nikhilongc wrote:
ayushx wrote:
The Federalist papers is a compilation of articles written by Alexander Hamilton and James Madison, as well as a few by John Jay, since each of them were advocates of the Constitution.
(A) since each of them were
(B) since they were each
(C) since all of them were
(D) each of which was
(E) because all of the men were
AjiteshArun BillyZ AndrewNSir,
There is a huge uproar on this question between the two answer choices C and E.
I also chose E but I find it hard to eliminate C. I get the pronoun ambiguity issue, but I do not think that it'd make a lot of sense to say that the articles were the advocates (as Brian suggests above).
Also, the usage of "Because" signifies "cause-and-effect". As per the meaning of the sentence. Won't it make more sense if we were to use "since" rather than "because"? Usage of because makes it seems like, they wrote the compilations because they were advocates. "Since" seems more precise. They wrote the compilations since they were advocates.
Could you share your two cents?
Thank you in advance.
To be honest,
nikhilongc, I think the question deserves another tag: "Poor Quality" (in addition to a clarification on the source). I do not say this lightly. But whether we use
because or
since, the passive voice of the first half of the sentence does not align well with the latter half—the meaning is skewed. The sentence
seems to want to express the following:
Because/Since X, Y, [and] Z were all advocates of the Constitution, they wrote a compilation of articles known as the Federalist papers.However, the passive voice, in combination with
as well as a few, places the explanatory clause in a tight spot. Is the emphasis on the authors or the
compilation? Consider:
1)
The Federalist papers is a compilation of articles written by [X, Y, and Z] because/since all of [the men] were advocates of the Constitution.2)
The Federalist papers is a compilation of articles written by Alexander Hamilton and James Madison, as well as a few [articles] by John Jay, because/since all of [the men] were advocates of the Constitution.If the information about John Jay just said
as well as John Jay, there would be less cause for confusion. But now we have broken up our list of authors with a second reference to articles, and that places more emphasis on the compilation than a well-written sentence would do. In general, we do not want to hit a phrase or clause in the middle of the sentence that reaches backward and forward at the same time. Notice how, once again, the active-voice sentence, along with a few cosmetic changes, would skirt the issue altogether, with a right-pointing logical progression of ideas throughout.
As for (C),
them is not ambiguous once we reach the noun
advocates. Articles can
advocate (verb) an idea, but they cannot be
advocates of one. Returning to my point from before, it is somewhat jarring, though, to hit
them, anticipating further information about
the articles, the closest plural noun (i.e.
a few [articles]), but then encountering information about the
authors instead. So no, ambiguity is not the issue, but lack of clarity is a problem. We should not have to go back and forth to qualify a pronoun. (E) is a safer option because it sidesteps the pronoun. The
because/since split is a red herring as far as the GMAT™ is concerned. The only time I have seen
since used incorrectly is when the sentence might also logically refer to a distinct point in time, as in,
Since he wrote the paper, [main clause]. Would the continuation provide information about a subsequent chain of events, or would we understand that the introductory clause was meant to provide an explanation? Now
that type of ambiguity would be grounds for elimination.
Anyway, those are my thoughts on the matter. I hope they prove of interest to you. (I always recommend sticking to official questions for Verbal practice.)
- Andrew