OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONNote: This OE is for the edited version of the question. While I was splicing two questions, I erred.
Quote:
In 2013, many more serious automobile accidents were caused by drivers under the age of 20 than over it.
A) than
B) than caused
C) than were caused
D) than had been caused
E) than there were caused
This sentence appears short and perhaps even clear-cut.
On the other hand, after you memorize 13,035 idioms and 500 grammar rules (don't do either, please), this question might start to seem tricky.
This trickiness is
not helped when the, ahem, transcriber, who was trying to construct a good question for you, spliced two questions incorrectly.
[LARGE SWEAR WORD.]
Thank goodness for
JonShukhrat , because I haven't had time to check the boards.
• Which items are involved in this comparison?Are automobile accidents being compared to drivers?
Are drivers being compared to other drivers?
Or are drivers being compared to the ages of other drivers?
None of the above.
The sentence compares drivers under the age of 20 to drivers over the age of 20.• How do we know which items are being compared?
→ look at the word(s) to the right of
than.
→ we see
itLook at the LHS, before
than.
→ On the other side of the comparison only
one noun is singular.
→ the singular pronoun
it must refer to the age of 20
So we have
In 2013, many more serious automobile accidents were caused by drivers under the age of 20
than over
it [the age of 20].
If I were to flesh this sentence out, I would write:
In 2013, many more serious automobile accidents were caused by drivers under the age of 20 than were caused by drivers over the age of 20.The right hand element of the comparison is
the age of 20 ( =
it).
Hundreds of threads are dedicated to parallelism and ellipsis or substitution.
As
JonShukhrat notes, three official questions
[SPOILER ALERT] that are similar to this one can
A similar official question is
here, here, and
here Ron Purewal describes a couple of fairly similar question
here.
• Split #1: Obvious lack of parallelism: D and EThe RHS of D is
than there were caused over it.
→ on the LHS of
than in (D) we do not find any
there were structure to which this option would be parallel.
→ Nor could we find any; the underlined portion already contains the passive construction,
were caused . . . thanThe LHS does not use there were as does the RHS. Not parallel.
Option E,
than had been caused, lacks verb parallelism.
→ No reason exists to switch tenses to past perfect, the past of the past
→ The sentence is talking about two sets of data from the
same year; the two sets of crashes happened during the same time period.
The use of past perfect is not parallel with
were caused byEliminate D and E
• Split #2 - Perhaps less obvious lack of parallelism: B and CIn the end, we need to be comparing drivers under the age of 20 to drivers over the age of 20
→ Option B fails to make this comparison
(B):
In 2013, many more serious automobile accidents were caused by drivers under the age of 20 than caused over it.→ now the RHS is
caused over [the age of 20]→ the LHS and RHS are not parallel.
it = drivers over the age of 20 = drivers ABC
the pertinent part of the sentence: ...
more accidents were caused by drivers under the age of 20 than caused over the age of 20.I don't even know what "caused over the age of 20" means in the context of this sentence.
The accidents were caused
over the drivers?
Option B makes no sense.
(C) looks promising but fails
→ In 2013, many more serious automobile accidents were caused by drivers under the age of 20 than
were caused over it Back to our sentence:
In 2013, many more serious automobile accidents were caused by drivers under the age of 20 than were caused over [the age of 20].Because we have included the verb but skipped the "by drivers" part, again, it sounds as though the accidents are in an argument with one another about ("over") "the age of 20"?
Takeaway: Make comparisons analysis as simple as possible.
Option A, which seemed a bit odd at the time, maintains the integrity of the logic of the sentence.
The correct answer is A.
NotesI have corrected the error I created when I spliced two sentences together.
You should never use
as . . . than. (The playing field was somewhat level because every option contains
than.
COMMENTSShreyKapil08 , welcome to SC Butler.
Wanting to give you all a good question, I took parts of two different questions and put them together
Well handled, everyone.
Kudos to all.
JonShukhrat , thank you for helping—brilliantly, I might add.
Please add a quick analysis or POE at the top of your answer because I have bumped you to Best Community Reply.