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why choice d is wrong?

I think "few " is different from "a few" and means "nearly Zero". so, choice d is correct.

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Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal [#permalink]
To all those who are saying that
1) the comparison is wrong in B- cities are being compared to rivers and,
2) which refers to United States

You need to update your understanding of critical concepts. Neither the comparison is flawed not the usage of which is incorrect.

"Unlike river A, In XX the river " is poor but still a valid comparison imo. In XX is just a modifier providing additional information about the river.
Which can refer to the noun/noun clause. Whatever is written after unlike is anyway a noun clause and which can certainly modify that.

The only problem i see in B is the usage of "the river"-implying that a single river is a focal point of many cities.daagh and egmat are requested to confirm that.
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To all those who are saying that
1) the comparison is wrong in B- cities are being compared to rivers and,
2) which refers to the United States

You need to update your understanding of critical concepts. Neither the comparison is flawed not the usage of which is incorrect.

"Unlike river A, In XX the river" is poor but still a valid comparison imo. In XX is just a modifier providing additional information about the river.
Which can refer to the noun/noun clause? Whatever is written after unlike is anyway a noun clause and which can certainly modify that.

The only problem I see in B is the usage of "the river"-implying that a single river is a focal point of many cities. Daagh and egmat are requested to confirm that.



1. I never said the comparison is wrong. I only said it is weak. Because in B, the comparison is not forthright. The introductory prepositional modifier namely 'in Santanio' does not just modify 'the river' alone but the entire long clause that follows. I think you also admit that when you say the comparison is poor.

2. "Which" refers to the river that is at least two nouns away. Additionally, you seem to be mistaking a noun phrase for a noun clause. Relative pronouns as they imply should refer to specific nouns rather than nouns nested with many modifiers.

In this connection, Please also look into what Ninja says in this very thread about why B is not the preferred choice. To make you feel more at home about this, please visit the link given in MGMAT, wherein Ron candidly explains why B is wrong.

https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/unlike-many-united-states-cities-where-a-river-is-no-longer-t2350.html

Just as an aside, would you ask Ninja and Ron also to update their understanding of this issue?

Originally posted by daagh on 30 Mar 2019, 07:42.
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Hi Sir. Sincere apologies for the reply. I genuinely didn't mean that your understanding is wrong. My comment was focused on those students who said "the comparison is wrong". I,infact, wanted to highlight the very same thing you have mentioned ""the comparison is weak"".

And I just tagged you so that you can elaborate more so that those who commented can improve their understanding.

I have tremendous respect for you and I follow you regularly to improve my understanding of GMAT verbal.

Once again, please accept my sincere apologies and continue Guiding me towards 800:-)

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Please do not think I got offended. I also see that your thinking is deep. Keep it up. I always with you in the forum
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Re: Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal [#permalink]
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Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio winds through the middle of the business district, and the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio, is the city's most popular attraction.


(A) Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio

(B) Unlike the river in many cities in the United States, which is no longer the focal point of urban life, in San Antonio the river

(C) Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it

(D) In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio

(E) No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river


choice d is wrong because

"in few " mean "in no" which is a negative phrase. negative phrase at the beginning of the sentence require the order of question

in few cities today, IS RIVER THE FOCUL POINT..." is correct

look at choice E
"no longer do..." is order of question.

am i correct ?
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choice d is wrong because "few" is negative , like "no longer". so, we need question order. the correct version should be "is a river". "a river is " is wrong
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Re: Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal [#permalink]
The only reason why D is wrong is changing the original meaning.

The original meaning : in many cities, the river used to be the focal point, but now it is not.
D meaning : in many cities, the river is not the focal point. It does not show the change which is the critical idea of the whole sentence.

The critical idea in the whole sentence : for another cities, situation changed (river is no longer the focal point), but in San Antonio, the situation does not change.
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Please correct me if I'm wrong GMATNinja daagh egmat , but my take on this question was slightly different.

