OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
The original English cottage garden, which we admire today for its charm, calm, and cheerfulness, was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is, with the stunning leaves and flowers of various plants used as antidotes and antiseptics to ease physical and mental pain.
In the sentence, two nouns are compared: the original English cottage garden and a medieval pharmacy.
The English garden was similar to a medieval pharmacy because the garden contained healing plants that eased physical and mental pain; these "antidotes and antiseptics" were similar to what a person would find in a medieval pharmacy.
To compare a noun to a noun, use
like, never
as.
We use
as to compare verbs and clauses.
→ The easiest guideline to remember is to avoid using
like in the same phrase as a verb.
→
Like is a preposition that means
similar to.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is,
•
like is a preposition that should be followed by a noun or noun phrase, not by a verb (
like . . . is → wrong)
• improper comparison (we must compare like things to like things)
The noun
English cottage garden cannot be compared with
medieval pharmacy is.• nonsensical
→ a medieval pharmacy cannot be paired with the present tense
is.
The medieval period was a long time ago.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy,
• do not use
as to compare nouns
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy is,
• do not use
as to compare nouns
We can use
as with nouns when we mean
in the role of.
→ As your army commander, I am ordering you to run five miles each day.
• nonsensical
→ a medieval pharmacy cannot be paired with the present tense
is.
The medieval period was a long time ago.
• improper comparison (we must compare like things to like things)
The noun
English cottage garden cannot be compared with
medieval pharmacy is.ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy,
• I do not see any errors
•
like is used correctly to compare the nouns
English cottage garden and
medieval pharmacy.
KEEP
Quote:
E) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy did,
• do not use as to compare nouns
• bizarre comparison
→ The noun
English cottage garden cannot be compared with
a medieval pharmacy didELIMINATE E
The correct answer is D.
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