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instead come in for a 'soft landing'
This might be a very silly question what is the subject of -instead come in for a 'soft landing'- in the above sentence.
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There's no such thing as a silly question. :)

The subject of instead come is the economy. Just watch out for the will in front of avoid though.

... the economy will (a) avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and (b) instead come in for a 'soft landing'...

If we didn't have a will there:

... the economy (a) avoids the recession and (b) comes in for a 'soft landing'...

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The correct choice A is again:
According to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing confidence that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come in for a 'soft landing', followed by a gradual increase in the business activity.

The 2nd that is the essential modifier of 'recession'. What if someone think (apart from meaning issue) that 'come' and 'fear(d)' are parallel each other because they're connected with 'and'?
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The correct choice A is again:
According to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing confidence that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come in for a 'soft landing', followed by a gradual increase in the business activity.

The 2nd that is the essential modifier of 'recession'. What if someone think (apart from meaning issue) that 'come' and 'fear(d)' are parallel each other because they're connected with 'and'?

Hi TheUltimateWinner,

It's really hard to read the sentence that way, because "many... had come in for a soft landing" doesn't seem to make any sense in this context.

More generally, you will face similar issues in many, many questions. The only thing we can do in such situations is read the question carefully.
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The correct choice A is again:
According to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing confidence that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come in for a 'soft landing', followed by a gradual increase in the business activity.

The 2nd that is the essential modifier of 'recession'. What if someone think (apart from meaning issue) that 'come' and 'fear(d)' are parallel each other because they're connected with 'and'?

Hi TheUltimateWinner,

It's really hard to read the sentence that way, because "many... had come in for a soft landing" doesn't seem to make any sense in this context.

More generally, you will face similar issues in many, many questions. The only thing we can do in such situations is read the question carefully.

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Do you suggest that it is important to have a comma after the word 'year' to make the sentence more readable?

According to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing confidence that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year, and instead come in for a 'soft landing', followed by a gradual increase in the business activity.
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Do you suggest that it is important to have a comma after the word 'year' to make the sentence more readable?

No, but don't let my opinion change yours.

The GMAT doesn't really test commas, so it is important that we remain flexible on this. We would not, for example, want to remove the correct option in a question like this one.
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In option A, "AND instead come" what is parallel to what ?
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In option A, "AND instead come" what is parallel to what ?

Hi Akshay, come is parallel to avoid.

...the economy will avoid...and instead come....
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In option A, "AND instead come" what is parallel to what ?

Hi Akshay, come is parallel to avoid.

...the economy will avoid...and instead come....



Instead doesnt break the parallelism?
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Instead doesnt break the parallelism?

When applying parallelism, we should not look for word-on-word parallelism; here, both from an intended meaning and grammar perspective, the parallelism is between two verbs: avoid and come, and that's sufficient from a parallelism perspective.
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In option A, "AND instead come" what is parallel to what ?

Hi Akshay, come is parallel to avoid.

...the economy will avoid...and instead come....


Hey guys,

can I assume in this one that the "will" in "will avoid" carries over to "come" making it an implicit "will come"?

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Hey guys,

can I assume in this one that the "will" in "will avoid" carries over to "come" making it an implicit "will come"?

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Hi rudywip,

Yes. The author wants to tell us what will happen in the future. We don't want a present tense comes there.

the economy will (a) avoid and (b) come
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the economy (a) will avoid and (b) comes
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It isnt the worst thing to have a had with earlier. Besides SC is about getting the best answer, remaining 4 have clear error so there you go :)
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Is the use of "had" in (A) correct with the phrase "earlier in the year", making it redundant?

Hi lakshya14,

To add to DanTe02 's points, the had feared could easily stand on its own. That is, we could take the earlier in the year out if we wanted to. However, think about about had feared does. It gives us some reason to think that, at some point in the past, "many had feared {something}". Now, what does earlier in the year do? It makes that time a little more specific. Not as specific as something like "back in March", but it does add information that the had feared itself does not provide us. So we should not really consider earlier in the year redundant. Instead, look at it as something that adds to the meaning of the sentence.
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Could you please provide an explanation for this question?


Hi guhancr7! I'd be glad to give an explanation for this question! To begin, here is the original with any major differences between the options highlighted in orange:

According to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing confidence that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come in for a 'soft landing', followed by a gradual increase in the business activity.

(A) that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come
(B) in the economy to avoid the recession, what many feared earlier in the year, rather to come
(C) in the economy's ability to avoid the recession, something earlier in the year many had feared , and instead to come
(D) in the economy to avoid the recession many were fearing earlier in the year, and rather to come
(E) that the economy will avoid the recession that was feared earlier this year by many, with it instead coming

After a quick glance over the options, we see a few areas we can focus our attention on:

1. will avoid vs. to avoid (Verb Tense & Meaning)
2. feared / had feared / fearing (Verb Tense)
3. and instead come / rather to come / and instead to come / and rather to come / with it instead to come (Parallelism)


The quickest way to answer this question is to actually focus on #3 on our list: parallelism. There are two actions the economy will take in this sentence, and they must be parallel. Let's take a look at the original sentence for clues:

According to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing confidence that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come in for a 'soft landing', followed by a gradual increase in the business activity.

We need to make sure that the options all use parallel wording with "avoid." Let's see how they stack up:

(A) that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come = PARALLEL
(B) in the economy to avoid the recession, what many feared earlier in the year, rather to come = NOT PARALLEL
(C) in the economy's ability to avoid the recession, something earlier in the year many had feared , and instead to come = NOT PARALLEL
(D) in the economy to avoid the recession many were fearing earlier in the year, and rather to come = NOT PARALLEL
(E) that the economy will avoid the recession that was feared earlier this year by many, with it instead coming = NOT PARALLEL

There you have it - option A is the correct choice! It's the only option that uses parallel structure throughout the sentence.