(A) Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio - Incorrect comparison, as pointed out by many earlier
(B) Unlike the river in many cities in the United States, which is no longer the focal point of urban life, in San Antonio the river Many people are pointing the fact that comparison is incorrect, but I'd like to point out the usage of "THE" here. In the original sentence, we have "a" riven in many US cities, meaning every city has their respective river. If we say, THE RIVER, we are assuming that there is one river flowing through many US cities.
(C) Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it Same as B
(D) In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio Just because we have reversed the order, doesn't mean the meaning is correct. Many could mean anywhere from 1 to 100 (CR concept)
(E) No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river usage of a river is correct

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D) In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio


D is a gross misinterpretation. The idea is to say that the river is "no longer" a focal point in many of the cities as it used to be before. By removing the idea of "not anymore" and by trying to feebly replace the idea by the term 'few", it is not clear why D wants to contrast San Antonio with other cities that still focus on their rivers. Please remember that 'few' does not mean "No" or " Nil". At the least, it could mean 'hardly anything" but not nothingness.

Originally posted by daagh on 20 Jul 2019, 04:06.
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D is a gross misinterpretation. The idea is to say that the river is no more a focal point in many of the cities as it used to be before. By removing the idea of "not anymore" and by trying to feebly replace the idea by the term 'few", it is not clear why D wants to contrast San Antonio with other cities that still focus on their rivers. Please remember that 'few' does not mean "No" or " Nil". At the least, it could mean 'hardly anything" but not nothingness.


Agreed. Do you agree with the rest of my explanation? Especially the usage of "The" for US rivers?

Thanks :)
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Although the articles have their own subtleties, still in this case, I feel, that we are just interested in the water body called that carries water. Therefore, it is more generic in this case.
I would read it this way:

A river is the main source of water for the crops
The river is the main source of water for the crops
The rivers are the main source of water for the crops
As far as I see, they don't differ much.

I have not seen much significance in such literary nuances in general in GMAT, notwithstanding that are some cases where the use of the definite article 'the' is significant.

I do hail your effort to delve into matters. Yo, do deserve kudos for that. However, moderation also helps.
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Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio winds through the middle of the business district, and the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio, is the city's most popular attraction.


(A) Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio

(B) Unlike the river in many cities in the United States, which is no longer the focal point of urban life, in San Antonio the river

(C) Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it

(D) In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio

(E) No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river


Main Issue


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(A) Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio - Wrong: Comparison

(B) Unlike the river in many cities in the United States, which is no longer the focal point of urban life, in San Antonio the river - Wrong: Comparison 2) Modifier ambiguity

(C) Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it - Wrong: Comparison 2) Pronoun "it"

(D) In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio - Wrong: Meaning Issue

(E) No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river - Correct
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A) Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio ........wrong comparison of cities with river
B) Unlike the river in many cities in the United Stated, which is no longer the local point of urban life, in San Antonio the river...... The comparison is weak, the river should have been forthrightly compared with the river, rather than in San Antonio.
C)Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it ...... wrong comparison of the river with a city.
D) In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio
Using a parenthesis to describe an inevitable part of the sentence is incorrect. Without the clause ‘a river is the focal point of urban life’ the sentence is absurd. In addition, while the text talks about many cities where the river is longer the focal point, D talks about a few cites, where is it is still the focal point. This shift is wrong
E) No longer do many cities in United States have a river as the focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river .....correct choice


Can you please explain answer choice E.I believe the comparison is between cities in united states and in san antanio
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Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio winds through the middle of the business district, and the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio, is the city's most popular attraction.

(A) Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio "Cities" are incorrectly compared to "the river...". Eliminate.

(B) Unlike the river in many cities in the United States, which is no longer the focal point of urban life, in San Antonio the river Appears to suggest that the same river flows through many cities in the US. "Which" here implies that the US is no longer the focal point. Eliminate.

(C) Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it Incorrectly compares "the river" to "san Antonio". Antecedent of "it" is ambiguous. Eliminate.

(D) In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio "Cities" is incorrectly compared to "the river...". Eliminate.

(E) No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river Correct answer.

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Re: Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal [#permalink]
Option A: Compares Cities with River which is incorrect comparison.
Option B: Unlike the river in many cities in the United States is compared with San Antonio; "which" refer to "United states" which is incorrect.
Option C: “Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life” is perfect. “unlike San Antonio” there is no referent of river which makes it incorrect
Option D: Changing the meaning of sentence and there is no contrast
Option E: Correct
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Hi ninja
I don’t see any major problem in D also not able to decide how E is better than D?
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