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I think that if you create a post for each question, it will be easier to collect the explanations. Just a thought ...
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The problem is that here is no opportunity to answer concrete post and put it exactly after it (only one by one).(((
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That the new managing editor rose from the publications soft news sections to a leadership position is more of a landmark in the industry than her being a woman.
A. her being a woman (I chose this option)
B. being a woman is
C. her womanhood
D. that she was a woman
E. that she is a woman (correct one)


you're not comparing landmark to being a woman.

The sentence reads

That the new managing editor rose from the publications soft news sections to a leadership position is more of a landmark in the industry than that she is a woman [is a landmark in the industry]

So the parallelism is between the action and she is a woman. These two are the landmarks in the industry.
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ans for 1):- that is reqd after than for llism... equivalence is to be between 'That the new managing editor rose' and 'that she is a woman'

5) point here is that 'who is initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program', it is california and not ' per capita consumption of cigarettes in California' therefore, only D and E meet the criterion.. however E in saying 'annual per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs per person to about 60' uses per person unnecessary when per capita onveys the msg

10) only B gives llism 'not because.....but because.....' and stronger is right asit llels more likely



11) again llism ' having, for example been prescribed a drug as a dosage too low to be effective or having been taken off a drug too soon.' having, for example........ having been...... b is not correct for the above mentioned reason and also because being does not convey what having been conveys ie one incident is over and this has led to patient not responding later on..
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21) here 'that impose' is better than 'imposing' as 'that' relates to the word immediately preceding it therefore A and B
are out.... now there are 3 activities a)impose stricter limits on medical services b) require doctors to see more patients, and c)spend less time with each.in these a and b are independent and c is dependent on b....
C makes all a ,b ,c independent...... E makes b and c dependent on a..
only D makes a and b are independent and c dependent on b.. therefore D is the ans
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23.Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(A) Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(B) Added to the increase in hourly wages which had been requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(C) The railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits added to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July. (my)
(D) In addition to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(E) In addition to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits. (Right)

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23) A and B have a phrase'Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July' wrongly modifying the rail road employees....
C corrects it but introduces another error in 'the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July'... if u look carefully it is the increase which is requested therefore ' increase in hourly wages that was requested' may have been correct but then 'that' wrongly relates to 'hourly wages'...
D and E correct modifier by changing phrase to clause however D repeats the mistake 'that were' as in C..
therefore E is the ans
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26.A majority of the international journalists surveyed view nuclear power stations as unsafe at present but that they will, or could, be made sufficiently safe in the future.
(A) that they will, or could,
(B) that they would, or could, (my)
(C) they will be or could
(D) think that they will be or could (right one)
(E) think the power stations would or could

I thought that the it is WOULD OR COULD, because it is subjunctive. The only problem in B is “,” before or.
Why D?
26) A,B and C are wrong because 'view ...... but think that......,' is must ,all 3 omit think ..
in E think is put but that is omitted...
only D is ok however it 'also' is not w/o fault as they could refer to 'A majority of the international journalists' or 'nuclear power stations' it would have been better if they was replaced with the power stations .
anyone who does not agree pl let me know.....
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IMO E.

But I don't think it is because of parallelism. Because the parallelism, if it was there, has to be with 'landmark' and not with the preceding part of the sentence.
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hello guys?
Does anyone have ideas concerning the rest questions?
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54.There are hopeful signs that we are shifting away from our heavy reliance on fosil fuels; more than ten times as much energy is generated through wind power now than it was in 1990.
A generated through wind power now than it was
B. generated through wind power now as it was (mine)
C. generated through wind power now as was the case (right one)
D. now generated through wind power as it was
E. now generated through wind power than was the case

I think C is right because in B the pronoun 'it' is wrong, the comparison here is between how much energy was generated to how many times is generated now.
so C is correct

also "as much as" is the correct idiom
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50.At the time of the Mexican agrarian revolution, the most radical faction, that of Zapata and his followers, proposed a return to communal ownership of land, to what had been a pre-Columbian form of ownership respected by the Spaniards.
(A) land, to what had been a pre-Columbian form of ownership respected by the Spaniards (right)
(B) land, a form of ownership of the pre-Columbians and respected by the Spaniards
(C) land, respected by the Spaniards and a pre-Columbian form of ownership
(D) land in which a pre-Columbian form of ownership was respected by the Spaniards
(E) land that had been a pre-Columbian form of ownership respected by the Spaniards (my wrong)


in E "that" is modifying land

A is right because proposed return to ----, to what had ----------
here what = "communal ownership of land"

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54.There are hopeful signs that we are shifting away from our heavy reliance on fosil fuels; more than ten times as much energy is generated through wind power now than it was in 1990.
A generated through wind power now than it was
B. generated through wind power now as it was (mine)
C. generated through wind power now as was the case (right one)
D. now generated through wind power as it was
E. now generated through wind power than was the case

I think C is right because in B the pronoun 'it' is wrong, the comparison here is between how much energy was generated to how many times is generated now.
so C is correct

also "as much as" is the correct idiom


))) Sorry, but why is IT wrong? cann't it replace the word energy? to make the followingas much energy is generated as it was in 1990
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54.There are hopeful signs that we are shifting away from our heavy reliance on fosil fuels; more than ten times as much energy is generated through wind power now than it was in 1990.
A generated through wind power now than it was
B. generated through wind power now as it was (mine)
C. generated through wind power now as was the case (right one)
D. now generated through wind power as it was
E. now generated through wind power than was the case

I think C is right because in B the pronoun 'it' is wrong, the comparison here is between how much energy was generated to how many times is generated now.
so C is correct

also "as much as" is the correct idiom


))) Sorry, but why is IT wrong? cann't it replace the word energy? to make the followingas much energy is generated as it was in 1990


As I see it, we are comparing "energy generated" between two different time periods and 'it' can be used for nouns and here we have a phrase "energy generated" to be compared.

than "it" compares "energy generated" to "energy" . <-- WRONG

Also "it" is following "power" and not energy , so it is referring to power and not energy... <-- WRONG pronoun reference (even if we assume that it shud refer to energy)
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so i guess "case" should refer to the "energy generated" instead of "it" alone?
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Are you sure the correct answer for #21 is D????
Is there any chance that it could be E??
" that impose stricter limits on medical services, requiring doctors to see more patients and spending"

"requiring doctors to see more patients and spending" is a present-participial phrase in parallel structure to modify "stricter limits on medical services"

Choice D violates parallelism
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That the new managing editor rose from the publications soft news sections to a leadership position is more of a landmark in the industry than her being a woman.

A. her being a woman
B. being a woman is
C. her womanhood
D. that she was a woman
E. that she is a woman
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The answer is E.

the question could be simplify in the following way:

X is more Z than Y.

where X = That the new managing editor rose from the publications soft news sections to a leadership position.
Z (adj.) = a landmark in the industry.
and Y = that she is a woman. the only option which is parallel to X and in the right tense.
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60.The computer software being designed for a project studying Native American access to higher education will not only meet the needs of that study, but also has the versatility and power of facilitating similar research endeavors.
(A) but also has the versatility and power of facilitating (mine)
(B) but also have the versatility and power to facilitate (right)
(C) but it also has the versatility and power to facilitate
(D) and also have the versatility and power of facilitating
(E) and it also has such versatility and power that it can facilitate

not only X but also Y parallelism tested with S-V agreement. As X (meet) is plural, in Y also plural form should come. 'it' is unnecessary.

B has correct S-V agreement
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