that run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord has several sets of strings placed at right angles to its front edge.
or
Unlike the virginal, the harpsichord has several sets of strings placed at right angles to its front edge.

The portion that you seem to be worried about just has extra information that has nothing to do with our checking whether the comparison is logical. For example:

Unlike cars, planes have two wings.
Here the comparison is fine, although the reader could think that cars also have (1, 3, 4...) wings.

Unlike cars, which have wheels, planes have two wings.
Here the comparison is fine, and the reader is not likely to think that cars have wings.

Unlike cars, which have four wheels, planes have two wings.
The comparison is fine, and the reader is not likely to think that cars have wings.

The comparison is fine in all 3 sentences (ignore the fact that some cars do have wings :)). Adding additional information about cars does not make the comparison incorrect.
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AsadAbu wrote:
In apparently, it seems that we're going to make comparison between 'virginal' and 'harpsichord'; we're going to make comparison between what they possess, actually.

In this official example, 'Harpsichord' possesses something which is different from 'Virginal' does.
But, in this example, 'strings' is SAME for both instruments. We're just going to make creativity/comparison in 'single set' and in 'several sets'.
This is not creativity. The comparison is strictly between the nouns virginal and harpsichord. To check the comparison being made in this sentence, you should check only the noun introduced by (the object of) unlike (the virginal) and the subject of the clause (the harpsichord).

Unlike the virginal, which has a single set of strings that run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord has several sets of strings placed at right angles to its front edge.
or
Unlike the virginal, the harpsichord has several sets of strings placed at right angles to its front edge.

The portion that you seem to be worried about just has extra information that has nothing to do with our checking whether the comparison is logical. For example:

Unlike cars, planes have two wings.
Here the comparison is fine, although the reader could think that cars also have (1, 3, 4...) wings.

Unlike cars, which have wheels, planes have two wings.
Here the comparison is fine, and the reader is not likely to think that cars have wings.

Unlike cars, which have four wheels, planes have two wings.
The comparison is fine, and the reader is not likely to think that cars have wings.

The comparison is fine in all 3 sentences (ignore the fact that some cars do have wings :)). Adding additional information about cars does not make the comparison incorrect.

Thank you for your kind feedback AjiteshArun. Honestly speaking, I did not get the answer of my queries, because I had so many queries in my previous post. :)

By the by, could you explain a bit the following sentences on the basis of its legitimacy?
One important thing/info to know:
--> GMAT Club has kudos point
--> ManhattanPrep GMAT forum doesn't have any kudos point.

1/ Unlike GMAT Club, ManhattanPrep GMAT forum does not have any kudos point.

or,

2/ Unlike ManhattanPrep GMAT forum, GMAT Club has kudos point.

If you find any error in these 2 examples, could you help me by fixing that/those sentence(s)?
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Thank you for your kind feedback AjiteshArun. Honestly speaking, I did not get the answer of my queries, because I had so many queries in my previous post. :)
Let's not give up just yet :)

AsadAbu wrote:
As 'several sets of strings' is compared with 'a single set of strings', then we should introduce 'a single set of strings' (NOT only 'strings') by 'that', because 'single set of strings' is just ONE unit.
So, if this is the case (if the logic is right), we should use singular verb (runS) for the subject 'a single set of strings' in choice D like the below one.
1. Again, the comparison is not between several sets of strings and a single set of strings. The comparison is between the virginal and the harpsichord. Focus on that, and don't take the logical comparison tested in like X, Y type questions on the GMAT where it was never meant to go.

2. Even if that were not the case, we cannot go ahead and make the singular/plural decision on the basis of something in some other part of the sentence. This will come down to what the author wants to say. For example:

Unlike a car, which has a single set of wheels that rotate independently, a plane has multiple sets of wings that...

This is just a quick (and far from perfect) sentence I made right now to show that we will not go with the singular rotates, as a single set of wheels that rotates independently would mean that the set of wheels rotates as a unit. What the author wants to say is that the wheels do not affect each other.

TL;DR: there is no reason for the GMAT to treat single set of strings as one unit, and therefore the run does not need to be singular.
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In this official example, 'Harpsichord' possesses something which is different from 'Virginal' does.
But, in this example, 'strings' is SAME for both instruments. We're just going to make creativity/comparison in 'single set' and in 'several sets'.
So, how can we actually fill up the blank?
Simple answer: single set of strings.
Why "single set of strings" is in the blank? Because, it (single set of strings) is possessed by 'Virginal'. And the "single set of strings' is just ONE unit, here at least.
As 'several sets of strings' is compared with 'a single set of strings', then we should introduce 'a single set of strings' (NOT only 'strings') by 'that', because 'single set of strings' is just ONE unit.
So, if this is the case (if the logic is right), we should use singular verb (runS) for the subject 'a single set of strings' in choice D like the below one.

