AWA Evaluation RequestDear
Sajjad1994 , request you to please grade my AWA attempt .
Thanks in advance !
Prompt :
“The producers of the forthcoming movie 3003 will be most likely to maximize their profits if they are willing to pay Robin Good several million dollars to star in it—even though that amount is far more than any other person involved with the movie will make. After all, Robin has in the past been paid a similar amount to work in several films that were very financially successful.”
Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument.....
My Response :
The argument claims that the forthcoming movie 3003 will be most likely to maximise their profits if they are willing to ay Robin Good several million dollars to star in it even though it is far more than any other person involved with the movie will make. State din this way, the argument manipulates facts and distorts the view of the situation and also leaves out several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. It also reveals examples of poor reasoning and leap of faith. The conclusion is based on assumptions for which there is no concrete evidence. Therefore the argument is very unconvincing and has several flaws.
To begin with, the argument readily assumes that simply paying Robin Good several millions to star in the movie will help maximise the profits of the movie. This is a stretch since there are several other factors that lead to the success of a movie. For instance, the storyline, the location, the co-stars and the marketing and promotional strategies employed to make the audience excited for the release of movie. Clearly, if paying Robin Good several millions to star in the movie was enough to guarantee maximum profit, all producers would be doing it and there would be no need of other co-actors or an enthralling storyline. In addition to this, the argument fails to consider the possibility of success of the movie against other actors. It is also quite possible that a budding actor, who would charge much less than Robin Good is more suited to the role and the producers failed to reach the right candidates. The argument would have been much clearer if the article explicitly stated that the acting ability of Robin Good is much better than that of his contemporaries and that he is better suited to the lead role in 3003 than any other actor in the industry.
Second, the author of the argument states that the reason behind the financial success of the movies in which Robin Good has starred, is because of the exorbitant amount of money paid to him. This claim is not corroborated as there are several factors that lead to the success. To illustrate,it is quite possible that the reason Robin Good was paid such a high amount was because the movie took a really long time to shoot or that it involved a great deal of dangerous action stunts that he should have been compensated fairly. It is also possible that the time at which those movies were shot and released, Robin Good was the most famous actor. The argument again fails to consider the possibility that the times have changed and there might be more famous actors, who might increase the chances of maximising profits.
Finally, the argument concludes that the forthcoming movie 3003 will be most likely to maximise their profits if they are willing to ay Robin Good several million dollars to star in it even though it is far more than any other person involved with the movie will make. This is difficult to digest as the argument fails to answer questions like what was the genre of those movies ? What caused their success ? Was it the storyline, the direction, the location, the time it was released, the marketing strategies used to promote the movie or only Robin Good? Without answers to these questions, theone is left with the impression that this is more wishful thinking than substantive evidence. Hence, this conclusion has no legs to stand on.
In summary, the argument has many flaws and is not convincing due to the reasons stated above. It could have been strengthened if it had evidence in the form of a market research, suggesting that that the movies in which Robin Good starred were financially successful because of the billions. of dollars paid to Robin Good. To evaluate the merit of any claim, it is imperative to have information on all the relevant factors. In this case, what which time period were RobiGood's successful movies released, what was the actual reason of financial success of his movies, what were the marketing strategies employed to promote the movie, what were the special effects used and also if there were other contributing factors like storyline, co-actors and director . Without this information, the argument is not compelling and remains open to debate.