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egmatMeaning AnalysisThe sentence presents some historical facts about Michelangelo. The sentence begins by stating a fact about Michelangelo’s early years as an artist. Michelangelo forged a statue in 1496. The sentence then provides additional information about how he forged it: he treated it with acid to make it look like an antique. He sold this statue for far more than its actual value.
Error AnalysisThe pronoun “he” logically refers to the noun “Michelangelo”. This is a grammatical error since this noun is not present in the sentence, which uses the possessive form “Michelangelo’s”.
Quote:
A) he forged a statue in 1496, treating it with acid to make it look like an antique
Incorrect: This choice has the error pointed out in the error analysis.
Quote:
B) his 1496 statue was a forgery, which was treated with acid to make it look like an antique
Incorrect:
1) The passive verb “was treated” does not convey the meaning that Michelangelo himself treated the statue with acid.
2) The verbs “was” and “sold” are not logically parallel, leading to a nonsensical meaning. The sentence now states that “his 1496 statue was a forgery… and sold it.” The statue clearly did not perform the action of selling itself.
Quote:
C) he forged a statue in 1496 that was treated with acid, making it look like an antique
Incorrect:
1) This choice has the same pronoun error as option A does.
2) Like Choice B, this choice also uses the passive verb “was treated”, leading to a meaning error.
Quote:
D) Michelangelo forged a statue in 1496, treating it with acid to make it look like an antique
Correct: This choice is the correct answer as it fixes the pronoun error of option A by using the noun “Michelangelo”.
Quote:
E) a statue treated with acid to make it look like an antique was forged in 1496
Incorrect:
1) This option does not make it clear that Michelangelo himself forged the statue.
2) It also repeats the parallelism error of Choice B since the verbs “was” and “sold” are not logically parallel to each other.