VIGHNESHKAMATH wrote:
johnycute wrote:
On Earth, among the surest indications of sunspot cycles are believed to be the rate that trees grow, as seen in the rings visible in the cross sections of their trunks.
(A) On Earth, among the surest indications of sunspot cycles are believed to be the rate that trees grow
(B) On Earth, among the surest indications of sunspot cycles are, it is believed, the rate of tree growth
(C) On Earth, the rate at which trees grow is believed to be among the surest indications of sunspot cycles
(D) Among the surest indications on Earth of sunspot cycles, believed to be the tree growth rate
(E) Among the surest indications on Earth of sunspot cycles is believed to be the rate at which trees grow
By definite grammer rules, I quickly eliminated Options A, B and D. Now coming to options C and E. I think the major issue of meaning. What C says is that ''the rate of tree growth'' is ''among the surest indications''. One cannot be equal to many. One can only be ''one among the many''. I cannot equate ''rate of tree growth'' with ''among''. It has to be one among them. Option C is equating one with many, which is incorrect.
Thus, Option C without any other definite meaning or grammar issues wins.
Thank You
Vighnesh
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VIGHNESHKAMATH,
We hope this finds you well.
To provide some clarity, here, the use of "among" is not incorrect in Option C, as it refers to the plural noun "indications", conveying that the rate at which trees grow is one of the many indications of sunspot cycles.
The error in Option C is that the phrase "as seen in the rings visible in the cross sections of their trunks" modifies "the surest indications of sunspot cycles", illogically implying that all of the surest indications of sunspot cycles are seen in the rings visible in the cross sections of the tree trunks.
Option E correctly modifies "the rate at which trees grow" with "as seen in the rings visible in the cross sections of their trunks", conveying the intended meaning - that the rate of tree growth is seen in the rings visible in the cross sections of the tree trunks.
We hope this helps.
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Experts' Global Team