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186. Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of
to confine them to a hotel.
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to

I think this suggests that the members of the jury confine themselves to a hotel, a fact that does not make any sense
notice that the parallelism is between go and confine so the sentence reads

members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of [members of the jury] to confine them to a hotel

(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to

I think you need passive voice here in confined to suggest that the members are confined. The sentence reads

a motion that would have allowed members of the jury to confined to ...

(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining
them in

I'm not sure whether confine in is idiomatic. anyway to go home is not parallel to confining

(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in

note parallel structures to go home rather confinement

(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to

This answer choice maintains parallelism and properly uses passive voice so that the members are confined to a hotel.
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I think the hardest part of this question is the parallelism. I initially start the parallelism with (to go home...). I guess the trick is to look how the second half starts and work backwards to see where the first one should start.

Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to
go home at the end of each day
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Two idioms at play here: motion to... and rather than...

That leaves E.
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OA is E

OE:

In this sentence, members of the jury are presented with two options: they may (1) go home or (2) be confined to a hotel. The rejected motion would have allowed them to do the first rather than [to] suffer the second.
Members of the jury must be the logical subject of both options, and both must be expressed in parallel form, that is, as infinitive clauses. E, the best choice, observes these requirements. In A and C, the phrase members
of the jury is not the logical subject of the second option, to confine them or confining them, since jury members are not doing the confining. In B and D, confined and confinement are not infinitives and thus do not parallel to go in the first option.
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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of
to confine them to a hotel.
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining
them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to


E for several reasons.
An easy way to start is the use of rather/instead of. Rather is the obvious choice. This leaves D,E. E is correct (parallel structure, concise) for many reasons, while D is awkward and wordy.
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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining
them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to

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A - Wrong - Doesn't have parallel structure - X instead of Y. X - Members..To go home vs To confine them -
B - Wrong - no need of would . Also - this isn't parallel with comparative structure at the end
C - Wrong - under which - awkward
D - Wrong - no need of would . Also - this isn't parallel with comparative structure at the end
E - Right - Concise, parallel ( X rather than Y) - Members... To go home vs (to) be confined to hotel
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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.

(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which memebrs of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to


can someone please explain A vs E??

There are lot of old posts discussing this question, but I think our community has evolved a lot since then :) ...
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A - uses "instead of" which is used when one thing is replaced with a different one.

E - uses "rather than" which is used to show preference.
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I choose E based in Subjunctive Mood , apart from idiom... Experts please correct me if it does not comes under Subjunctive Mood and i did wrong analyses , because in whole discussion no body mentioned anything about the Subjunctive Mood ...
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I choose E based in Subjunctive Mood , apart from idiom... Experts please correct me if it does not comes under Subjunctive Mood and i did wrong analyses , because in whole discussion no body mentioned anything about the Subjunctive Mood ...
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No, there is no subjunctive mood in option E - you are probably misguided because of "be confined". Here "be confimed" is not a verb in subjunctive mood. It is an infinitive in parallel with "go home" - "to" is outside the parrallel structure (X rather than Y) and hence covers both "go home" and "be confined".

..allowed memebers of the jury to (go home) rather than (be confined). X = "go home", Y = "be confined".
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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.




IN GMAT RATHER THAN USED BETWEEN TWO VERBS(ACTIONS, PHRASES), INSTEAD OF USED BETWEEN TWO NOUNS
so A,B and C can be eliminated .
Between D and E rather than confined to is better than confined in .






(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to -
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which memebrs of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
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aurobindomahanty wrote:
IN GMAT RATHER THAN USED BETWEEN TWO VERBS(ACTIONS, PHRASES), INSTEAD OF USED BETWEEN TWO NOUNS

Indeed, instead of is a preposition (after all, it ends with preposition of) and hence, must be followed by a Noun/Pronoun.

The tricky thing to remember is that Rather than is actually quite flexible and can also be followed by Noun.

For example, in the following sentence, rather than is followed by a noun (a type):

Recently discovered fossil remains strongly suggest that the Australian egg-laying mammals of today are a branch of the main stem of mammalian evolution rather than a type that developed independently from a common ancestor of mammals more than 220 million years ago.

p.s. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana discusses Instead of Vs Rather than, its application and examples in significant detail. If someone is interested, PM me your email-id; I can mail the corresponding section.
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Why OPtion "B" is wrong
here we are talking of possibility in past [Would conditional ] should be there
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Why OPtion "B" is wrong

Hi Akshay, easy way to see option B, would be through the lens of parallelism.

Clearly the structure is:

...that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to a hotel.

...that would have allowed members of the jury to <do something> instead of <something else>

So, we can deconstruct the sentence as:

...that would have allowed members of the jury to X instead of Y

After doing the above X-Y deconstruct, it is clear that the portion outside this X-Y deconstruct is:

...that would have allowed members of the jury to

Since this portion is outside this X-Y deconstruct, this portion is common to the X-Y deconstruct. This means that this common portion should individually make sense with X and with Y as well.

Let's see if that is happening in B:

i) Common portion with X:

...that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day
- Seems fine.

ii) Common portion with Y:

...that would have allowed members of the jury to confined to a hotel.
- This is obviously incorrect. Hence, option B is incorrect.

At the very least, it should have been:
...that would have allowed members of the jury to be confined to a hotel.

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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.

(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to

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E says:
'Judge Bonham denied a motion for a PURPOSE'. Is it really? I did not find the actual feelings of the correct version!
The meaning what comes to my mind is:
Judge Bonham denied a motion THAT allows members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to a hotel.
Am I missing anything to comprehend the meaning of correct choice E, experts?
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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.

(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to

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E says:
'Judge Bonham denied a motion for a PURPOSE'. Is it really? I did not find the actual feelings of the correct version!
The meaning what comes to my mind is:
Judge Bonham denied a motion THAT allows members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to a hotel.
Am I missing anything to comprehend the meaning of correct choice E, experts?

Hello, TheUltimateWinner. I understand why you are confused about this one. The word motion, in this sense, is more like vote (or even move, believe it or not). You would say, I cast a vote to [do something], or, I make a motion to [do something], or, I move to [do something]. Thus, a judge denying a motion to allow members [to do something] is perfectly idiomatic. It is not a common idiom, but a native speaker would most likely be familiar with it, given the popularity of courtroom reality TV shows and film dramas. To be clear, this to does not serve in the same capacity as in order to. In fact, that would be the opposite of what the sentence is intended to convey: the judge denied a motion that would have allowed members of the jury to go home, rather than denying a motion so that members of the jury could go home. I know it is confusing. As I said before, this is not too common an idiom, so I would just add it to a list you might be keeping on the side and, should it pop up again (though I doubt it), be ready to take it on.

I hope that helps. I have wanted to answer this question since I saw it yesterday, but, you know, work got in the way.

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Hi GMATNinja,

As you said there are 25000 idioms, so dropping the idea of idiom difference in this question, can you please explain the meaning difference between A and E

A- Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.

In A- "to allow" could be parallel to "to confine", also them would be correctly referring to "members of the jury"
It is parallel, perfectly conveys the meaning (leaving the idiom issue aside).

In E- I am also not able to get what exactly is parallel. What is parallel to "be confined".
Also in E, "be confined" should refer to past participle, but why it should refer to past participle? According to the sentence, only the jury decision is in the past.

Please help me with the above queries. The meaning approach could be the best if you could explain the difference between these two sentences and how E contains parallelism.

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