OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
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Quote:
Investors in the project, one who is Russian, will take a part in more than 30 projects in the Federal Development Programme of the Kaliningrad Region, which will continue until 2010.
A) one who is Russian, will take a part in
B) one of them who is Russian, will take part in
C) and one of them who is Russian, will be taking part in
D) one of whom is Russian, will take part in
E) one of which is Russian, will take part in
• Major concept tested: subgroup modifiers
→ Although subgroup modifier SC questions are fairly rare, the subgroup modifier construction shows up frequently in RC.
For most native speakers, these turns of phrase make perfect sense.
Full disclosure: this construction is idiomatic.
Yes, there are grammar rules. See Notes, below.
Honestly, it's easier just to become familiar with the way that subgroup modifiers are constructed.
We want to talk about a part of a group.
In this sentence, we want to highlight the fact that one of the investors is Russian, presumably to explain how a bunch of foreigners got the chance to invest a crap ton of money in more than 30 projects . . . in Russia.
The subject of the main clause is a big group: "investors."
We want to talk about
part (in fact, about one member) of that whole group.
(Sidebar: subgroup modifiers can also be used when we want to
give more information about or to
clarify something about the whole group.)
To spotlight the Russian person in this group of investors, we need both to give detail about the member we are highlighting and to keep the group to which she belongs in the background picture.
In other words, in English, when we want to identify an individual from among a large group, we must refer to the group in order to modify it.
We use phrases such as
one of whom, a few of which, both of whom, neither of which, etc.
→ in the ____ OF _____ pattern, in the blanks, the first word refers to the part of the group. The second word refers to the whole group.
Rather than replicate a very similar explanation to a very similar question, I'll just direct you to it,
here..
• Meaning?
Split up the sentence.
→ The main clause: Investors in the project will take part in more than 30 projects in the Kaliningrad Region . . .
→ The extra information: One of those investors is Russian.
A momentary spotlight shines on one member of the group of investors.
In order to spotlight the subgroup (the one person), the group must both remain in the background and be referenced.
We need to know that this Russian person is
one of the investors.
The word "of" is key.
1) The noun part of the reference will almost always be in this form:
_____ of ______
[part] OF [reference to group]
2) If the pronoun that refers to the group is a relative pronoun (
who, whom, which), the modifier must contain a verb.
→
The wild mushrooms, a few of which contained poison, populated the forest floor.a few = reference to the part we want to identify
of which = reference to the whole group
wild mushroomsverb that must exist in the relative clause = contained
3) If the reference to the group is a regular pronoun (them), the modifier must be
(a) followed by an adjective that is often a participle (a verbING)
→
The wild mushrooms, some of them containing poison, populated the forest floor. OR
(b) preceded by a conjunction in order to form a second independent clause
→ The wild mushrooms in the forest looked edible, but some of them contained poison.
THE OPTIONS in a shortened sentenceQuote:
A) Investors in the project, one who is Russian, will take a part in more than 30 projects in the Kaliningrad Region, which will continue until 2010.
• this option does not follow the [part] OF [whole] pattern. It is therefore suspect.
•
one who is Russian fails to reference the group from among which this one investor is highlighted
→ the singular verb
is must refer to the numerical pronoun
one→ one . . . what? Yes, we know that the phrase is intended to refer to the group, but to a native ear, this construction sounds strange.
I stopped to re-read, wondering whether
one referred to
project because my tired brain was not focused on
who. (Who refers only to people.)
• the diction is a train wreck.
→ That is, in this sentence, it seems as if the author simply plunked
one who is Russian between the main subject and verb.
→ don't look for fancy appositives in order to justify keeping this answer.
On the GMAT, appositives are fairly straightforward and typically define a noun about which we know little.
The Don Juan Pond, a small and very shallow hypersaline lake located in Antarctica, is the saltiest body of water on earth.The phrase
a small and very shallow hypersaline lake located in Antarctica is an appositive of the
Don Juan Pond.
Official example,
SPOILER ALERT:The World Wildlife Fund has declared that global warming, a phenomenon that most scientists agree is caused by human beings' burning of fossil fuels, will create havoc among migratory birds by altering the environment in ways harmful to their habitats.
