OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONgeneris wrote:
Project SC Butler: Day 167: Sentence Correction (SC1)
Morris's workshops at Kelmscott offered as radical a challenge to British mass fabrication of textiles, furniture, and printed papers
that, fifty years later, the Bauhaus will present to industrial manufacture in the twentieth century.
A)
that, fifty years later, the Bauhaus
will present
B)
that, fifty years later, the Bauhaus would present
C) as, fifty years later, the Bauhaus would present
D) as, fifty years later, the Bauhaus
did present
E)
just as, fifty years later, the Bauhaus
presented • HIGHLIGHTSComparisons?Correct:
AS X AS YHe laughed as often as he wept.
Wrong:
AS X THAT Y (
that and many other words can BE in the sentence—but AS must introduce the Y element. (See the italicized sentence in Split #1, below, for an example of AS . . .AS . . . THAT.)
He laughed as often that he wept.
Wrong:
AS X THAN YHe laughed as often than he wept.
Verbs jumping around in time?We are dealing with two events (two challenges) (a
challenge)
(1) both events happened in the past, but
(2) the second challenge happened in the future relative to the first challenge—essentially the future of the past
• Split #1: AS ... ASWilliam Morris's workshops challenged the establishment.
Fifty years later [after Morris's challenge], the Bauhaus would also challenge the establishment.
Essentially, Morris's workshops posed a challenge AS serious AS the challenge that the Bauhaus would pose 50 years later. Eliminate A and B, which incorrectly use
as . . . thatEliminate E. We don't need "just." In addition, if we see Just As, we should be looking for
Just as X, so too Y• Split #2: VERBSWe are left with
C) as, fifty years later, the Bauhaus would present
D) as, fifty years later, the Bauhaus did present
In order to talk about the future of the past, we use
would.
If we talk about the future from the present day perspective, we use
will.But the future of the past takes would: what would happen 50 years from the first event?
Did present in option D? That option describes how the second event looks to us as we look back from the present.
This sentence says, X was as radical as Y would be in 50 years from the time of X
Relative to the Morris event, the Bauhaus happened in the future.
Eliminate D
The answer is C COMMENTSThis one will be short.
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