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The original English cottage garden, which we admire today for its charm, calm, and cheerfulness, was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is, with the stunning leaves and flowers of various plants used as antidotes and antiseptics to ease physical and mental pain.


A) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is,
Already verb 'was' is there. Comparison between English cottage garden and medieval pharmacy.

B) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy,
For proper comparison between English cottage garden and medieval pharmacy, usage of like is perfect.

C) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy is,
Error mentioned in A & B

D) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy,
No remarks

E) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy did,
Error mentioned in A & B

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The original English cottage garden, which we admire today for its charm, calm, and cheerfulness, was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is, with the stunning leaves and flowers of various plants used as antidotes and antiseptics to ease physical and mental pain.


A) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is,

B) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy,

C) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy is,

D) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy,

E) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy did,




A) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is,

Comparison is between nouns-introduction of verb is an error

B) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy,
As is used for verb/ action not to compare nouns

C) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy is,
As is used for verb/ action not to compare nouns

D) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy,
No error- existing error is eliminated

E) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy did
As is used for verb/ action not to compare nouns

D is the right answer
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IMO D

The original English cottage garden, which we admire today for its charm, calm, and cheerfulness, was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is, with the stunning leaves and flowers of various plants used as antidotes and antiseptics to ease physical and mental pain.

Like : used for comparison , followed by a noun
Such as : Comparison examples , followed by a clause/phrase

A) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is,

B) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy,

C) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy is,

D) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy,

E) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy did,
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The original English cottage garden, which we admire today for its charm, calm, and cheerfulness, was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is, with the stunning leaves and flowers of various plants used as antidotes and antiseptics to ease physical and mental pain.


A) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is, Incorrect

comparison error - garden compare with other thing of medieval pharmacy

B) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy, Incorrect

more as - wrong idioms

C) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy is, Incorrect

more as - wrong idioms
garden compare with other thing of medieval pharmacy

D) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy, Correct

E) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy did, Incorrect

more as - wrong idioms
garden compare with other thing of medieval pharmacy
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My answer is (D). It took me 44 seconds.

(A) "Like" is used as a preposition here. "Like" can also function as a verb ("I like the story"). But "like" cannot be a conjunction: it is always wrong to write "like a medieval pharmacy is".

(B) As discussed in minute detail in https://magoosh.com/gmat/gmat-sentence- ... ike-vs-as/, "like" should be used.

(C) See above.

(E) See above.
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The original English cottage garden, which we admire today for its charm, calm, and cheerfulness, was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is, with the stunning leaves and flowers of various plants used as antidotes and antiseptics to ease physical and mental pain.

Pre-thinking: Usage of 'was' vs 'is' - as the original English Garden is being addressed, 'was' is correct. Usage of 'Is' not required. Eliminate option A and C.
Usage of 'like' vs 'as' - Like is used for comparing noun-to-noun, in this case 'English cottage garden' to 'medieval pharmacy'. Eliminate B, C, E.

A) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is,

B) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy,

C) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy is,

D) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy,

E) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy did,

IMO answer should be Option D.
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The original English cottage garden, which we admire today for its charm, calm, and cheerfulness, was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is, with the stunning leaves and flowers of various plants used as antidotes and antiseptics to ease physical and mental pain.

A) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy is, -> we don't need "is". Incorrect.

B) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy, -> as is used for verbs or clauses comparison. Incorrect.

C) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy is,-> we don't need "is". Incorrect.

D) was actually more like a medieval pharmacy, -> It is better.

E) was actually more as a medieval pharmacy did,- > Same errors are A and B.

So, I think D. :)
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