Unlike the virginal, which has a single set of strings that runS parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord has several sets of strings placed at right angles to its front edge.

I'll be very glad if I've some experts' comments.
Thank you___


Regardless of whether the sets are being compared, it could still make sense to describe the strings within each set as running parallel and placed at right angles.
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Unlike the virginal, whose single set of strings runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are placed at right angles to its front edge.


(A) whose single set of strings runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are

(B) with a single set of strings running parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the several sets of strings of the harpsichord are

(C) which has a single set of strings that runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, in the case of the harpsichord, several sets of strings are

(D) which has a single set of strings that run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord has several sets of strings

(E) in which a single set of strings run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are


Can 'whose' modify inanimate subjects?

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Can 'whose' modify inanimate subjects?
Yes. We can use whose to refer to inanimate objects as well.
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Raj30 wrote:
Can 'whose' modify inanimate subjects?
Yes. We can use whose to refer to inanimate objects as well.

Thanks AjiteshArun!

To illustrate that point, consider the following example:

  • "The building whose roof collapsed during last month's snow storm has been repaired and reopened."

This is a perfectly fine example of using "whose" to modify an inanimate object.

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The golden rule in tackling comparisons is to verify whether parallel things are compared. To make life simple, the first arm names a noun, namely, Virginal, a musical instrument and it is not underlined. Now, therefore, we have to look forward consciously or unconsciously to another musical instrument in the second arm. Fortunately, by design or chance, all choices except D mention either several sets or its equivalents. The comparison ends there. In addition, we can verify that D has no errors too.
This is a valid comparison between two bare nouns and not with their attributes. This is the basic tenet of legal comparisons.

D is the choice in just a flick of the finger.

I am curious to know the difficulty level of this question.
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Hi, In option E, "in which a single set of strings RUN" - is there a subject verb error? As per my understanding strings run parallel and not the set so the use of plural noun RUN is correct here. Please clarify. Thanks in advance.
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Hi, In option E, "in which a single set of strings RUN" - is there a subject verb error? As per my understanding strings run parallel and not the set so the use of plural noun RUN is correct here. Please clarify. Thanks in advance.

Hi Jay, a single set of strings is singular and hence, runs would be the correct verb.
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Unlike the virginal, whose single set of strings runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are placed at right angles to its front edge.

A) whose single set of strings runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are
A is wrong for two reasons. People are who and things are that or which, so the use of "whose" when referring to the virginal is incorrect. Also, in this case, the prepositional phrase is the subject of the sentence, "single set" its modifier. Thus the verb "run" must be plural instead of singular.

B) with a single set of strings running parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the several sets of strings of the harpsichord are
B is wrong because the phrase between the commas begins with the preposition "with," which in this usage is meant to distinguish between one virginal and another.

C) which has a single set of strings that runs parallel to the front edge of the instrument, in the case of the harpsichord, several sets of strings are
C is wrong because if you remove the clause between the commas, the phrase "several sets of strings are" suggests the virginal also has several sets of strings. Plus, the sentence structure is awkward.

D) which has a single set of strings that run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord has several sets of strings
D is the best choice because it states the case with clarity, but the word "that" is required between
"strings" and the verb "are."


E) in which a single set of strings run parallel to the front edge of the instrument, the harpsichord’s several sets of strings are
E is incorrect because it suggests the set of strings are in the virginal, making it an awkward sentence.


Hi, I like your explanation but the official explanation shows that "run" should agree with the singular subject "set". So I'm afraid your explanation for Choice A need to revise.


According to the Manhattan book on SC, in the chapter "Modifiers", whose can refer to people OR things

Please clarify.

Also, I don't understand why the subject cannot be "set" of strings. A single SET of strings RUN parallel.

Someone please explain this. "of strings" is a preposition modifier right?
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According to the Manhattan book on SC, in the chapter "Modifiers", whose can refer to people OR things

Yes, so what's your question?

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Also, I don't understand why the subject cannot be "set" of strings. A single SET of strings RUN parallel.

Someone please explain this. "of strings" is a preposition modifier right?

Yes, so set is singular and hence, the correct verb will be runs.
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EducationAisle VeritasKarishma GMATNinja - in the OA -- I don't understand why the subject cannot be "set" of strings.

A single SET of strings can also be parallel to the edge of the instrument ....

example : this SET of action heroes IS (not ARE) more expensive than that set of action heroes.
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