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Re: As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometime [#permalink]
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As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometimes appearing before all the polling stations are closed, this results in their premature release influencing voters to change their ballot.


(A) As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometimes appearing before all the polling stations are closed, this results in their premature release influencing

Incorrect.

This answer choice is grammatically incorrect. Using two reason conjunctions / phrases (as and this results in) to express the relation between two parts of a sentence is redundant. Only one should be used:

As [exit polls are used to project, sometimes appearing before stations are closed,] [their premature release influences voters]

[exit polls are used to project, sometimes appearing before stations are closed,] ; this results in [their premature release influencing voters]



(B) Exit polls, used for projecting an election's winners and sometimes appearing before polling stations are closed, result in their premature release influencing

Incorrect.

This answer choice is illogical. Changing the conjugated verb are used into a modifier (used for ...) turns Exit polls into the subject of the verb result. This creates an illogical sentence:

Exit polls, ... , result in their (own?) premature release ...

It is the circumstance of appearing early that has a result, not the exit polls themselves.



(C) Used to project the winners of an election, exit polls sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed with the result that their premature release influences

This answer choice corrects the original redundancy by removing the reason conjunction As at the beginning of the sentence, keeping only one reason phrase (with the result).


(D) Exit polls used to project an election's winner sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed, with the result that their premature release influences

Incorrect.

This answer choice is illogical. Changing the conjugated verb are used into a modifier (used to ...) turns Exit polls into the subject of the verb result. This creates an illogical sentence:

Exit polls, ... , sometimes (a) appear ... and (b) result in their (own?) premature release ...

It is the circumstance of appearing early that has a result, not the exit polls themselves.



(E) As exit polls used to project an election's winner sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed, with the result that their premature release influences

Incorrect.

This answer choice is grammatically incorrect. This answer choice is comprised of two clauses connected by the conjunction As:

As [Jane is a doctor], [she could help the boy]

[Jane could help the boy], as [she is a doctor].

However, by changing this results to with the result, the second clause becomes a fragment, lacking both a subject (previously this) and a conjugated verb (previously results):

As [Exit polls .... appear] , [ with the result that ...]
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Re: As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometime [#permalink]
Dear AjiteshArun and AndrewN

Can you please show the error in my analysis, and why Option C triumphs over Option D?

nikhilongc wrote:
All other options except C and D have glaring errors.

But, among C and D, D shines out to be the best.


As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometimes appearing before all the polling stations are closed, this results in their premature release influencing voters to change their ballot.


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(A) As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometimes appearing before all the polling stations are closed, this results in their premature release influencing

Incorrect usage of "AS + Clause". Also, the usage of the demonstrative pronoun "this" is wrong as it should be followed by it's noun for it's intended meaning in the sentence.

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(B) Exit polls, used for projecting an election's winners and sometimes appearing before polling stations are closed, result in their premature release influencing

Exit polls (modifier) result in their premature release. Whose premature release. Just wrong construction.

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(C) Used to project the winners of an election, exit polls sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed with the result that their premature release influences

Used to project.. is a Verb-rd modifier which correctly modifies it's subject Exit polls after the comma, but the error lies in the later part of this sentence. Exit polls appear before polling stations are closed with the result that their release influences voters. What? This is just a mess. No comma before with, just a "Khichdi" of all sorts.
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(D) Exit polls used to project an election's winner sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed, with the result that their premature release influences

This seems to have no issues. Used to project.. is a verb-ed phrase modifying the preceding noun "Exit polls" correctly. Comma + with the result... correctly acts as an adverbial modifier. Hence, this is the correct choice.

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(E) As exit polls used to project an election's winner sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed, with the result that their premature release influences

Incorrect usage of "AS + Clause".
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Re: As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometime [#permalink]
Bunuel wrote:

OFFICIAL EXPLANATION



As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometimes appearing before all the polling stations are closed, this results in their premature release influencing voters to change their ballot.


(A) As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometimes appearing before all the polling stations are closed, this results in their premature release influencing

Incorrect.

This answer choice is grammatically incorrect. Using two reason conjunctions / phrases (as and this results in) to express the relation between two parts of a sentence is redundant. Only one should be used:

As [exit polls are used to project, sometimes appearing before stations are closed,] [their premature release influences voters]

[exit polls are used to project, sometimes appearing before stations are closed,] ; this results in [their premature release influencing voters]



(B) Exit polls, used for projecting an election's winners and sometimes appearing before polling stations are closed, result in their premature release influencing

Incorrect.