So why didn't I start with #1 or #2 on my list?

#1 on my list (to avoid vs. will avoid) is incredibly confusing to try to explain. It has more to do with how to handle modifiers and intended meaning, which will take you more time to work out while taking the GMAT. Parallelism typically is a quicker thing to check for, so it makes more sense to start there.

#2 on my list (how each option ends) relies on your understanding of idioms that use words like "rather" and "instead." As I understand it, the word "rather" deals with degrees of something (it's rather cold outside) and "instead" is used to offer up an alternative (let's go to the mall instead). However, trying to focus on this option will also take a lot more time than necessary.

I hope this helps! By focusing on the grammar concepts that are easier to handle, you might find that they help you answer the question much faster than just picking the first thing you notice! :) :thumbup:


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Hi EMPOWERgmatVerbal EducationAisle, could you kindly explain how is (B), (C) and (D) not parallel?

(B) in the economy to avoid the recession, what many feared earlier in the year, rather to come = NOT PARALLEL
(C) in the economy's ability to avoid the recession, something earlier in the year many had feared , and instead to come = NOT PARALLEL
(D) in the economy to avoid the recession many were fearing earlier in the year, and rather to come = NOT PARALLEL

Isn't "to avoid" supposed to be parallel with "to come"? Both are in present tense.

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The infinitives "to avoid" and "to come" certainly CAN be parallel. However, in choice (B), we are missing a parallelism marker (such as "and") altogether! We would need something like this to make it work:
"The economy is expected to avoid the recession and, rather, to come in for a soft landing." - The "and" properly links the two infinitives.


rather , instead : can not be used as parallel markers?
i would go instead of <expect verb - e.g. sit> go and sit are parallel ,even no and is present..
Please suggest what am I missing here?
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The infinitives "to avoid" and "to come" certainly CAN be parallel. However, in choice (B), we are missing a parallelism marker (such as "and") altogether! We would need something like this to make it work:
"The economy is expected to avoid the recession and, rather, to come in for a soft landing." - The "and" properly links the two infinitives.


rather , instead : can not be used as parallel markers?

Hi mSKR,

I agree with GMATNinja's comments, but my response is somewhat more general:

1. Rather: no
2. Instead: no
2. Instead of: no
3. Rather than: qualified yes

Rather than may join coordinate elements, but there are ways to use rather than that result in structures that don't look parallel. For example:

A. Virat rested himself, rather than risk yet another injury.
B. Virat rested himself, rather than risking yet another injury.

For what it's worth, I don't normally recommend focusing on such exceptions, as I don't think the GMAT goes out of its way to test them.
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So "According to some analysts" is to be interpreted as "Some analysts said" ? Why can't it be interpreted as "Some analysts say" , or does this question just indicate that GMAC is okay with having past perfect in combination with simple present? None of the explanations clarified that. So in any other questions that starts with "According to...." , do we presume it indicates past tense?


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"According to some analysts" is a prepositional phrase that modifies nouns/verbs, in our case "the gains". It is not the working verb/present simple and hence cannot be considered as an addition to the sequence of tenses.

Take a look another instance,
According to U.S. agricultural statistics, the rate of honeybee colony collapse has slowed over the last several years...
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Vishalcv wrote:
So "According to some analysts" is to be interpreted as "Some analysts said" ? Why can't it be interpreted as "Some analysts say" , or does this question just indicate that GMAC is okay with having past perfect in combination with simple present? None of the explanations clarified that. So in any other questions that starts with "According to...." , do we presume it indicates past tense?


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"According to some analysts" is a prepositional phrase that modifies nouns/verbs, in our case "the gains". It is not the working verb/present simple and hence cannot be considered as an addition to the sequence of tenses.

Take a look another instance,
According to U.S. agricultural statistics, the rate of honeybee colony collapse has slowed over the last several years...


Hello,
Thanks for the response.
But my question is why past perfect and not simple past in this case?

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Vishalcv wrote:
So "According to some analysts" is to be interpreted as "Some analysts said" ? Why can't it be interpreted as "Some analysts say" , or does this question just indicate that GMAC is okay with having past perfect in combination with simple present? None of the explanations clarified that. So in any other questions that starts with "According to...." , do we presume it indicates past tense?


Dear Vishalcv
"According to some analysts" is a prepositional phrase that modifies nouns/verbs, in our case "the gains". It is not the working verb/present simple and hence cannot be considered as an addition to the sequence of tenses.

Take a look another instance,
According to U.S. agricultural statistics, the rate of honeybee colony collapse has slowed over the last several years...


Hello,
Thanks for the response.
But my question is why past perfect and not simple past in this case?

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We use the past perfect when an action is performed before something else in the past.

That something else could be another action:

    "By the time Tim cooked dinner, his children had been eating Pop-Tarts for hours."

In this case, he cooked dinner in the past, and before this past action, his children were eating treats, so the earlier action takes "had."

That something else could also be a designated time:

    "By 2006, Tim had alienated all of his neighbors."

Now, 2006 is in the past, and before 2006, Tim alienated his neighbors, so "alienated" takes "had."

(A) features a trickier instance of this concept. It mentions "the recession that many had feared earlier in the year." This implies that the folks fearing a recession stopped fearing this recession in the past.

In a sense, there's two implied timeframes here: 1) The moment it was clear a recession wouldn't happen and 2) The time when they feared the recession. Because #1 is in the past, and #2 occurred before #1, the action in #2 takes the past perfect.

That said, if the sentence had been written using the simple past, I would not have been comfortable treating it as a concrete error. Rather, I'd ask myself whether the given tense could be logically justified, and if it could, I'd move on to other issues.

I hope that clears things up!
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