Complex human traits
such as artistic talent or social skill are likely to be shaped by thousands, if not tens of thousands, of the 80,000 or so genes in the human genome.
(A) such as artistic talent or social skill are likely to be shaped by thousands, if not tens of thousands, of the 80,000 or so- Correct
(B) such as artistic talent or social skill are likely shaped by thousands, if not tens of thousands, of 80,000 or so of the- incorrect structure - 'thousands of 80,000 or so of the'
(C) such as artistic talent or social skill is likely to be shaped by thousands, if not tens of thousands, of 80,000 or so of the - subject-verb agreement issue - 'traits' is plural and thus needs the verb 'are'; incorrect structure - 'thousands of 80,000 or so of the'
(D) like artistic talent or social skill is likely to be shaped by thousands, if not tens of thousands, of the 80,000 or so- usage of like to present examples is incorrect; subject-verb agreement issue - 'traits' is plural and thus needs the verb 'are'
(E) like artistic talent or social skill are likely shaped by thousands, if not tens of thousands, of the 80,000 or so - usage of like to present examples is incorrect
Answer A
Avoid repeated-word constructions such as X THAT Y THAT Z or X OF Y OF Z.
in fact, if you see one of these constructions, you can pretty much trust that it's wrong. GMAT test writers will switch to lesser idioms, which they wouldn't normally use, in order to avoid these constructions.
1. Normally, you would say "evidence that suggests...".
however, in order to avoid "evidence THAT suggests THAT...", one official problem contains the idiom "evidence TO suggest THAT..."
2. Normally, you would say "it was said that..."
however, you don't want "...so prevalent THAT it was said THAT..."
so you can get around this by killing the second "that".
3. if you see something like "extent OF the shift OF light...", you can be 99.9% sure that it's incorrect.
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