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When it ruled that the government could not track an individual by attaching a GPS device to a vehicle without a warrant, the Supreme Court curtailed many covert operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions.

A) operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions
"which" is not a right modifier to use here. It is the Supreme Court's action which has set new standards instead of the covert operations. So we need a verb modifier here.
But which is a noun modifier.
Drop.


B) operations, having set new standards for future intelligence missions
"having set" could be a verb modifier
However, the intended meaning is not clear/ changed.
The key message to deliver should be "something has set new standard for future intelligence missions".
But in option B, it has become a modifier.
Drop.


C) operations and set new standards for future intelligence missions
having set -> parallel (set could be past tense), meaning is ok, hold

D) operations and will set new standards for future intelligence missions
will set -> not parallel
Drop.


E) operations, new standards were set for future intelligence missions
"the Supreme Court curtailed many covert operations" and "new standards were set for future intelligence missions" are both complete clauses with S + V. It has comma split problem, which is not acceptable in GMAT.
Drop.
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When it ruled that the government could not track an individual by attaching a GPS device to a vehicle without a warrant, the Supreme Court curtailed many covert operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions.

A) operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions
B) operations, having set new standards for future intelligence missions
C) operations and set new standards for future intelligence missions
D) operations and will set new standards for future intelligence missions
E) operations, new standards were set for future intelligence missions


notes: court did something that did something else, curtailed and set => parallel.

a) operations set standards?
b) court curtailed while setting new standards?
d) 'and will' implies an action in the future, unintended
e) ops, new stands = fragment.

(C) maintains proper parallelism and verb tenses
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A) operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions -> operations didn't set new standards.

B) operations, having set new standards for future intelligence missions -> modifies the entire clause before and thus changes meaning.

C) operations and set new standards for future intelligence missions -> Correct

D) operations and will set new standards for future intelligence missions -> parallelism error

E) operations, new standards were set for future intelligence missions -> Run on sentence.
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When it ruled that the government could not track an individual by attaching a GPS device to a vehicle without a warrant, the Supreme Court curtailed many covert operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions.

A) operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions -- the word which set new standards doesnt bring out the meaning of what does which refer to ? operations ?--- doesnt make sense, hence eliminate this option.

B) operations, having set new standards for future intelligence missions --- Having set new standards, modifies the entire previous clause -- which is not required hence eliminate this option aswell.

C) operations and set new standards for future intelligence missions-- Perfect and makes it clear that the Supreme Court set new standards.. refers back to Main subject

D) operations and will set new standards for future intelligence missions --- Not parellel and in terms of tense the sentence is erroneous.

E) operations, new standards were set for future intelligence missions ---- Run on sentence -- two independent clauses connected only via "comma"
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When it ruled that the government could not track an individual by attaching a GPS device to a vehicle without a warrant, the Supreme Court curtailed many covert operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions.

A) operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions Incorrect

modifier error- which modifies operations, logically wrong

B) operations, having set new standards for future intelligence missions Incorrect

having uses wrong

C) operations and set new standards for future intelligence missions Correct

D) operations and will set new standards for future intelligence missions Incorrect

action is in past, so past form required

E) operations, new standards were set for future intelligence missions Incorrect

run-on sentence - two independent clause without ;
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Although C makes sense grammatically, it does not makes sense logically. When did supreme court start setting standard for future cover operation, its the job of other regulatory authorities.
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wali786 wrote:
Although C makes sense grammatically, it does not makes sense logically. When did supreme court start setting standard for future cover operation, its the job of other regulatory authorities.

wali786 , I amended my explanation in order to answer your question.
Please go to the post linked above and look for EDIT and then writing in blue typeface.
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When it ruled that the government could not track an individual by attaching a GPS device to a vehicle without a warrant, the Supreme Court curtailed many covert operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions.

A) operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions

The problem with this sentence is that 'which' modifies 'operations'. This will translate to the meaning that covert operations set the new standards for future intelligence missions. That's nonsense. The Supreme Court is the thing that set those standards.

B) operations, having set new standards for future intelligence missions

The past participle modifier 'having set' does not make sense in this sentence. It suggests that The Supreme court finished setting the new standard and then having done so they curtailed many covert operations. The act of curtailing operations (which happened in the past) should carry the same tense as the verb 'set' and be delineated with an 'and' (which C does exactly right).

C) operations and set new standards for future intelligence missions Correct

D) operations and will set new standards for future intelligence missions

Future tense makes no sense here.

E) operations, new standards were set for future intelligence missions


What is the link between this dependent clause and the prior independent clause? There is none.
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I chose B since I also got spooked with the meaning here. Imo the independent clause construction in C was a little awkward. SC did not set any new standards. Logically those were the result of curtailing old ways of ops.

Anyhow, I’ve seen the post of generis above. Would still say this is a bit tough on the meaning front.

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generis wrote:

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When it ruled that the government could not track an individual by attaching a GPS device to a vehicle without a warrant, the Supreme Court curtailed many covert operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions.

A) operations, which set new standards for future intelligence missions

B) operations, having set new standards for future intelligence missions

C) operations and set new standards for future intelligence missions

D) operations and will set new standards for future intelligence missions

E) operations, new standards were set for future intelligence missions


Option B would be correct if having set is replaced by setting.
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