This answer choice is illogical. Changing the conjugated verb are used into a modifier (used for ...) turns Exit polls into the subject of the verb result. This creates an illogical sentence:

Exit polls, ... , result in their (own?) premature release ...

It is the circumstance of appearing early that has a result, not the exit polls themselves.



(C) Used to project the winners of an election, exit polls sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed with the result that their premature release influences

This answer choice corrects the original redundancy by removing the reason conjunction As at the beginning of the sentence, keeping only one reason phrase (with the result).


(D) Exit polls used to project an election's winner sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed, with the result that their premature release influences

Incorrect.

This answer choice is illogical. Changing the conjugated verb are used into a modifier (used to ...) turns Exit polls into the subject of the verb result. This creates an illogical sentence:

Exit polls, ... , sometimes (a) appear ... and (b) result in their (own?) premature release ...

It is the circumstance of appearing early that has a result, not the exit polls themselves.



(E) As exit polls used to project an election's winner sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed, with the result that their premature release influences

Incorrect.

This answer choice is grammatically incorrect. This answer choice is comprised of two clauses connected by the conjunction As:

As [Jane is a doctor], [she could help the boy]

[Jane could help the boy], as [she is a doctor].

However, by changing this results to with the result, the second clause becomes a fragment, lacking both a subject (previously this) and a conjugated verb (previously results):

As [Exit polls .... appear] , [ with the result that ...]


Bunuel there seems to be a correction in answer choice (D) pertaining to the OE. D in the question does not have conjunction "and" in it.
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Re: As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometime [#permalink]
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Bunuel wrote:

(D) Exit polls used to project an election's winner sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed, with the result that their premature release influences

Incorrect.

This answer choice is illogical. Changing the conjugated verb are used into a modifier (used to ...) turns Exit polls into the subject of the verb result.




The explanation does not make sense. "result" is a noun in answer D, not a verb.

What is the source?

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Re: As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometime [#permalink]
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Bunuel wrote:

(D) Exit polls used to project an election's winner sometimes appear before all the polling stations are closed, with the result that their premature release influences

Incorrect.

This answer choice is illogical. Changing the conjugated verb are used into a modifier (used to ...) turns Exit polls into the subject of the verb result.




The explanation does not make sense. "result" is a noun in answer D, not a verb.

What is the source?

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Yeah. Thank you, IanStewart, for having chimed in on the point. (I suppose this could be one of the 25 percent of questions you referred to in another recent post.) I was delaying my own response to nikhilongc because I did not know, exactly, how to explain that I was unsure how to interpret the OE for (D) specifically. I think you put a finger on one of the major issues quite nicely.

I seem to recall an official question that had something to do with voting that could have served as a template for this question. I remember a GMATNinja reply specifically that pointed out that the grammar of a certain choice made it seem as if some non-physical entity was casting votes, perhaps, but I was unable to locate the question. Ring any bells?

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Re: As exit polls are used to project the winners of an election, sometime [#permalink]
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Yeah. Thank you, IanStewart, for having chimed in on the point. (I suppose this could be one of the 25 percent of questions you referred to in another recent post.) I was delaying my own response to nikhilongc because I did not know, exactly, how to explain that I was unsure how to interpret the OE for (D) specifically. I think you put a finger on one of the major issues quite nicely.

I seem to recall an official question that had something to do with voting that could have served as a template for this question. I remember a GMATNinja reply specifically that pointed out that the grammar of a certain choice made it seem as if some non-physical entity was casting votes, perhaps, but I was unable to locate the question. Ring any bells?


When I post in the Verbal section here, it's most often to CR questions, so most of those 25 percent would have been CR, though this question might belong among those too. I can't even tell what the right answer here should be; answer C is missing a comma as written, while answer D changes the meaning to something that may not be intended (by restricting only to exit polls specifically used to predict winners) and also seems to have an ambiguous 'their'. The word choices in the sentence are strange anyway ("appear" especially seems to be the wrong word to use), and it's always hard to use meaning to decide on an answer when the words don't seem to have been chosen to convey a precise meaning.

I don't read enough SC threads that a particular SC reply is likely to be familiar, but hopefully GMATNinja will stop by and point to the relevant thread!

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