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Re: Once a hurricane is identified, it is given a name from a list drawn [#permalink]
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Confused between a and e

Both are acceptable Grammer wise

After omitting is an action

If I see a list, after omitting means somebody is doing that,

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Re: Once a hurricane is identified, it is given a name from a list drawn [#permalink]
Hello All,

Can someone please explain what is wrong with option e?

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Re: Once a hurricane is identified, it is given a name from a list drawn [#permalink]
Bunuel wrote:
Once a hurricane is identified, it is given a name from a list drawn up by the United States Weather Service, a list that is reused after a few years, but with the names of the worst hurricanes omitted.


A. but with the names of the worst hurricanes omitted

B. omitting the names of the worst hurricanes

C. the names of the worst hurricanes being omitted

D. after they have omitted the names of the worst hurricanes

E. after omitting the worst hurricane names


We need to show a contrast hence we need BUT--
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..., a list that is reused (after a few years), but a list that is reused (with the names of the worst hurricanes omitted).

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Re: Once a hurricane is identified, it is given a name from a list drawn [#permalink]
Hello,
I need a little help here.

Once a hurricane is identified, it is given a name from a list drawn up by the United States Weather Service, a list that is reused after a few years, but with the names of the worst hurricanes omitted.

'but with the names of the worst hurricanes omitted': This part seemed colloquial to me, but I was not able to categorise it as a valid modifier and I could not decipher why is the contrast used. It would make perfect sense to say : 'list that is reused after a few years (after the names of the worst hurricanes were omitted)

Due to the above reasons I striked off A and selected E.

Could you please explain where am I going wrong?

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