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Chicago MBA Essay 2 [#permalink] New post   21 Dec 2006, 19:49
Hi Paul,

Regarding to Chicago Essay2 below, can I talk about my passion about
community involvement (to help residents by examing their healths) and extracurricular ( such as achievement of gold medal in National Robot Contest)? Can I use two things to tell?

Essay 2: Choose one of the following questions. (500 word maximum)
If the admissions committee were to interview one of your closest colleagues, what aspect of your personal development would this person say is especially important for the admissions committee to know?
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Re: Chicago MBA Essay 2 [#permalink] New post   22 Dec 2006, 13:40
GMATcram wrote:
Hi Paul,

Regarding to Chicago Essay2 below, can I talk about my passion about
community involvement (to help residents by examing their healths) and extracurricular ( such as achievement of gold medal in National Robot Contest)? Can I use two things to tell?

Essay 2: Choose one of the following questions. (500 word maximum)
If the admissions committee were to interview one of your closest colleagues, what aspect of your personal development would this person say is especially important for the admissions committee to know?


GMATcram,

Only if thse two things are both related to the "aspect of personal development" that your colleagues would talk about. If you can find some aspect of your personality or skill set that those two events have in common then you could mention both as proof that you are evolving in that aspect or skill.
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[#permalink] New post   22 Dec 2006, 21:46
Hi Paul,

The connection of my extracurricular activities and achievement as a way to learn and to enjoy life. Is it too broad?
So I will tell about helping community and achievement of gold medal because I find three things make me stand out and it's hard to choose one. To learn and to enjoy life is "aspect fo development"??
Thanks for your help !
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[#permalink] New post   26 Dec 2006, 15:12
GMATcram wrote:
Hi Paul,

The connection of my extracurricular activities and achievement as a way to learn and to enjoy life. Is it too broad?
So I will tell about helping community and achievement of gold medal because I find three things make me stand out and it's hard to choose one. To learn and to enjoy life is "aspect fo development"??
Thanks for your help !


GMATcram,

That sounds a little forced to me, but I'm sure the adcoms have seen worse, so you could give that a try.
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