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Re: Recently implemented shift-work equations [#permalink]
Ahh...thanks! :)

Yes, nervousgmat, I chose A. :P

I tried to make everything parallel. "and have raised" seemed to be parallel with "have reduced" :oops:

thought hard between A and C tho. :wink:
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Re: Recently implemented shift-work equations [#permalink]
You also need a contrast in this sentence because

reduced W,X,and Y while raising Z

choice C is the only choice that establishes this contrast correctly
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Re: Recently implemented shift-work equations [#permalink]
Honestly, I feel a bit disadvantaged because I couldn't fathom this question was about BRINGING out the contrast. Grammatically, "have reduced" and "have raised" are perfectly parallel and alright.

I don't deny that C is a more elegant construction - once one has understood the guiding principle - The shift-work equations have reduced X, Y, and Z while raising productivity ..

Raising productivity is active Voice -- while establishes a sense of timing which essentially brings out the contrast -- during the time that fatigue etc were being reduced the productivity was being raised and so on...

I guess with a fair bit of practice alone can these intricacies be understood...

This question actually reminded of the "growth of rail roads led to the abolition of local times DETERMINED by (blah blah) and DIFFERING from city to city etc....

Basically involves establishing parallelism between Past Participle (have reduced) and present participle (raising) ....Not very intuitive but a very powerful concept.
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Re: Recently implemented shift-work equations [#permalink]
I picked A too..but your explanation is good...thanks..

nervousgmat wrote:
I think you are referring to the original sentence vs. choice C. Right?
At first, I thought that A was the right choice but when I came across C, I reread the original sentence and realized that C portrays the meaning of the sentence better. The meaning of the sentence is that all of the "bad" factors such as sleepiness and fatigue have decreased but AT THE SAME TIME the productivity went up. The only choice that expresses this meaning is "C". "A" merely lists all the factors.
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Re: Recently implemented shift-work equations [#permalink]
C.

Parallel parts:
...have reduced noun, noun phrase, and noun phrase while raising
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Re: Recently implemented shift-work equations [#permalink]
With all these explanations, i am a bit confused between A & C.

What is OA pls..?
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Re: Recently implemented shift-work equations [#permalink]
A,B, and D all make it sound like the equation was the cause of the improved efficiency.
E 'was lowered' is redundant since 'reduced' has already been mentioned earlier in the sentence.

C is best.



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