The words in blue type are an appositive that gives more information about global warming.
• Idiom error. When we participate in something en masse, we say that we "take part."
Take part = participate
Take a part = accept a role in a stage production
Correct: Every neighborhood child will take part in the community project.
Wrong: Every neighborhood child will take
a part in the community project.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) Investors in the project, one of them who is Russian, will take part in more than 30 projects in the Kaliningrad Region, which will continue until 2010.
• a verb or a participle (verbING) is missing
→
one of them is a subject modified by the relative clause
who is Russian→ so
who takes the verb
isthe word
investors takes the verb
will take part in-- no verb exists for the subject
one of them -- no adjective exists for the subject
one of them-- we have a stranded subject
• 99 percent of the time, in the "___ of ____" structure, the second word that refers to the group is
whom or
which ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) Investors in the project, and one of them who is Russian, will be taking part in more than 30 projects in the Kaliningrad Region, which will continue until 2010.
• as in (B), the subject
one of them who is Russian lacks a verb
•
and does not help. If anything, the word
and implies that this "one of them who is Russian" belongs to some vague "them" group and exists in addition to the group of investors already mentioned.
• not in ____ of _____ format
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) Investors in the project, one of whom is Russian, will take part in more than 30 projects in the Kaliningrad Region, which will continue until 2010.
• Bingo.
→
whom refers to the investors
→ OF lets us know that "one" is a part of that group
→
one refers to the singular part of that group; that person gets highlighted because she is Russian
KEEP
Quote:
E) Investors in the project, one of which is Russian, will take part in more than 30 projects in the Kaliningrad Region, which will continue until 2010.
•
which is not used for human beings.
If needed, compare D to E in order to remind yourself:
Which and
that refer to things, whereas
who and
whom refer to people.
ELIMINATE E
Notes→ subgroup modifiers revisited
Subgroup modifiers simply spotlight part of a larger group.
Subgroup modifiers are formed with
(1) a SAMAN "part" word + OF +
relative pronoun (SANAM = some, any, none, all, more/most)
most of whom, all of which, none of whom(2) a "quantity" word + OF + relative pronoun ("quantity" = each, either, neither, many, few, both, one, etc.)
neither of which, many of whom, each of which(3) a SAMAN or quantity word + OF + a "regular" pronoun such as
themall of them, both of them, neither of themThe formalistic guideline: Use SANAM/quantifier + OF + relative pronoun/pronoun
→ Examples of each combination
i) The children, all of whom like candy, are excited for Halloween. (SANAM + OF + relative pronoun)
ii) The rise of autocratically led countries, each of which was initiated by stoking fear and hatred, seems not to bother far too many Americans. (quantity word + OF+ relative pronoun)
iii) The manuscripts, a few of them deteriorating quickly, were sealed in a vault.
→ this kind of modification is fairly rare. Just recognize that
a few of them highlights a portion of the whole group of manuscripts and that
deteriorating quickly is an adjective that describes a few of the manuscripts.
→ Also recognize that if a regular pronoun is used, a verb is
not used in the modifying phrase.
→ On the other hand, if a relative pronoun is used, a verb
must be used in the modifying clause.
COMMENTSUjjawalD ,
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TheGriffin , welcome to SC Butler.
gkannampGVK , you wrote
Quote:
Similarly here - "one of whom is Russian" = > Here one of whom is the subject for is Russian?
What am i missing here?
Yes, whom is always an object pronoun. No exceptions.
You are wondering how
whom, an object pronoun, could be the
subject of a relative clause, I think?
Nice catch. No inconsistency exists, though.
Whom isn't the subject.
Depending upon whom you believe, the subject of that clause is either
ONE (singular)
or
ONE OF WHOM, in which
one is a "head noun" that controls the verb and is still singular
→ The word
one, singular, in the phrase
one of whom either
is or
anchors the subject.
→ in both cases, singular
one controls the verb.
Maybe
one of which, also a singular subject and similar to
one of whom, will make this case clearer.
Correct: I saw a basket of apples,
one of which
was extra big.
Wrong: I saw a basket of apples,
one of which
were extra big.
You might want to read
this post, here, about subgroup modifiers.
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